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短文改错Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,Ihashadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogresses.Thereisnodoubtwhetherteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrengrowth.Notonlyteacherspassonknowledgetochildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethem.Comparingwithotherjobs,teachingisharderandthepayislower.Buttome,howgreatfunitistobewithchildren!TheymakemetofeelyoungforeverbecauseI’llstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.短文改错Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,Ihashadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogresses.Thereisnodoubtwhetherteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrengrowth.1.hashave4.childrenchildren’s2.progressesprogress3.whetherthatNotonlyteacherspassonknowledgetochildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethem.Comparingwithotherjobs,teachingisharderandthepayislower.Buttome,howgreatfunitistobewithchildren!TheymakemetofeelyoungforeverbecauseI’llstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.5.only∧do8.howwhat6.themthemselves7.ComparingCompared9.to＼理由陈述类（Ⅰ）•第一段：交代写作背景（翻译题干中的某些句子）Ilearnedfrom…that…（我从…中了解到…）•第二段：陈述个人理由（有要点根据要点写；没有要点的自己想）Firstofall/Atfirst,…（第一，）What’smore,..（其次,…）Thirdly,…（第三,…）Atlast,（最后,…）•第三段：总结Inaword,Ihopethat…andI’mlookingforwardto…assoonaspossible.（如是写信，则要。）•假设你是李华。正在你校就读的美国交换生Tom在校园网上发帖，想找一个人作为假期游览北京的导游。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表明意愿；2.说明理由。第二段：说明理由。①我住在北京，熟悉本地。(befamiliarwithBeijing/knowBeijingverywell.）②我对北京的历史文化感兴趣，之前去过很多景点。(IaminterestedinthehistoryandcultureofBeijing…touristspots….③我英语好，可以详细地给你介绍景点。(IhavesuchgoodspokenEnglishthatIcanintroducethetouristattractionsindetailsinEnglishtoyou.)末段：总结Ihopethat…andI’mlookingforwardtoyourcomingassoonaspossible.必修四：阶段质量评估（三）理由/观点陈述类（Ⅱ）•第一段：交代写作背景（社会现象）Recentlytherehasbeenaheateddiscussionabouthowto…(最近，人们就如何…展开了热烈的讨论。)或者此句子：Whenitcomestothecasethat…（当提到这种情况…的时候）People’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.关于……人们的观点各不相同。第二段：陈述别人观点和自己的观点Somebelievethat…,othersholdanideathat…一些人认为…，另一些人认为…AsfarasIamconcerned/Personallyspeaking,…（就我个人而言…）第三段：总结Allinall,itisimportant/necessaryfor…todo…最近，人们就如何减轻高中生学习压力这一问题展开了热烈的讨论。一些人认为看偶像剧能减轻压力，另一些人认为运动能减轻学习压力。那你认为如何才能缓解学习压力呢？Idoldrama偶像剧relieve/ease缓解learningpressure学习压力