【三维设计】2014年高考英语二轮复习课件： 书面表达 衔接巧、过渡妙,阅卷老师无可挑――创满分(1

衔接巧、过渡妙，阅卷老师无可挑——创满分第五讲审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。一、“启”——创造良好开端常用表达“启”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)：first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,atpresent,lately,currently等。常用表达“启”的句型：Itisoftensaidthat...Astheproverbsays...Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itisclear/obviousthat...Manypeopleoftenask...FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(2013·陕西高考)It'softensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays,nopains,nogains.(北京高考)二、“承”——顺势承上启下常用表达“承”的过渡词语和词组：secondly,inaddition,besides,moreover,whatismore,whatisworse,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,atthesametime,nodoubt等。常用表达“承”的句型：Itistruethat...Everybodyknowsthat...Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Noonecandenythat...Thereasonwhy...isthat...Thereisnodoubtthat...Totake...forexample(instance)...Whatismoreseriousisthat...Inaddition,IwillgoonatriptoSichuan,wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.(2013·山东高考)Meanwhile,Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.(2013·江苏高考)Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.(2013·福建高考)三、“转”——巧妙转折过渡常用表达“转”的过渡词语和词组：but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inanycase,or,orelse,while,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof,instead等。常用表达“转”的句型：Everycoinhastwosides.Butfor...,Iwouldnever...Anotherexampleisthat...Takingeverythingintoconsideration...That'swhyIfeelthat...Therewillbemanychallengesahead,butIhaveconfidencethatI'lltakeontheburden.(2013·天津高考)However,itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.(2013·北京高考)四、“合”——完美结束全文常用表达“合”的过渡词语和词组：inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary,asaresult,onthewhole等。常用表达“合”的句型：somethingmustbedoneto...;itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom...that...;inmyopinion;wecandrawtheconclusionthat...;itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows等。Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows:it'shightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion,peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.(2013·北京高考)使用恰当的过渡词完成下面短文(2013·北京高考)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。YouarediscussingthefollowingpicturewithyourEnglishfriendJim.Nowyouaretellinghimhowyouunderstandthepictureandwhatmakesyouthinkso.Accordingtothepicture,wecanseeamanfishing.Hedreamstocatchabigfish,butitturnsoutthathegetssosmallafishthathefeelsverydisappointed.①weallknowthereisalongdistancebetweendreamandreality.Asisalsoknowntousall,itisawonderfulthingtohaveadream.②therealityisnotsimplerthanwhatwethink.③thisquestion,whatshouldwedoandhowwillwesortitout?Infact,However,Asfor④weshouldtakerightattitudetothereality.⑤weshouldconnectourdreamswiththerealityeffectively.⑥__________________________________wemustkeepourfeetfirmlyontheground.⑦wemustbravelyfacethedistancebetweendreamandrealitysothatwecangetabetterfuture.Firstly,Secondly,Lastly/Lastbutnotleast,Thirdly/Inaword,Ⅰ.完成句子1．(常言道),practicemakesperfect.2．(此外，况且),weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.3．(我最想出国学习的原因是)IcanlearnEnglishbetterinanEnglish­speakingcountry.4．(况且，而且),Icanexperiencedifferentculturesandwidenmyknowledge.AsafamoussayinggoesBesidesThemostimportantreasonwhyIwanttostudyabroadisthatWhat'smore5．(正如我们在图画上看到的那样),thegirlissoworriedaboutthecomingexamthatshefeelsdizzy,sickevensuffersfrominsomniaandmentalillness.6．(首先),makesureyouarrangeenoughtimetofullyprepareforeachtest.(其次),thereisnoneedtofeelnervouswhenyouhavesomebadfeelings.(最后但同等重要的是),changeyourattitudeandkeepacalmstateofmind.AswecanseeinthepictureFirstlySecondlyLastbutnotleast7．Obviously,wecan(得出结论)goodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.8．Obviously,(该是……的时候了)wetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.drawtheconclusionthatitishightimethatⅡ.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空second，asaresult，despite，ontheonehand，what'sworse，inaword，ontheotherhandAsanewwayofshopping,onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.①onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.Insteadofsearchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.②itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon'thavetospendalotOntheonehand,Second,oftimegoingtoshops.Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.③onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.④wecanbecheatedeasily.⑤wecannotseethethingsindetail.Ontheotherhand,Asaresult,What'sworse,⑥⑦thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.Inaword,despite