浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写(30)含答案解析

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写（30）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“IfmumfindsoutthatI'mgoingtothebeach,I'llbeinbigtrouble.”Isaidtomyselfsoftlyinalowvoice.Iwentdownstairsslowlyandtriedtowalkcasuallyintothekitchen.AsIwaswalkingtowardsthebackdoor,mumaskedwithoutlookingupfromher“dish-washing”,“Whereareyougoing?”Iansweredbackwithouthesitation,“Iamgoingtothegardentoplay.”AfterIgotoutofthekitchen,Ibreathedasignofrelief.Myplanhadworkedoutfinesofar.Iclimbedthefenceandjumpedontothemuddyfieldnexttomyhouseandstartedrunningtowardsthebusstopattopspeed,AfterhalfanhourIwasatthebeachscanningthecrowdformyfriends,JimmyandBobby.Twoyoungmenwereracinginthecanoes(独木舟).Afterawhile,Isawthemnearacoconuttree.Irantowardsthemandgotintomyswimmingtrunk(游泳裤).Foraboutanhour,weplayedvolleyballhappily.Suddenly,Bobbyhittheballtoohardandtheballfellintothesea.JustasBobbywasgoingtopickuptheball,thetidecameinandcarriedtheballfurtherandfurtherawayfromtheshore.IwantedtoshowoffmyswimmingskillssoIdeclaredtohelpgettheballforthem.Idivedintothewaterandstartedswimmingatasteadypace.Afterswimmingforabouttenminutes,IbecametiredbutwhenIsawthattheballwasonlyafewfeetawayfromme,Iputinanextraburstofspeed.However,justasIwasgoingtogettheball,averystrongcurrentswepttheballfurtherawayfromme.Atthatmoment,astringofweed（海草）tangled(缠绕)upwithmyfeetandIcouldnotswimproperly.Istruggledtokeepafloatbutitwasnouse.“IfIhadlistenedtomyparents,thiswouldneverhavehappened,”Ithoughtsilently.Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingForaminuteortwo,Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergiveup.ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke.Iswambacktothesurfacetotakeadeepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother.Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomensawmeandracedtowardsme.Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious.Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatIrealizedthatIwasinahospital.JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentmetothehospital.Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.MyparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured.Iwillneverforgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.【解析】【分析】前文提要：我挣扎着保持漂浮，但没有用。“如果我听了我父母的话，这是永远不会发生的，”我默默地想。【详解】（1）第一段所给首句：Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.这是一句转折句，接下来应该是作者不放弃，勇敢地游出水面，求救，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。（2）第二段首句：WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.这一句应该是转折句，既然作者醒来，说明他已经被救，接下来应该是作者躺在医院里，一定是通知了他的家人，父母来后一定会生气的，父母会责备他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高兴他没有受到严重的伤害。作者永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。他也不想再炫耀了。【标题】浙江省宁波市北仑中学2018-2019学年高二上学期期初返校考试英语试题【结束】