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1MBA作文讲座1.幅:150/100字达不到字数要求的,要酌情扣1-52.布局:3-5段式只写一段为0-4分,只写两段0-9分3.评分标准(5个模块评分,平均半分钟一份卷)※结构、内容、语言:3段,长短句结合,一定难度的词汇和短语,少词汇语法错误※卷面书写工整:心情一好分数就不会低※篇幅一定要不长不短2分-条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。(即表达得一塌糊涂)5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。(即表达得糊里糊涂)8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。(即表达得勉勉强强)11分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。(即表达得清清楚楚)14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较2好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(即表达得漂漂亮亮)例如:1)有人认为机会是极少的2)有人认为机会人人都有3)我的看法Sample1Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinkopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.AccordingtomylifeexperimentandknowledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,3mayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomenareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyonevacantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwomen.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogetthejobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone.SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.该篇文章条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎,几乎没有正确的句子,得2分。Sample2Peoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesforthemintheworld,whileothersholdthateverybodywillhavesomekindofchancesinhisorherlife.AsfarasI4amconcerned,Iamfor/preferthelatter.Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon'thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakechances.Maybetheyfailtorecognizeopportunitiesevenwhentheyareinfrontofthem.However,wisemencanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforchancestoappear.……Sowecanconcludethateverybodyhastheopportunitytosucceed,butitisuptohimselftotakeit.该篇文章切题,思想表达清楚,文章结构合理,行文连贯,符合逻辑,属于14分档作文。4.行文要求1)切题:统一,无不相关细节内容2)条理清楚:连贯、和谐-注意衔接语的使用3)简洁:句子要简练54)准确:减少语法错误,符合英语的表达习惯,避免汉语式英语…Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,…/AsIseeit,…thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,because…Inthefirstplace…Forinstance…Inthesecondplace…Evenmoreimportantisthefactthat…/what’more/moreoverInconclusion…inabrief※文章的内容不重要!重要的是框架(背)!习惯先看每段的首句+文章末句,再浏览全文挑错字和语法错误,所以要写成3段,每段首句为中心句,结尾再总结一下,这样老师只看3~4句话就可以给出分数了,节省时间自然分数就高了。※中心句的写法模式性,一般背20句,不管出什么题都能从中挑出3~4句用上,各种题型背一些。※拼写不大确定的词一定不要写!判卷老师最强的能力就是找错字,而且这是他判断你写作能力的重要尺度!当你文章中出现了3个以上的拼写错误的时候,可以说你已经missionfail了。6※作文中出现一些闪光词汇和句型(比如成语chancesprefertoreadyones,allroadsleadtoRoma等,多被动句,插入语等,句式变化多样),对分数的提高有很大帮助的!建议背一些模块长句。如“重要”一词,用important太一般了,如果用vital,critical,essential,crucial就能使老师眼前一亮!moreandmore这个词是一定不要用,可以用Agrowingnumberofsth或Anincreasingnumberofsth,或说…isontherise。Attachimportanceto词汇和句式的转化很重要,你背的中心句一定要能体现这两点,如问题解决型文章末段首句可以这样写Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.(必须在问题严重之前及时采取有效措施解决)Measures,whenitcomestothisproblem/asfarasthisissueisconcerned/asfarastheproblemgoes,aretobetakensoasto…,Ibelieve.(就这个问题而言,我认为应该采取措施改进以便。。。)7正反观点对比可以说Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththelatter/formerpointofview.(权衡正反两种观点,我倾向于后者/前者的看法),这样就不用为字数发愁了!※大作文的时间30-35分钟,5分钟构思(确定模块,举例,论据等),20分钟写,5分钟检查。※内容切题,但不新颖不重要,不要为了想个好的例子浪费时间,第一是你未必想的出来,第二是你想出来了也写不出来,第三是你写出来了老师也不会看!所以要写最简单的例子。※检查,这个时间千万不要数字数,主要是找拼写和语法的错误,主要是全篇文章时态一致、单复数、主谓一致!记住小的地方可以改,但决不要整句整句的改,缩短老师的评卷时间、使老师高兴是及格和打高分的首要条件!注意一些常用词,常用短语不要用错!!!Convenient,essential,obvious,characteristics/feature,environmentalprotection,prefer。。。to。。。,definitely,5.模块1.议论型模块(89words)谋篇布局8-将提示的第一句作为文章的第一句-将提示的第三句作为第一段的最后一句-将提示的第二句展开成文章的中心段落-结论段归纳概括,提出建议Somepeoplebelieve(argue,hold,advocate,recognize,think)that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethat观点2.Asforme/asfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehind/tosupportmybelief.Firstofall/inthefirstplace,论据1.Moreimportantly/inthesecondplace,论据2.Mostimportantofall/themoreimportantisfactthat,论据3.Lastbutnottheleast.Insummary,总结观点.Asacitizenoftheglobalvillage,Iamsupposedto表决心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.例如:2002年1月MBA作文题FailureandSuccessSomebelievethatfailureandsuccessareaninevitable9partoftheirdailylifeandbothcontributetotheirfinalsuccess.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatfailurewilldestroytheirconfidenceintheirworkandlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,failureshouldnotberegardedastheendoftheworld.Onthecontrary,itcanteachusalotoflessonsandexperience,withwhichweavoidmakingmistakesagainandfinallysucceed.Second/Inthesecondplace,ifeverythingrunssmoothlyandwemakeachievementseffortlessly,wewillbecomearrogantandbeblindtopotentialproblems,whichmayleadtoourtotalfailure.Fromabove,wecanseeweshouldtakeaproperattitudetowardfailureandsuccess.对比选择型模版(56words)1.Thereisaheateddebateover____________________.Itiscommonlyacceptedthat____________________.Incontrast,othersclaimthat…____________________.2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggest__________________.Intheir10view,____________________.However,othersthink____________________.Theyarguethat__________________.3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideof…OnMarriageofCollegeStudents1.Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsshouldget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