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读后续写专练LastyearatChristmastime,mywife,threechildrenandIwereonourwayfromParistoNice.Somehoweverythingwentwrong.Ourhotelswere“touristtraps”andourrentedcarbrokedown.OnChristmasEve,whenwecheckedintoadirtyhotelinNice,therewasnoChristmasspiritinourhearts.Itwasrainingandcoldwhenwewentouttoeat.Wefoundasmallrestaurantpoorlydecoratedfortheholiday.Onlyfivetablesintherestaurantweretaken.ThereweretwoGermancouples,twoFrenchfamiliesandanAmericansailor,byhimself.Theywereeatinginstonysilenceexceptthesailor.Hewaswritingaletter,andahalf-smilelightedhisface.Inthecornerapianoplayerwaslistlessly(无精打采地)playingChristmasmusic.AllofuswereinterruptedbyanoldFrenchflowerwomanthroughthefrontdoor.Shehadawornovercoatandheroldshoeswerewet.Carryingherbasketofflowers,shewentfromonetabletoanother.Nooneboughtany.Exhaustedandfrustrated,shesatdownatatable.Thesailorfinishedhismealandgotuptoleave.Puttingonhiscoat,hewalkedovertotheflowerwoman’stable.“MerryChristmas,”hesaid,smilingandpickingoutahandfulofflowers.“Howmucharethey?”“Twofrancs,sir”Thesailorputatwentyfrancnoteinthewoman’shand.“Idon’thavechange,sir,”shesaid.“I’llgetsomefromthewaiter.”“No,ma’am,”saidthesailor,leaningoverandkissingtheancientcheek.“ThisismyChristmaspresentforyou.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.___________________Paragraph2:Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.________________参考范文Paragraph1:Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.Hepickedoutaredflowerandplaceditonourtable.“MerryChristmas!”hegreetedusinacheerfulvoice.Beforewecouldsay“Thankyou”,hewenttoothertables.Inaninstant,everyoneintheroomwaspresentedwithflowers,includingthewaiterandthepianoplayer.Inthebrightlight,theflowerswereglowinginfullbloom.Thesemagicalflowersmeltedourfrustratedheartsandblewawayalltheunpleasantmoods.Paragraph2:Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.Afestivalatmospheredrownedallofus.Wemerrilydancedtothejoyfulmusic,singing,laughingandwishingeachothergoodluck.Theoldflowerwomanalsojoinedus,unabletoconcealherexcitementandgratitude.ThespiritofChristmascamebacktousagain.Itbroughtallofustogetherinthissmallrestaurantonaforeignland.AllthiswasduetoayoungAmericansailor,who,throughhiskindnessandgenerosity,brightenedourpaths.然后水手手里拿着花向我们的餐桌走来。他摘了一朵红花放在我们的桌子上。“圣诞快乐!”他兴高采烈地跟我们打招呼。我们还没来得及说“谢谢”,他就走到其他桌子那儿去了。很快,房间里的每个人都收到了鲜花,包括服务员和钢琴师。在明亮的灯光下,鲜花怒放着。这些神奇的花朵融化了我们沮丧的心,驱散了所有不愉快的情绪。钢琴演奏者活跃起来,愉快的音乐充满了整个房间。节日的气氛淹没了我们所有人。我们高兴地随着欢快的音乐跳舞,唱歌,大笑,互相祝愿好运。那个卖花老妇人也加入了我们,无法掩饰她的兴奋和感激之情。圣诞节的精神又回来了。它把我们所有人聚集在这个异国他乡的小餐馆里。这一切都归功于一位年轻的美国水手,他的善良和慷慨照亮了我们的道路。
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