段落写作主题句-芳芳---修订

ParagraphsWritingTopicSentence段落写作之主题句改进：1.深度，难度，将主题句与拓展句一起。2.注重思维的开发，英语提纲要点提练。Q:Isitaparagraph?IneedawaterbottleforthehikeincaseIgetthirsty.Asweaterisusefulifitgetscold.Acompasswillhelpmegointherightdirection.Sandwicheswillbeaneasy-to-carrysnack.Icanuseacameratotakepicturesofunusualorattractiveplaces.A:No,itisn’t.WritingatopicsentenceIneedawaterbottleforthehikeincaseIgetthirsty.Asweaterisusefulifitgetscold.Acompasswillhelpmegointherightdirection.Sandwicheswillbeaneasy-to-carrysnack.Icanuseacameratotakepicturesofunusualorattractiveplaces.Canwemakeitaparagraph?Howcanwemakeitaparagraph?Wecanmakeitaparagraphbygivingitacentralidea,orafocus.Wegiveitafocusbystatingthecentralideainonesentence,whichiscalledthetopicsentence.WritingatopicsentenceIneedmanyitemstobereadyforasafe,enjoyablehike.IneedawaterbottleforthehikeincaseIgetthirsty.Asweaterisusefulifitgetscold.Acompasswillhelpmegointherightdirection.Sandwicheswillbeaneasy-to-carrysnack.Icanuseacameratotakepicturesofunusualorattractiveplaces.topicsentence主题句一般位于段首。通常为一个完整的句子，用以概括，叙述，说明该段的主题。•ItisnodoubtthatInternethasplayedanimportantroleinourdailylife.Firstly,itprovidesuswithamoreconvientwayofsearchingforusefulinformation.Secondly,itsavesourtimewhichbenefitusalot.topicsentenceTherearethreereasonswhyJohnisnotgoingtouniversity.Inthefirstplace,hisfamilyisquitepoorand,sincehehasfouryoungbrothersandsistersstillatschool,hefeelsheshouldhelphisfamilyfinanciallyassoonaspossible.Secondly,ifhewenttouniversity,hismotherwouldbeleftalonetolookaftertheyoungchildren.Finally,hehasbeenofferedagoodjobwithexcellentchancesofpromotion.Consequently,althoughhewantstogotouniversityverymuch,Johnisgoingtotakethejobinstead.topicsentence•However,theinternetwillnotreplacetraditionalmedialikenewspaper.Foronething,notallreaderslikeusinginternetorcanuseit,especiallytheages.Foranother,newspaperiseasytohandle,whichisagoodexperienceforthem.topicsentenceHowtowritethetopicsentence1.thepatterns(模式)oftopicsentence.2.thetechniques（技巧）ofwritinggoodtopicsentence.主题句模式直接翻译回答要点明确观点说出感受引出经历表明看法“重要性”表达主题句的模式Howtowritethetopicsentence1.建设绿色校园的重要性。Itisofgreatimportancetobuildagreencampus.2.你怎么看待老师对学生的影响。Agoodteacherplaysareallyimportantroleinstudents’lives.直接翻译要点,表达“重要性”明确观点3.讲述一次你或你的朋友想家的经历Hisstoryremindsmeofmysimilarexperience.引出经历。1）主题句要概括一定内容，不要空泛，否则扩展句将难以说明和支持它。eg：空泛：Englishlanguageisveryimportant.概括：Englishlanguageisveryimportantinourdailylife.2）尽量使用简单句或简洁明了的句子。eg：简洁：Collectingstampsisherhobby.复杂:Shelikescollectingstampswhichisherhobby.ABAB3）主题句应该做到句子完整和表达的主题思想完整。eg：不完整：Howtowriteacomposition.完整：Howtowriteacompositionisnotaneasythingtotalkabout.4）关键词是直接表达主题的词汇，它决定段落的内容和展开的方法，引导整个段落的发展。eg：Threeotherbenefitshavebeenfound,inadditiontothegreentea’sheart-healthy,anti-cancer,stress-reducingeffects.ABExercise:writedownthetopicsenteceoftheparagraphIhadawonderfulsummer.First,Istartedsleepingineveryday.Iwouldthengoswimmingwithmyfriends.IstayeduplatewatchingTValot,andIwenttocampforaweek.Iwishedmysummerwouldneverend!TherearetworeasonswhyCanadaisoneofthebestcountriesintheworld.First,Canadahasanexcellenthealthcaresystem.AllCanadianshaveaccesstomedicalservicesatareasonableprice.Second,Canadahasahighstandardofeducation.Therewillbealotofwonderfulactivities.First,wecantakepartintheEnglishplaytobuildupyourconfidence.Then,wecanalsojoininreadingclassicalEnglishpoemsandIthinkitwillhelpusenjoythecharmofEnglish.Collegelifeisanimportantstageinourlife.Itisincollegethatwebegintoliveandstudybyourselves.Itisincollegethatwelearntobeindependentofourparents.Itisincollegethatwe,likeNewton,aresearchingforbeautifulshellsonthebeachofknowledge.Meanwhile,itisincollegethatwebecomematuredandfullygrownup,bothphysicallyandmentally.Consequently,weshouldcherishitandmakethemostofit.concludingsentencesupportingsentencesasentencetotellthereaderwhattheparagraphismainlyabout.sentencestogivemoredetailedinformationaboutthetopicsentence.topicsentenceasentencetoendaparagraphortosummarize(总结）theideas.Summary2:Aparagraphismadeupof3parts:1.Topicsentence;2.Supportingsentences;3.Concludingsentence.sentencestogivemoredetailedinformationaboutthetopicsentence.asentencetoendaparagraphortosummarize(总结）theideas.(主题句)(扩展句/阐述句)(结论句/结尾句)随着时代的发展，看电影成为非常重要的一种休闲方式。有人喜欢去电影院看电影，有人选择在网上看电影。请根据以下信息写一篇短文，分析人们选择不同观影方式的原因，并表达你自己的看法。不同的选择原因喜欢去电影院看电影声音和画面质量高和朋友一起看，有助于交流...喜欢在网上看电影方便，省钱安静，不受打扰你的想法及原因......Doyouliketogotothecinemaorwatchafilmonline?Peoplehavedifferentanswerstothequestion.Therearesomepeoplewhothinkthatgoingtothecinemaisabetterchoice.Tobeginwith,thescreenismuchlargerthanthatwehaveathome.What'smore,theimageandsoundeffectsareamazing,whicharetotallydifferentfromwhatwefeelathome.Besides,it’sgoodwaytocommunicatewithfriendsifyouinvitethemtogowithyou.Otherpeople,however,holdtheviewthattheyprefertowatchmoviesathome.Becauseit’sconvenientandmoney-savingtowatchfilmsonline.Inaddition,Youcanenjoythefilmsyouchoosewithoutbeingdisturbedinsuchaquietplace.Itismyopinionthatalthoughtheticketsareveryexpensive,I’llgotothecinemainsteadofwatchingfilmsonline.Inthisway,I’llhaveagoodop