应用文写作(二)letter-of-invitation

一、写作架构要规范应用文写作常见8大文体(二)——邀请信邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。具体写作结构为：二、靓点句式背一番(一)开头常用语1．We’rethrowingasurprisepartyfor...We’dliketoinviteyouto.../It’smyhonortoinviteyouto...我们将为……举办惊喜派对。我们想邀请你……/非常荣幸地邀请你……2．Wearehaving/planning...on...(date)andwefeelitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucanjoinus.我们将于……(日期)举行……(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好了。3．ItiswiththegreatestpleasurethatIwritetoinviteyouto...我感到十分高兴能写信邀请你……(二)主体部分常用语1．Herearesomedetailsaboutthisactivity./Somedetailsaboutthisactivityareasfollows.这次活动的细节如下。2．Iwouldliketomeetyouthereandpleaseletmeknowyourdecisionsoon.我想在那里见到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。(三)结尾常用语1．Iwouldfeelhonoredifyoucouldcome./Wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearlyconvenience./Anearlyreplyisappreciated.如果你能来，我倍感荣幸。/如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们将不胜感激。/感激你的早日回复。2．MyfamilyandIwouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcome.如果你能来，我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。3．Wouldyoupleasedropmealinetoletmeknowwhetheryoucancometo...?你是否能来……请写信告诉我，好吗？三、润色完善很关键(2018·湖南六校联考)假定你是李华，想邀请你校的外教Henry一起参加学校近日将举办的中国传统文化展。请你给他写一封邀请信，内容包括：1．展览的时间、地点；2．展览的目的；3．展览的内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(一)准审题、准表达保基本分开头：发出邀请(自我介绍、展览时间及地点)主体：活动内容(展览目的、内容)结尾：表达愿望，并期待对方尽早回复定要点定结构一般将来时为主定时态第一人称为主定人称邀请信定体裁[中档作文]DearHenry，I’mLiHua❶.I’mchairmanoftheStudentUnion❷.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartin❸theChineseTraditionalCultureShow❹.ItwillbeheldattheArtCentreinourschool❺.Theshowwillstartat8a．m.andendat12a．m.thisSaturdaymorning.Theaimoftheshowistoarousestudents’interestinlearningaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Therewillbeabundantmasterpieces,agreatmanycharmingpoemsandrelatedbooksattheshow.Wecannotonlyhaveabetterunderstandingofourtraditionalculturebutalsobroadenourview❻.Ibelieveyoulike❼theactivityanddocometoenjoyit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)DearHenry，I’mLiHua,(1)(❶❷句合并升级为名词短语作同位语)．I’mwritingtoinviteyouto(2)(词汇升级❸)theChineseTraditionalCultureShow(3)(❹❺句合并升级为非谓语动词作定语)．Theshowwillstartat8a．m.andendat12a．m.thisSaturdaymorning.chairmanoftheStudentUnionparticipateintobeheldattheArtCentreinourschoolTheaimoftheshowistoarousestudents’interestinlearningaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Therewillbeabundantmasterpieces,agreatmanycharmingpoemsandrelatedbooksattheshow.(4)(升级句❻为倒装句)．Ibelieveyou(5)(词汇升级❼)theactivityanddocometoenjoyit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHuaNotonlycanwehaveabetterunderstandingofourtraditionalculturebutalsobroadenourviewarefondof四、“一题两用”错不犯下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。DearHenry，I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotheChineseTraditionalCultureShowtobeholdattheArtCenterinourschoolat9a．m.inSaturdaymorning.ThiseventaimtohelpmorepeopleslearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Whomeverisinterestedinitiswelcometotakepartin.Attheshow,relatedbooks,pictures,videosandsoonwillbeexhibited,throughthatvistorswillnotonlyunderstandChinesetraditionalculturemuchwellbutdefinitelyfeeltheuniquebeautyofit.Ifyouinterested,pleasecomeandenjoyit.I’dbegladtoofferinganyhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua答案：第一句：hold→held;第二个in→on第二句：aim→aims;peoples→people第三句：Whomever→Whoever;去掉第二个in第四句：that→which;well→better第五句：interested前加are第六句：offering→offer