2019高考英语浙江专用培优写作技能课件：第三部分-第二讲读后续写

破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨第二讲读后续写破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨浙江新高考3年命题探究项目卷别写作文体命题类型材料词数主题范围2018年6月故事类记叙文半开放类320人与自我·父亲带儿子去体验农场生活2017年11月故事类记叙文半开放类338人与自我·和父母一块去旅游的故事破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨2017年6月故事类记叙文半开放类344人与自我·和朋友一起骑车游玩，野外遇到狼的故事2016年10月故事类记叙文半开放类332人与自我·野外游玩，女主人迷路在野外独自过夜的故事破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨综合分析上表并结合最新考纲，我们可以大胆预测2019年浙江卷读后续写会有以下命题特征：1．写作体裁明年读后续写的文体仍然会继续考查叙事类文体．．．．．，所选材料一定具有更强的故事性、逻辑性的特点。2．写作形式要求考生依据所给材料内容、段落开头语和所标关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。所给的段落提示句均是故事情节发展的过程句，对续写故事的发展有提示、引导和限制作用。明年续写部分的设置会更合理，这样才能更好地激发学生的想象力，学生都有话可说，有内容可写。破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨3．写作话题明年读后续写的主题范围将仍然围绕人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三大主题，内容来自于学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题。明年的续写话题将会更加彰显人性光辉，体现人与自然和谐相处的文章出现的可能性非常大，因为这样的文章更适合考查学生的逻辑思维、评判性思维和创新思维能力。破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨A(2018年6月·浙江高考)Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.Uncle__Paul,__mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarm__houselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm，”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草)．IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper，”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tget__lost！”“OK！”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight．Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________________________________________________________________________________破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark._________________________________________________________________________________________________【文章大意】父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验……【写作指导】第一段所给首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨第二段首句Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.呼应前文UnclePaul的叮嘱——不要耽误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场来写。已给提示词汇：dad,UnclePaul,farmhouse,river,feed,sheep,late,track,getlost,sight话题激活词汇：情感：panic,relief,nervous,worried；动作：run,cry,thinktooneself；环境：shower,mountain,forest,valley,tree,lake,sun。破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨【参考范文1】Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.Afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.Therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarm__houseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindawayout,wefelthungryandtired.破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedtoourdifficultyinfindingawayhome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmostontheedgeofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,“Don’tworry,myson.Irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome.”Finally,wefoundtheriverandgotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesstosay,weatealatedinner.破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨【参考范文2】Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.MyhorseturnedtothelefttoavoidthelittlerabbitasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.Thenmydadturnedaroundandshouted,“Holdon！”Allofasuddenthehorsebegantorun.Mydadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminutesmyhorsesloweddownandthenstoppedbesideariver．Ilookedaroundandrealizedthatwewereawayoffthetrack．破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Luckilythestarscameoutandgaveusalittlelightwhenwewerelookingforthewaytothefarm__house．Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.MydadandIbothrodeourhorsestowardsthesoundofthesheep.AswegotcloserwesawUncle__Paulwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨B(2017年11月·浙江高考)AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements，allbecauseofmymother—loving，sweet，yetabsent-mindedandforgetful．OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota，andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached，David，myeight-year-oldbrother，andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?破解高考把脉考情技巧点拨Finally，themomentofourdeparturearrived，andweloadedsuitcases，books，games，campingequipment，andatentintothecarandbravelyd