人教版七年级英语下册Unit-11-How-was-your-school-trip写作素养提升练

写作素养提升练人教版七年级下Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip?人教版七年级下同学们,你们一定和你们的父母游览过许多名胜古迹吧！你们一定为祖国的美丽风光陶醉过。那么,你们参加过学校的郊游吗？你们学校的郊游怎么样？让我们一起来分享你们度过的快乐时光吧！写作任务请你根据下面表格中的内容,以“Agreatschooltrip”为题写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。介绍七年级一班去泰山(MountTai)郊游的情况。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。写作任务成员七年级一班全体师生活动项目要求游览泰山、画画、拍照；自带食物和水出发时间周六早上七点集合地点公共汽车站交通方式及旅途时间公共汽车(3小时)写作任务AgreatschooltripLastweekend,allteachersandstudentsofClassOne,GradeSevenvisitedMountTai.______________________________________________________________________思路点拨1.谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。思路点拨2.遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。(1)上个星期六阳光灿烂,天气凉爽,正合适旅行。It________________and________lastSaturday.Itwasjustright________________________________.(2)早上七点他们在公共汽车站集合,然后乘公共汽车去泰山。They________________________________________atseveno'clockinthemorningandthenthey________________________________________________.wassunnycoolfortakingatripmetatthebusstationwenttoMountTaibybus思路点拨(3)到达那里花了他们三个小时。It________them________________________________________.(4)他们随身带了一些水和食物。They________________________________________withthem.took3hourstogettheretooksomewaterandfood思路点拨(5)他们爬泰山、画画、还拍了许多照片。They________________________and________________________.Theyalso________________________.(6)他们虽累但是高兴。他们认为这是一次很好的学校旅行。Theywere________________________.Theythoughtitwas________________________________.climbedMountTaipainted/drewsomepicturestookmanyphotostiredbuthappyagreatschooltrip思路点拨3.完美衔接：利用连词,使句子意思连贯。记叙发生在过去的事情用一般过去时,运用总分总的方式构建文章结构,层次清晰,使文章形成一个整体。思路点拨4.连句成篇：AgreatschooltripLastweekend,allteachersandstudentsofClassOne,GradeSevenvisitedMountTai.______________________________________________________________________思路点拨【品读范文】思路点拨课后实践请根据下面的提示内容写一篇英语短文,描述你们去农场郊游时的经历。提示：1.上周六你们骑自行车去阳光农场(SunshineFarm)郊游；2.上午你们体验了挤牛奶、喂鸡,还摘了新鲜的(fresh)蔬菜；3.下午你们在农场散步,和农场主聊天；4.你们玩得很开心。要求：1.不少于70词；2.可适当发挥想象。课后实践________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LastSaturdaywehadagreatschooltrip.WewenttoSunshineFarmbybike.Inthemorning,wemilkedcowsandfedchickens.Wealsowenttothefieldtopicksomefreshvegetables.Itwasinteresting.Intheafternoon，wewentforawalkonthefarm.Wetalkedwiththefarmerandhetoldussomethingabouthisfarm.Welearnedalotabout课后实践________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________farming,andwehadagreattimeonthefarm.Weweretiredbuthappy.