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1Howtowriteacomposition?单位阿城区交界一中姓名邹静2Howtowriteacomposition?TeachingAims:Accordingtotheform,teachstudentshowtowriteacompositionusingtheeffectivesentences.Trainthestudents’writingability.TeachingImportantPoints:1.Improvethestudents’writingability.2.Teachthestudentshowtogetthekeywordsandhowtouseeffectivesentencestocompleteacoherentcomposition.TeachingMethods:DiscussionTeachingAids:1.themultimedia2.theblackboardTeachingProcedures:Step1:IntroductionofthebasicelementsSixstepstowriteacomposition①Analyzingthetask②Findingoutthemainpoints③Thinkingofkeypoints/phrases④Formingsentences⑤Combiningthesentencesintoapassage⑥CopyingnormallyStep2DiscussingthecompositionPresentthewritingmaterialstotheclass,askstudentstodosomebrainstorming:目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。（字数：150左右）有的同学认为有的同学认为31．学校限制我们的自由；2．学生和社会接触少；3．学生的兴趣和爱好得不能得到充分的发展。因此…1．学校是学习知识的地方；2．学生应该安心在学校里学习；3．学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老师，可能会…你的看法：….①Analyzingthetask:写作人称为第三人称和第一人称,词数150词左右,时态一般现在时.②Findingoutthemainpoints第一段:有的同学认为:1.学校限制我们的自由.2.学生和社会接触少.3.学生的兴趣和爱好得不到充分的发展.因此…第二段:有的同学认为:4.学校是学习知识的地方.5.学生应该安心在学校里学习.6.学生缺乏自觉性,离开了老师,可能会….第三段:你的看法:7.呈现观点:赞成哪一方?8.说明理由/提出措施③Thinkingofkeypoints/phrases:1.Letthestudentsworkingroupsoffourtogetthekeywordsofeachpointorally.2.Askseveralstudentstoreporttheiranswerstotherestoftheclass.Presentthesekeywordsandphrasestothewholeclass.(Point7&8isflexible,encouragestudentstoexpresswhatevertheywanttosayfreely.Iftheycan’,Chineseisalsoallowed.ThenhelpthemtotranslatewhattheysayintoEnglish.)要点序号关键单词和短语1.Limitfreedom2.Havelittlechancetogetintouchwith3.Interestsandhobbies/fullydeveloped44.Thebestplacetogetknowledge5.Putone’sheartinto6.Lacktheabilitytocontrol/affect7.Itis….tokeepstudentsatschool/(dis)agreeto8.Organizevariousactivities/develop.④Formingsentences(payattentiontotheuseofconjunction)Askstudentstosaysentencesonebyoneaccordingtothepointsgiven.Step3Presentation1.Threekeystoimprovingyourcomposition:A.learntousesuperiorphrases.B.learntouseabundantsentences.C.learntousesuitableconjunction.逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first,then,finally/atlast,soonafter,immediately,suddenly,next空间顺序here,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto并列关系and,aswellas,also转折关系but,however,yet,instead,though,otherwise,despite,onthecontrary,inspiteof因果关系because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult,thus,owingto,dueto条件关系aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless对比关系similarly,like,unlike,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,递进关系Besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore,furthermore,what’sworse,tomakematterworse举例forexample,forinstance,suchas,inotherwords,thatistosay让步关系though,as,evenif/though,whether,who/where/what/when+ever总结归纳ingeneral,generallyspeaking,aboveall,afterall,inshort,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,allinall5过渡性插入语Ithink,I’mafraid,youknow,asweallknow,asfarasIknow,inmyopinion,personally2.Changesentences:(Presentsometypicalsentenceswrittenbythestudentstotheclass.Askstudentstousesuperiorphrasesorsentencestochangethesentences)⑴.Inaddition,studentsdon’thavetheabilitytocontrolthemselves.→Inaddition,studentslacktheabilitytocontrolthemselves./Inaddition,studentscan’tmanagethemselveswellduetoalackofself-control.⑵Theymayplaycomputergamesandforgettostudy.→Theymayspendmuchtimeplayingcomputergamesinsteadofstudying./Theymaygetaddictedtoplayingcomputergamesinsteadofstudyinghard.⑶Inschoolweshouldstudyhard.→Inschoolweshouldconcentrateon/beabsorbedin/devoteourbodyandsoultostudies.⑷Keepstudentsinschoolalldayarebadforstudents.→It’sbadtokeepstudentsatschoolallday.⑸Schoolisthebestplacetogetalotofknowledge,studentsshouldputtheirheartintotheirstudiesinschool.→Schoolisthebestplacetogetalotofknowledgesothatstudentsshouldputtheirheartintotheirstudiesinschool.⑹Somestudentscan’tbehavethemselveswellbutforteachersremindus.→Somestudentscouldn’thavebehavedthemselveswellbutfor/withoutteachers’help./Somestudentscan’tbehavethemselveswellunlessteachersremindustodoso.⑺Somestudentsleavetheschoolmaydosomethingunrelatedtotheirstudies.→Oncetheyleaveschool,theymaydosomethingunrelatedtotheirstudies.⑻Wecanonlyenjoyourselveswhenwehaveschoolholidays..→Onlywhenschoolsbreakupcanweenjoyourselves.3.Fillintheblanks:Presentthemodelone(withoutsomeconjunction)tothewholeclass,askstudentstofillinsuitableconjunction,Nowadaysalotofschoolskeeptheirstudentsinschoolalldaylong.6Studentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Someofthestudentsthinktheyenjoylessfreedom,andhavelittlechancetogetintouchwithsociety.Theyarenotabletofullydeveloptheirinterestsandhobbies,______theyhavelessinterestintheirstudies.Someotherthinkschoolisthebestplacetogetknowledge_________theyshouldputtheirheartintotheirstudies.________,Somestudentslacktheabilitytocontrolthemselves._______outofschool,theymaylosecontrolofthemselvesanddosomethingthatwillaffecttheirstudies._________,itisnecessarytokeepstudentsatschool.________atthesametimeschoolsshouldorganizevariousactivities______studentscanenjoytheirschoollife.Step4.Feedback1.Letthestudentsworkingroupstocorrecteachother’scompositionandtrytofindoutasmanymistakesastheycan.2.Classifythetypicalmistakes.Step5.Suggestions:1remem