外研版初中英语九年级上册Module-9-Unit-3写作课-课件

Module9GreatinventionsModuletask-------WritingcourseTheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofInternetHaveyoueversurfedontheInternet?Let’stalk!A:whatisit?B:howmanysidesisit?Everycoinhastwosides.disadvantageadvantageLet’stalk!A:whatcanyoudoontheInternet?B:Wecan….getsomeinformationeasydownloadthemusicsendandreceivee-mailsA:whatcanyoudoontheInternet?B:Wecan….B:Itis…convenientfastmakemorefriendA:whatcanyoudoontheInternetB:Wecan…B:Itcan…dosomeonlineshoppingmakeourlifecolorfulseesomeonlinemoviesA:thedisadvantagesontheInternet.B:wecan’tbadforourhealthyplayonlinegamesawasteoftimechatonlinespendtoomuchtimeonitGroupwork:Workingroups,discussandmakeliststodescribeHuidong.GettheinformationonlinegamechattingwastetimebadforourhealthyInternetdownloadconvenientE-mailonlineshoppingeasyadvantagesdisadvantagescolorful学会用连词：but;Besides,;What'smore,;However,;forexample;…例：What'sworse,itisbadfornotonlyourhealthbutalsoourstudy.许多孩子都热衷于上网，但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文，描述上网的优点和缺点，谈谈自己的看法以及自己上网会怎么做。1.上网的优点：快速获得大量的信息。正确运用网络有助于学习。广交朋友。2.上网的缺点：经常玩游戏、聊天浪费时间和金钱并且不利于学习。3.你的看法和做法：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________beginningbodyendingNowmanyofmyclassmatesliketosurftheInternetintheirfreetime,NowmanyofmyclassmatesliketosurftheInternetintheirfreetime,Asacoinhastwosides,surfingtheInternetalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,Internetbringsmuchconvenienceandacolorfulworldforpeople.WithInternet,peoplecanbuyallthethingsathome,getsomeinformation,makefriendswithpeoplefromalltheworldandsoon.WithoutInternet,ourlifewillbetotallyboring.Butmanystudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayinggamesandchattingonline.Theywastealotoftimeandmoney.What’smore,it’sbadfornotonlyourhealthbutalsoourstudy.Asforme,IthinkInternethasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantagesifpeopleuseitinaproperway.查（checkbyyourself）Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？大声朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求展示（showyourpassage）第一档：12-15分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。第二档：11-12分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。第三档：8-10分内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚,但有一些语言错误。（以上为及格线）第四档：4-7分内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：0-3分只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。评分档次和要求：小组活动：小组选出一篇作文进行欣赏并打分。（15分标准）欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求：人称，时态2.要点齐全3.结构：开头，正文，结尾4.好词好句注意（作文通用修改符号：优美句子~，漏词∧，错词O，去掉/）