读后续写(老人的手套)

写作思路OnChristmasEve,seventy-year-oldGeorgeselectedhisfoodcarefully.Skimmilkwas$2.99,whitebread,89centswitha10-centdiscount.Leavingthecashierdesk,hecalculatedthathehadsaved80centstoday.Time:OnChristmasEve----coldCharacter:seventy-year-oldGeorgePersonality:poor,thriftAttheexit,thewindremindedhimofhisgloves.“Wherearethey?”Notinthecoatpockets.Notinthegrocerybageither.Hewassurehewaswearingthemwhenheenteredthestore.Heclearlyrememberedputtingthemintothepocketofhiscoat.Georgemadeasecondthoroughsearchofallhispockets,againincludingthegrocerybag.Nowhewassuretheymusthavebeendroppedsomewhereinsidethestore.Hefoundthegloveshadbeenlost.Wherearethey?地点锁定OldGeorgehadboughttheblackleatherglovesata25%discount,forjust$35,tenyearsago.Theyweresoftandwarmandverydurable(耐用的).Hehadtakencarenottoletadropofwaterorraintouchhisexpensivegloves,sotheylookedlikenew.Losingthisfavoritepossession(拥有物)wasalmostlikelosingachildtohim.Hecherishedtheglovesverymuch.George,calmontheoutsidebutnervousinside,re-enteredthestore.Hefollowedthesameroutehehadwalkedbefore,startingatthebreadcounter,tothemilksection,thecornerwheresaltandsugarwereplaced,thentherestofthestore.Severalminutesofanxioussearchingturnedouttobeinvain(徒劳).Heaskedthecustomerswhethertheysawapairofblackleathergloves,buttheysaidno.Thenhewentovertothecashierwithouthesitationtoaskifshehadreceivedanylostgloves,butonlyreceivedthesameanswer.Hisheartgrewheavier.Hetriedveryhardtofindtheglovesbutfailed.“Societyhaschanged,peoplehavechanged,”hemurmuredtohimself.“Yearsago,ifsomebodypickedupsomethinglost,theywouldgiveitback.Nowagoodactionislost.”Yethedidnotgiveuphope.Hestartedtostareatanybodywearingblackglovestoseeiftheylookedlikehis.Thefirsttwopersonshesaedidwearglovesbutonewaswomen'sandtheothernotblack.预测故事的结局：1)老人有没有找到对他来说很珍贵的手套？老人最后终于找到了自己的手套2)手套是怎么找到的？有好心人把捡到的手套还给老人3)这个故事要说明一个什么样的道理要说明Thereisstillgoodactionintoday’sworld.世界还是有好心人，寒冷的冬天还是有人间的温暖，这个世界还是充满希望的。•Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer.•Duringthewholeholiday,hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.预测第一段的主要故事内容：1)老人有没有在第一段找到手套？没有找到，因为第二段中写到hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.2)第一段应该写什么？老人寻找手套的曲折的过程和因没有找到而失落的心情。3)如何在写作中体现寻找手套的曲折？他看见一副手套，他冒昧地去询问，结果却不是4)第一段中出现的lawyer怎么和老人之间发生联系律师有和老人差不多的手套•Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer.他竟然戴着一副黑色的皮手套！Hewaswearingapairofblackleathergloves!他欣喜若狂！Hewaswildwithjoy!Awildgaietytookholdofhim.Hiseyesweresparklinglikediamonds.Hisheartbeatwildly.Hisheartbeatsofastthathecouldhardlybreathe.Hisfacebrightenedupwithjoy/pleasure.Hisfacelitupwithexcitement他毫不犹豫地冲上前去，抓住那人的手，指着手套问：“先生，你这手套是不是刚刚捡到的？”Withoutanyhesitationherusheduptotheman,caughtholdofhisarm,pointingattheglovesandasked,“Sir,aretheglovestheonesyouhavejustpickedup?”让他倍感失望的是，律师模样的人否认了这是老人的手套,有点恼怒。Tohisgreatdisappointment,themanlookinglikealawyerdeniedit,appearingratherannoyed/upset.老人道了歉，不情愿地走开了Theoldmanapologizedandleftreluctantly.他坐在一个长凳上好一会，满脸忧郁，叹着气。Hesatonabenchforalongtimewithglumlooksonhisface，sighing.然后，他做了个决定。他请求收银员万一有人找到手套交给她们还请她们保管一下。Thenhemadeadecision.Hewalkeduptothecashierandaskedhertokeepthemincasethelostgloveswerefound.最后他拖着沉重的脚步走向了商场的出口Finallyhedraggedhisheavylegstowardstheexit.•Duringthewholeholiday,hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.预测第二段的主要故事内容：1)老人有没有在第二段找到手套？找到了2)手套是怎么找到的？他的心情怎么样？•Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer.•Duringthewholeholiday,hewasalwaysthinkingwhethertobuyanewpair.故事的总体发展可能是老George发现一个看起来像律师的人恰巧戴了一副黑色的皮手套，但是结果可想而知。临走前他拜托收银员帮他留意(第一段的可作要点)。整个圣诞期间，他肯定一直在犹像要不要再买一双手套。抱着最后一线希望，他又去店里问了，他丢的手套居然被好心人捡到放在收银台，他真是喜出望外。可能怀疑这个男的偷了手套不是这个男的偷的翻译•1.可能看起来很唐突，乔治毫不犹豫地上前并且询问这双手套是否是他的，但是得到个令人失望的答案。（abrupt：adj唐突的）•Abruptasitmightseem,Georgecameupwithouthesitationandaskediftheywerehis,buttherecameadisappointinganswer.as引导让步状语从句，作“虽然，尽管”解。这时从句常用倒装语序，即把从句中的表语、状语或动词原形放在as之前。eg：•Strangeasitmayseem，itistrue．尽管这事看上去很奇怪，但却是真的。•Tryashemight，Tomcouldnotgetoutofthedifficulties．不管怎样努力，汤姆还是摆脱不了困境。•2.仔细思考后，他意识到没有人会愚蠢到以至于正好在商店里面戴着它们。（so...asto太...以至于）•Onsecondthought,herealizednobodywouldbesofoolishastowearthemrightinsidethestore.•3.他没有其他选择只能要求收银员保管它们万一丢失的手套被找到了。（alternative：n.选择，incase:万一）•Hehadnootheralternativebuttoaskthecashiertokeepthemincasethelostgloveswerefound.•4.然后，他拖着腿走向了出口。（drag：v拖拽）•Thenhedraggedhislegstowardstheexit.•5.总而言之，在深冬，他不能没有手套。•Afterall,indeepwinter,hecouldnotdowithoutgloves.•6.最后，可怜的乔治决定另外买一副皮手套。•FinallypoorGeorgedecidedtobuyanotherpairofleathergloves.•7.抱着最后一丝希望，他再一次踏入了商店。•Withthelastrayofhope,hesteppedintothestoreagain.•8.他一开门，收银员就告诉他的确有一副手套很像他丢的那副。（nosooner...than:一...就...）•Nosoonerhadheopenedthedoorthanthecashiertoldhimtherewasindeedonesuchpairashelost.nosooner...than...倒装hardly...when...倒装eg:Hardlyhadwesetoffwhenitbegantorain.ondoing.../themoment.../assoonas/once•9.在仔细检查了它们之后，他欣喜若狂，向收银员表达了感谢并且对自己说好的行为并没有消失。•Afterexaminingthemcarefully,hewaswildwithjoy,expressingsinceregratitudeandsayingtohimselfthatagoodactionwasneverlost.前后呼应Suddenly,hefoundamanlookinglikealawyer,wearingblackleathergloves.Abruptasitmightseem,Georgecameupwithouthesitationandaskediftheywerehis,buttherecameadisappointinganswer.Onsecondthought,herealizednobodyw