专题07-新高考英语读后续写典例分析07-Tickets-For-The-Circus

专题07新高考英语读后续写典例分析07新高考英语TicketsForTheCircus目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.排队买票2.售票处3.给人留下深刻印象4.表现得很好5.小丑standinginlinetobuyticketsticketcountermadeabigimpressiononwerewell-behavedtheclowns表达积累6.你能感觉到7.生活中的亮点8.队伍的最前面9.放开他的手10.她低下头Onecouldsensebehighlightofthelifeattheheadofthepackletgoofhishandherheaddropped表达积累11.他的嘴唇开始颤抖12.靠得更近一点13.报价14.我们一点也不富有。15.他高兴得跳了起来。hislipsbegantoshakeleanalittlecloserquotethepricewewerenotwealthyinanysense.Hejumpedforfun.表达积累16.众口难调。17.心满意足的微笑18.他皱了皱眉。19.我努力忍住眼泪。20.她怒火中烧。Itisdifficulttopleaseeverybody.asmileofcontentmentAfrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.Itriedtofightbacktears.Shewasburningwithanger.02原文分析TicketsfortheCircusOnce,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandIwerestandinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus.Finally,therewasonlyonefamilybetweenusandtheticketcounter.Thisfamilymadeabigimpressiononme.Therewereeightchildren,allprobablyundertheageoftwelve.Youcouldtelltheydidn'thavealotofmoney.原文分析介绍故事背景。Theirclotheswerenotexpensive,buttheywereclean.Thechildrenwerewell-behaved,allofthemstandinginline,two-by-twobehindtheirparents,holdinghands.Theywereexcitedlytalkingabouttheclowns,elephants,andotheractstheywouldseethatnightwiththeirbrothersorsistersinalowvoice.Onecouldsensetheyhadneverbeentothecircusbefore.Itpromisedtobehighlightoftheiryounglives.Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.Themotherwasholdingherhusband’shand,lookingupathimasiftosay,“Youaremyknightinshiningarmor.”原文分析两段细节都在描述这家人对能带着八个孩子看马戏团还是很骄傲的。描述这一家人的状况:贫穷但体面。Hewassmilingandrespondinginpride,lookingbackatherasiftosay,“Yougotthatright.”Theticketladyaskedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded,“Pleaseletmebuyeightchildren'sticketsandtwoadultticketssoIcantakemyfamilytothecircus.”Theticketladygavetheprice.Theman'swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipsbegantoshake.Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,“Howmuchdidyousay?”原文分析故事的转折：和前面proud的形态形成鲜明的的对比Theticketladyagainquotedtheprice.Themandidn'thaveenoughmoney.Howwashesupposedtoturnandtellhiseightchildrenthathedidn'thaveenoughmoneytotakethemtothecircus?Actuallywewerenotwealthyinanysense.SoIunderstandhowthekidswouldfeel.Ifeltsorryforthem.原文分析故事的高潮：窘境发生，那个父亲钱不够。Paragraph1：Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets._______________________________________________________________________原文分析根据父亲的做法，以及下文我和爸爸没有看马戏直接开车回家了，可以推断出，这20美元应该是给了那一家人。本段续写如何巧妙的给后面应该是我从这件事中学习到了什么03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Myfathersaidthemoneywasdroppedfromtheman…Themanwasmoved…Hethanked…Paragraph2Paragraph2：ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Iaskedmyfatherwhydoso…Myfatherexplained…Ilearnedalotfromthis…句子润色然后他拿起它，拍拍那人的肩膀说：“对不起，先生，这是从你口袋里掉出来的。”Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,“Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyourpocket.’tappedthemanontheshoulderfelloutofyourpocket句子润色那人转过身来，看到了钱。turnaroundThemanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.句子润色他知道发生了什么。Heknewwhatwasgoingon.句子润色他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，双手握住我爸爸的手，紧紧地捏着那张20美元的钞票，嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来，他回答说，Helookedstraightintomydad’seyes,tookmydad’shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,lookedstraightintotookmydad’shandinbothofhissqueezedtightlyontoatearrunningdownhischeek注意多个动作的连接句子润色“谢谢，谢谢，先生。这对我和我的家人意义重大。”“Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.”meansalottome句子润色那天晚上我们没有去看马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么那么做时，Wedidn’tgotothecircusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,句子润色爸爸说：“我的孩子，对于一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、伤心和尴尬的局面。Dadsaid,“Mychild,itwasadesperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.desperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituation句子润色他当然不是在乞求施舍，而是让我想起了我小时候的父亲。”begforahandoutSurelyhewasn’tbeggingforahandout,butheremindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung.”Remindmeofsb句子润色他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在回忆中徘徊。Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory.wanderinginhismemory句子润色“我们应该珍惜我们从生活中得到的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。seizeeveryopportunityto“Weshouldappreciatewhatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.句子润色我们今晚没去马戏团，但我们也没有空。谁想吃冰淇淋?”Wedidn’tgotothecircustonight,butwedidn’tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?”04续写赏析续写赏析Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,“Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyourpocket.’Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.Heknewwhatwasgoingon.Helookedstraightintomydad’seyes,tookmydad’shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,“Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.”续写赏析ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Wedidn’tgotothecircusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,“Mychild,itwasadesperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn’tbeggingforahandout,butheremindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung.”He