《Stage and screen》PartⅤ PPT

1PartⅤWriting——电影评论Unit4Stageandscreen23【增分表达】1.介绍戏剧、电影或者小说tellastoryof/bedirectedby/beadaptedfrom2.进行评论(1)Thecharmingofthisstoryis...(2)Whatimpressedmemostis...(3)It’soneofthemostpopularplaysdirectedby...4下面是对电影《天下无贼》(AWorldWithoutThieves)有关信息的介绍：导演：冯小刚主要情节：单纯而有点傻气的农村孩子傻根儿在布满盗贼的列车上带了6万元回家。两波盗贼都想得到这笔钱，但王博和王丽良心发现，由盗贼变成了傻根儿的守护者，同黎叔为首的盗贼团伙，展开生死搏斗，圆了傻根一个天下无贼的梦想。51.确定体裁：本文是一篇应用文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为____________；3.确定主体时态：以________________为主。第三人称一般现在时6第二步：核心词汇想周全1._______________________由……导演2._______________________诈骗，一路行骗3._______________________对现实了解很少4._______________________保护……免受……5._______________________值得看directedbyswindletheirwayknowlittleabouttherealityprotectfrombewellworthseeing7第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.ThemovieAWorldWithoutThieves_________________________________________tellsthestoryofthethieves.(过去分词短语作定语)电影《天下无贼》由冯小刚导演，讲述了一个关于贼的故事。2.Itexploresthenatureofhuman.Itsuggeststhatnoonereallywantstobebad.Thethings____________________________________________________________________forcepeopletodobadthings.(定语从句)电影探索了人性，表明没有人想要真的变坏，而是有时发生的事情，迫使人们不得不做坏事。directedbyFengXiaogangthathappensometimes83.Hehassavedupalotofmoneyafterfiveyearsofwork，andhe_____________________________________________________________________________.(begoingto)五年的工作后，他存下了不少钱，打算回家乡。4.________________________________________________________________________，WangLiandWangBotrytheirbesttoprotecthimwhenUncleLitriestostealmoneyfromShagen.(过去分词短语作状语)傻根美好的人性感动了王丽和王博，当黎叔试图从傻根那里偷钱时，他们尽最大的努力保护他。isgoingbacktohishometownMovedbyShagen’sgoodnature9第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用并列句改写句2Itexploresthenatureofhuman____________________noonereallywantstobebad，____________________thathappensometimesforcepeopletodobadthings.2.用非谓语动词改写句3____________________________________________________________________，heisgoingbacktohishometown.3.用定语从句改写句4MovedbyShagen’sgoodnature，WangLiandWangBotrytheirbesttoprotecthimfromUncleLi______________________________________________________.andsuggeststhatbutthethingsHavingsavedupalotofmoneyafterfiveyearsofworkwhotriestostealmoneyfromShagen10第五步：过渡衔接连成篇ReviewonAWorldWithoutThievesThemovieAWorldWithoutThievesdirectedbyFengXiaogangtellsthestoryofthethieves.Itexploresthenatureofhumanandsuggeststhatnoonereallywantstobebad，butthethingsthathappensometimesforcepeopletodobadthings.WangBoandWangLicheatallthewayacrossChinauntiltheymeetShageninatrainstation.Shagen，knowinglittleaboutthereality，believesthathelivesinaworldwithoutthieves.Havingsavedupalotofmoneyafterfiveyearsofwork，heisgoingbacktohishometown.MovedbyShagen’sgoodnature，WangLiandWangBotrytheirbesttoprotecthimfromUncleLiwhotriestostealmoneyfromShagen.11Thewesternscenerythefilmshowsiswonderful.Moreover，thebackgroundmusicisperfect.Ilikethemovie.Ithinkthemovieiswellworthseeing，asitcarriesthemainideathatjusticecanalwaysbeatevil.12本节内容结束