公开课-地点描述--英语写作-教学设计

1课题：描述地点课型：写作课教学目标1.TobeabletodescribeaplaceinEnglish.2.Tobeabletousecomplexandcompoundsentencestopolishthewriting.3.Tobeclearerabouthowtoorganizeapassage.教学重点1.Makegooduseoftheexpressionsindescribingaplace.2.Mefamiliarwithhowtointroducedifferentaspectsofaplace.教学难点1.Howtodescribeaplaceusingcoherentsentences.教法归纳演绎法。课时Period1过程及内容合作探究：Activity1:阅读一篇关于地方的文章，教师引导学生赏析文章并找出好的句型，在阅读中输入句法。Sample1:I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutourcity.You’vemadethewisechoicetotravelhere.Hangzhou,thecapitalofZhejiangProvince,liesinthesoutheastofChinacoveringanareaof16596squarekilometers.Withapopulationofabout8.8million,thecityhasahistoryofmorethan2,200years,andenjoysareputationofaparadiseonearth.Itisaverybeautifulcitywithalotofplacesofinterest,amongwhichtheWestLakeisthemostfamousone.Italsohasmanymodernfactoriesandhighbuildings.Besides,theniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.Thankyou.Activity2:练习相关常用表达方式。1.介绍地理位置（Location）belocatedin(on/to)…besituatedin(on/to)…liein(on/to)…坐落于……脚下/顶部…standsatthefootof/onthetopof…翻译：丽水中学位于丽水市北部，白云山脚下。LishuiHighSchoolislocatedintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyun2Mountain.LihueHighSchoolissituatedintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyunMountain.LihueHighSchoolliesintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyunMountain.LocatedintheNorthofLishuicity,LishuiHighSchoolstands…学校的南边有一条公路。Tothesouthoftheschoollies/runsahighway.山顶有一座庙。Onthetopofthemountainliesatemple.毗邻…border/bordering…;neighbor/neighboring……周围是…besurroundedby…1.我的家乡位于中国浙江，毗邻福建。Myhometown,neighboringFujian,islocatedinZhejiangProvinceofChina.2.丽水四面环水，是个居住的好地方。Surroundedbythewater,Lishuiisaniceplacetolivein.2.介绍人口（population）…has/witha(large/small)populationof…Thepopulationof…is…,…isacitywitha(large/small)populationof百分之70的人口是…:Eightypercentofthepopulationhereare….中国是一个发展中国家，人口13亿。1.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,withapopulationof130million.2.Asadevelopingcountry,Chinahasapopulationof130million.3.ThepopulationofChina,whichisadevelopingcountry,is130million.北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.33.介绍面积(area)…has/occupies/takesup/coversanareaof…squarekilometers/meters…covering/withanareaof…squarekilometers•写作指导：面积表达可用同位语、介词短语、非谓语等做插入结构以复杂句型。如：天安门是世界上最大的广场，它的面积是…•1.TiananmenSquare,thelargestsquareintheworld,covers/hasanareaof…•2.TiananmenSquare,with/coveringanareaof…,isthelargestsquareintheworld.•3.TiananmenSquare,whichtakesup…squarekilometers,isthelargestsquareintheworld.4.介绍历史（History）…hasalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)丽水是一个现代化城市,历史悠久。1.Lishui,amoderncity,hasalonghistory.2.Lishui,whichhasalonghistory,isamoderncity.3.Lishuiisamoderncitywithalonghistory.见证历史轮回：…haswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory追溯到……：…dates/goesbackto…1.建于16世纪的城堡见证了太多的历史轮回。Builtinthe16thcentury,thecastlehaswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory.2.牛津大学追溯到13世纪。OxfordUniversitydatesbacktothethirteenthcentury.5.旅游景点•aplaceofinterest名胜•afamoustouristresort•atouristattraction•atouristdestination旅游景点，旅游目的地•ascenicspot风景区Activity3:仿写句子1.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。China,oneofthelargestcountriesintheworld,islocatedintheeastofAsia.2.多伦多是加拿大东部的一个繁华的港口城市，总面积1,850平方千米，总人口261万人。(coveratotalareaof)4Toronto,abusyportcityontheeastcoastofCanada,coversatotalareaof1,850squarekilometerswithapopulationof2.61million.3.中国是一个古老的(ancient)国度，有将近五千年的历史。(withahistoryof)Chinaisanancientcountrywithalonghistoryofalmost5000years.4.西藏有其独特(unique)的文化，和众多的名胜如布达拉宫(PotalaPalace)，深深地吸引各地游。(bewell-knownfor)Tibetiswell-knownforitsuniquecultureandanumberofplacesofinterestsuchasPotalaPalace,attractingtouristsfromallovertheworld.Activity4:[实战演练]：（课堂生成过程）根据以下内容,用5句话写一篇短文：北京是中国首都，位于中国北部，人口达2114万，面积是16410平方千米。拥有3000多年悠久历史，在不同的朝代有不同的称谓。作为文化名城，它拥有众多名胜，如长城，故宫等，吸引八方来客。2008年成功举办了奥运会，给世界人民很好的机会了解北京。参考词汇：朝代dynasty故宫theForbiddenCity写作思路：1、审题-----文体：地点介绍人称：第三人称时态：一般现在时、过去式2、谋篇：要点重组位置、面积、人口、风景特色3、行文：运用不同的句型进行翻译4润色：(1)在文章中使用一些非谓语动词。（2）巧用同位语（3）活用从句（4）巧用连接词学生写完后互评，并推荐好的作品班级欣赏。评价内容同伴互评篇章结构内容要点本文佳句本文不足病句建议5范文：Beijing,thecapitalcityofChina,islocatedinthenorthofChina.//Itcoversanareaof16,410squarekilometerswithapopulationof21.14million.//Itwasanancientcitywithalonghistoryofmorethan3000yearsandhasdifferentnamesindifferentdynasties.//Asafamousculturalcity,Beijingisfamousformanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandsoon,attractingtouristsfromhomeandabroadeveryyear.Itisin2008thatBeijingsucceededinholdingtheOlympicGames,whichoffersaverygoodchanceforpeoplearoundtheworldtoknowmoreaboutit.•Homework：•(根据以下内容,用5句话写一篇短文)•澳大利亚位于太平洋的南面,是大洋洲最大的国家，面积达760万平方公里。但它的人口稀少，只有1000多万人。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个洲组成，其中墨尔本（Melbourne)和悉尼是最大的两个城市.首都堪培拉(Canberra)风景秀丽。澳大利亚以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和独特的野生动植物而闻名于世。世界各地的游客经常到澳大利亚体验它独特的美景。