2018-2019学年高中英语 Module 2 The Renaissance写作园地-应用文：旅

1Module2TheRenaissance写作园地-应用文：旅行日记[感悟范文]请根据下列表格写一篇游记。(词数120个左右)时间3月6日，星期六，天气晴朗地点济南植物园旅行方式乘坐校车出发时间早晨6：30到达时间早晨7：20过程早晨：游览公园的所有地方，看到了数千种树木和花草；在湖中划船(row)，拍照中午：野餐下午：穿过各种小桥，挑战自我返回时间下午5：30[范文]Saturday,March6SunnyItwasfineinthemorningandweleftforJinanBotanicalGardenat6：30a．m..Wewentbyschoolbusandgotthereat7：20a．m..①It'ssaidtobeoneofthemostattractiveplacesinJinan.②Inthemorningwevisitedtheentiregarden,seekingandtakingsomephotosofthechiefplantswhichcanrepresenttheplantsintheBotanicalGarden.③Havingenjoyedthousandsofbeautifultreesandflowers,wearrivedatalake.Werowedsmallboats④leadingtoanislandinthemiddleofthelake⑤wherewehadgreatfunandtooklotsofphotos.Atnoonwehadapicnicamongthetrees.Intheafternoonwecrosseddifferentkindsoflittlebridgeschallengingourselves.Wehadagreattimetoday.At5：30p．m.,wereturnedhome,safeandhappy.[技法讨论]本模块的写作任务是写一篇旅行日记，它属于日记的一种，属于记叙文，旨在叙述整个活动的过程，以及自身感受。写这类文章需注意的问题：1．结构：文章分为总述——过程——感受三个部分。2．时态：一般使用过去时，但也要灵活使用其他时态。如描写景色或议论时，可能使用一般现在时；表达个人感想、打算或决心，可能用一般将来时。3．明确线索：注意按时间或地点为线索，说明过程要注意讲究层次和条理。语言要通俗、简洁。24．明确要素：游记中一般包括的要素有：时间(when)地点(where)人员(who)交通工具(how)所见所闻(what)以及感受和体会(feeling)。黄金表达1．总述①Today,Ipaidavisitto...withmyclassmates.②Todayismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperience.2．过程①Havingenjoyed...,wearrivedat...②Weclimbedthemountain,singingandlaughing.③Allofusmanagedtoreachtotop,whereweadmiredthebeautifulsceneryandhadagreattime.④Intheafternoon,wevisited...,wherewehadpicturestakenand...⑤Wekeptonwalkinguntilwereached...3．表示时间的词或短语earlyinthemorning,lateintheafternoon,afterwards,afterashortwhile,afterashortrest,soonafter,tenminuteslater,immediately...,during...4．感受①Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Wehadto...②Howhappy/excited/gladIfeeltoday...③Seeing...,weallhadasenseofachievement.④Tiredasweare,wefeelhappy.⑤Whatfunitistodosth.!亮点分析：亮点一：本篇内容完整，要点齐全，语言精练流畅；亮点二：本文大量使用了①②③④非谓语动词作状语、定语；⑤定语从句等，极大的提升了文章的层次；亮点三：文章恰当使用了attractive,leadto,represent,challenging等高级词汇，使得文章语言华丽、出采。[类文演练]假设你是小明，你的朋友杰克很喜欢旅游，发电子邮件向你询问你的国庆旅程。你给他的回信内容包括：时间：2013年10月1日,人员：家人和朋友们地点：新加坡国家植物园，亚洲最著名的植物园之一。3内容：1.花了三个多小时游遍了植物园，那里有各色各样的我从未见过的植物，例如新加坡的国花—卓锦万黛兰；2.参观当地礼品店，购买了许多纪念品。感想：①每个人都过得非常开心，旅程使我们印象深刻。②旅游可以增加我们对不同地方、不同国家的地理、风俗习惯、文化和生活等方面的了解。③旅游可以使我们开阔视野，学到许多书本以外的知识。写作要求：1．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．文章需包含要点的所有内容，字数约100～120词。DearJack，I'mgladtohavereceivedyoure－mail.NowI'lltellyousomethingaboutmyjourneyduringtheNationalDay.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，XiaoMing[联想词汇]1．去某地旅行________________答案：goonatriptosp.2．参观________________答案：payavisitto3．各色各样的________________答案：avarietyof4．拓宽知识________________答案：widenourknowledge5．增加了解________________答案：haveabetterunderstandingof...6．开拓视野________________答案：broadenourhorizons7．给某人留下印象________________答案：impresssb.deeply/make(leave)adeepimpressiononsb.[连词成句]41.花了三个多小时游遍了植物园，那里有各色各样的我从未见过的植物。It________usmorethanthreehourstotourthegarden，whichhad________________plants________________.答案：took；avarietyof;Ihadneverseen2.参观当地礼品店，购买了许多纪念品。We______________thelocalgiftshopaswell,______________wepurchased________________souvenirs.答案：paidavisitto；where；agreatmany/agreatnumberof3.旅程使我们印象深刻。Thejourney________________us.答案：deeplyimpressed/madeadeepimpressionon4.旅游可以增加我们对不同地方、不同国家的地理、风俗习惯、文化和生活等方面的了解。Travellingcan______ourknowledgeof________，_______，________and________ofdifferentplacesandcountries.答案：widen；geography;customs;cultures；lifestyles[连句成章]_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Dear_Jack，I'm_glad_to_have_received_your_e－mail.Now_I'll_tell_you_something_about_my_journey_during_the_National_Day.OnOctober1st,2013,wewentonatriptoSingaporeNationalbotanicalgarden,oneofthemostfamousbotanicalgardensinAsia,withmyfamilyandfriends.Ittookusmorethanthreehourstotourthegarden,whichhadavarietyofplantsthatIhadneverseenbefore,suchasVandaMissJoaquim,thenationalflowerofSingapore.Besides,wepaidavisittothelocalgiftshopaswell,wherewepurchasedagreatnumberofsouvenirs.Everyonehadgreatfunduringthejourneyanditdeeplyimpressedus.AsfarasIamconcerned,notonlycantravellingwidenourknowledgeofgeography,customs,culturesandlifestylesofdifferentplacesandcountries,butitcanalsobroadenourhorizons,enablingustolearnalotfarbeyondourbooks.5Yours，Xiao_Ming