2018-2019学年高中英语 Module 4 Which English写作园地-议论文：正反对

1Module4WhichEnglish写作园地-议论文：正反对比[感悟范文]人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由1.广交朋友1.浪费时间2.可自由表达思想2.影响学习3.利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗你的看法：……注意：1.文章必须包括表中的全部内容；2．词数为100左右。参考词汇：网络朋友onlinefriend(s)，上当受骗getcheated__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[范文]①Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.TheythinktheInternethelpsmakemanyfriends.②Chattingonline,studentscanfreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,③andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,③however,thinkstudentsshouldn'tchatonline.Theysay②makingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,④whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.③Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.⑤Myopinionisthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.[技法讨论]本模块写作任务是正反对比性议论文，旨在阐明正反双方观点，以及陈述自己的观点。写该类文章需注意以下几个问题：1．结构：四段论。首先，提出争论的焦点；然后陈述双方观点；最后表明自己的观点。2．人称：以第三人称为主，间或用第一人称。黄金表达1．Wehavehadadiscussion/surveyon.../aboutwhetherweshould...22．Opinionsaredividedonthequestion/opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.3．Manystudents,accountingfor/makingup40%,thinkitnecessarytodosth....Another20%thinkthat...Others,however,holdthebeliefthat...4．Moststudentsareinfavoroftheplan,saying...Ontheotherhand,somepeoplehaveexpressedtheirdoubtsandworriesaboutit.5．Those,whofavortheidea,think...Howeverthosewhoareagainsttheideathink...6．Others,however,holdtheoppositeview.7．Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelyreachtheconclusionthat...8．AsfarasI'mconcerned.../Inmyopinion.../Frommypointofview...亮点分析：本文观点明确，层次清楚、条理，语句间衔接自然，逻辑性强，时态、人称运用正确，巧妙运用连接词，并注意了句式变化，既有简单句，又有复合句，使文章表达档次提高。亮点一：以疑问句式提出论点，开门见山，切题。亮点二：动词－ing结构分别作状语与主语，使句式结构复杂多样。亮点三：and，however，besides等关联词运用得当，使前后衔接自然。亮点四：定语从句的使用使句式结构复杂，内容条理。亮点五：表语从句使句式表达不落俗套，提升了文章档次。[类文演练]假设你是主持人，请你根据以下表格的信息给以“Shouldwegivemoneytobeggars？”为题的班会写一个总结。正反对比类作文一些人认为另一些人认为孤寡老人不能自食其力而乞讨；有些学生因家境困苦而辍学去乞讨；有些残疾人只能以乞讨为生。大部分都是假装的，乞讨只是他们赚钱的一条捷径；这么做会助长懒惰。结论：应该尽力帮助弱势群体，但给钱时一定要慎重注意：1.词数100左右；2．参考词汇：弱势群体inferiorgroup__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3[联想词汇]1.自食其力________________答案：liveonone'sown2.辍学________________答案：dropoutofschool3.假装做某事________________答案：pretendtodosth.4.鼓励某人做某事________________答案：encouragesb.todosth.[连词成句]1.我们今天就是否该给乞讨者钱进行了一个主题班会。Wehavehadaclassmeetingtodayon________________.答案：whetherweshouldgivemoneytobeggars2.他们认为，大多数乞讨者乞讨不是因为穷而是因为想更容易地赚钱。Theythinkmostofthebeggarsbegnotbecause________________butbecause________________.答案：they'repoor;theywanttomakemoneymoreeasily3.给钱会鼓励他们变得懒惰。Togivemoney________________.答案：willencouragethemtobelazy[连句成章]__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Wehavehadaclassmeetingtodayonwhetherweshouldgivemoneytobeggarsandwehavedifferentopinions.Somebelievethatweshouldgivemoneytobeggarsbecausesomeofthemareoldpeople,whocan'tliveontheirown.Amongthemarealsosomestudentswhohavedroppedoutofschoolbecausetheirfamiliesaresopoor.Andwecanalsoseesomedisabledpeople.Soweshouldgivemoneytothosewhoneedourhelpbadly.Ontheotherhand,however,manymorestudentsthinkweshouldn'tgivethemmoney.Theythinkmostofthebeggarsbegnotbecausetheyarepoorbutbecausetheywanttomakemoneymoreeasily.Theyarenotrealbeggars.Besides,togivemoneywould4encouragethemtobelazyeveniftheyhavetheabilitytowork.Ingeneral，weshouldhelpthepeopleoftheinferiorgroupbutwhenwegivemoneyweshouldbecareful.