高考英语书信类作文满分挑战---安慰建议信

1高考英语书面表达之信件类型分类：安慰信1.话题解析安慰建议信体裁属于应用文，人称主要为第一、第二人称，时态主要为一般现在时、一般将来时。安慰建议信一般包含三个要点：一、开头点题，表示关心和安慰，说明写信目的。二、主体部分，提出建议（一般在2点以上）。三、巧妙收尾，表达祝愿。2.词汇积累（1）常用词汇发挥重要作用exertaprofoundimpacton…makesignificant/substantial/valuable/outstandingcontributionsto…坚持stickto/persistin/perseverewith采取积极的态度adoptanoptimisticattitude尽管inspiteof遭受，遭遇beconfrontedwith因此hence优先的事物priority（2）常用句式①Iamexcessively(非常)sorrytohearthatyouaretrappedinbadmood,whichisbecause...听说你因为......而情绪低落，我深感抱歉。②However,itwon'tbeahardnuttocrackifyoucan...然而，如果你能够......的话，一切都不会太难。③Havingknownthatyouareunderpainfulstateandgreatpressurenow,I’mwritingtoexpressmygreatcomforttoyou.获悉你现在处境困难，压力巨大，我写信是为了表达我对你的慰藉。④WordsfailtoconveymyprofoundworrywhenIheardthat...听说......之后，我的担忧无法用言语来表达。⑤Mysorrowisbeyondwordsforhearingthat…听说......之后，我的悲伤无法言表。2⑥Nothingisbetterthan...没有什么东西比......更好。⑦Ideem(视作，相信）itadj.todo…我认为做......是......⑧Itisadvisableto.../onlybywhichcanyou.../Itishightimethat（虚拟）/Itisessentialforyouto.../Itisabrilliantwayto...我建议......（此处不逐个翻译）3.实战考题假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为暑期短他没休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：1、表示难过和理解；2、就如何调整状态提出建议。注意：1、词数100左右。2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。（1）写作思路第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，提出建议；第三步：表达愿望和祝愿。（2）词汇过关表达我的深刻理解extendmydeepunderstanding/haveastrongvibewithyou/inparallelwithyou陷入困境trapin/meetformidabletrouble/bepuzzledabout把自己沉浸在学习的氛围中immerseyourselfinthestudyatmosphere心情不佳inlowspirit/lackofspirit别将自己沉浸在悲伤当中don’tburyyourselfinastateofsadness失去动力的demotivated3疲劳fatigue全心全意地wholeheartedly3.星级句式第一段：表达理解，进行安慰WordsfailtoexpressmysympathywhenIheardthatyouareinbadconditionsmentallyandphysicallyonaccountofalackofrelaxationduringtheshortsummervacationrecently.UndertheheavyburdenofCollegeEntranceExamination,weareboundtobeconfrontedwithawiderangeofinevitablesetbacksandupsettingdifficulties.第二段：提出建议（1）任务分解，时间规划Therefore,it'snouseworryingbutdonothing,onlywhenyouclearupyourcomplexmindandtryyourmosttocatchupwiththenewtermcanyouworkyourproblemsout.Moreover,adetailedscheduleisofvitalimportance,whichcanhelpyoustrikeabalancebetweenstudyandyourleisuretime.（2）健康生活,适度运动Soit'snoexaggerationtosaythatyoualmostmakeasuccessonceyoucanmaintaintheequilibrium(平衡)betweenrecreationandstudy.What’smore,timepermitting,it’sasmartalternativetodosportsafterschool.Vitalashomeworkis,physicalfitnessalsoplaysanessentialroleinyourlife.（3）积极心态，向老师或家人倾诉Subsequently,onaccountofthegreatpressure,it’snecessaryforyoutorefreshyourselfandkeeppassionontheacademicwork.Ultimately，whenyouencountersomedifficulties,bothteachersandparentswillgiveyouahandifyouturntothem.第三段：希望建议有所帮助，并表达祝愿Ihopethesepracticalsuggestionsmentionedabovewillmakeadifferencetoyou.IsincerelyhopeyoucanmakeflexibleadjustmentstofitinwellwiththelifeofSenior3andIwillbedelightedifmyadvicemakessomedifferences.4.写一篇好作文（1）佳作赏析：4DearTony,Iammorethansorrytoknowthatyouareinsuchabadsituationundergoinggreatpressureofyourseniorthree’slife,①duetothelackofrestduringashortholiday.②Ican’tunderstandyoumoreasthesameaseniorstudentasyou.Butjusttakeiteasy.Inthehopeofofferingyousomehelp,Imakemysuggestionsasfollows.Tobeginwith,it’sessentialforyoutoadjustyourschedule,seekingabalancedstyletofitthenewschoollife,whichwillturntobebusyandmaybeabitofboringandtiring.Besides,tokeepcalmmentallyisalsoquitenecessaryforyou.③Asthesayinggoes,“Awatchedpotneverboiled.”Therefore,④it’snouseworryingbutdonothing,⑤onlydoyouclearupyourcomplexmindandtryyourmosttocatchupwiththenewtermcanyouworkyourproblemsout.Lastbutnotleast,findingwaysyouarefondofforyourdailyrelaxationcanbeawisechoice,suchassomesports,lightmusicandsomeexcellentarticles.Allinall,Isincerelywishmysuggestionscan⑥beofyourbenefitandhopeyoucangetridofthepresentsituationasearlyaspossible.Yours,LiHua名师点评：①dueto引导原因状语从句，简明扼要表达题目要求信息。②“as…as”结构的使用使文章开头便能抓住老师眼球。③添加谚语——心急水不开，展示积累，与后文建议的逻辑相符，从而增强了文章的可读性。常用进言谚语还有Nosweat,nosweet.或Nopains,nogains.(一分耕耘一分收获）④该句式的运用，可灵活表达自己的反对观点，还可用thereisnouse或itismeaningless/awasteoftimetodo作同义替换。⑤only引导半倒装条件句,但要注意此用法系only修饰整个句子，若only修饰主语，则不用倒装。⑥beofbenefit,getridof等课本短语的运用，显示出基础知识扎实的功底。（2）升级改写：改写前：DearTony,Hearingyouareoutofconditionnow,①Ifeelsopoor.②IcouldunderstanditbecauseIamexperiencingthesamestateasyou.Fortheshortvacation,youcanacceptthefollowingsuggestionsasthereferences.Firstly,③itisimportanttorelaxyourselfbecauseNCEEisnotawfulbutastepstonewhichisforyoutoreachthehigherlevel.Doingexerciseisthebestwaytoyourrelaxation.Secondly,④turningtoteacherforhelpaboutthestudyandlifeinthe12thgradecouldbemeaningful.⑤Teachersarenotonlyfamiliartoyoubutalsotothelife5inthisyear.Theycouldhelpyoutofindthesolutioninthisstage.Additionally,ifyoustillfeelstressful,thebestchoiceistohaveatripwithfriendsduringthebreaktimesothatyoucanforgeteverythingandfeelhigher.Ifyouneedfurtherhelp,youcancallmewheneveritisatyourconvenience.Iamwillingtohelpyou.The12thgradeisanimportantstageandjustfightforyourself.Yours,LiHua改写后：DearTony,①WordsfailedtoexpressmysympathyforyouwhenIheardthatyouareoutofcondition.②Puttingmyselfinyourshoes,IextendmyextremeunderstandingtoyouforIunderwentsomesuffering