通用版2021届高考英语百所名校好题速递分项汇编专题06书面表达第01期含解析

12020届高三百所名校好题精华速递分项汇编（1）之书面表达【2020届湖北省武汉市华中师范大学第一附属中学高考押题】假设你是李华，你校即将举办一场孔子思想讲座，主题是“见贤思齐焉，见不贤而内自省也”。请写邮件邀请对中国传统文化感兴趣的交换生Jim听讲座，内容包括:1.时间、地点；2.讲座主题；3.可能的收获。注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:《论语》TheAnalectsofConfucius儒家思想Confucianism____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Goodnewsforyou!TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.SinceyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,thisisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.Ifyouareinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.Yours,LiHua【解析】2这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Jim写信，邀请他参加学校即将举办的一场关于孔子思想的讲座。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主结构：总分总要求：1.时间、地点2.讲座主题3.可能的收获第二步：列提纲（重点词组）beinterestedin/bescheduled/keeparecord/focuson/shape/reflect/remembertodosth./worth第三步：连词成句1.Goodnewsforyou!2.TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.3.KnowingthatyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,Ithinkitisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.4.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.5.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.6.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.7.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.8.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.9.Ifinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/if/though/although…定语从句连词：which/that/when/where…3第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.中what引导宾语从句。【2020届河南省新乡市高三第三次模拟】假定你是你班英语科代表李华，得知许多同学长时间在网上学习英语。就此请你用英语给你班同学发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.陈述长时间在网上学习造成的影响；2.你的建议（控制时间，多种形式相结合等）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearclassmates,I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.Thus,astherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttoofferthefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Firstofall,wecanlimitonlinestudytimetothirtyminutesatime.Secondly,weshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning.That’stosay,onlineEnglishlearningshouldbereasonablycombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.Infact,wehavealotofthingstodobesidesstayingontheInternet,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandrelaxingourselvesoncein4awhile.Inshort,let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封电子邮件给同学们，说明长时间网上学习的影响并提出相关意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.写出背景信息，自己的得知同学们长时间网上学习，表达自己的意图。2.长时间网上学习的影响（doharmtoourbodies）3.提出建议1）限制上网时间（limitonlinestudytime）2）结合多种途径学习英语（combinevariousformsofEnglishlearning）3）做一些其他的事情（dosomewrittenassignmentsandpracticespokenEnglish）第二步：列提纲（重点词组）doharmto;combinedwith;Infact;spokenEnglish;onceinawhile第三步：连词成句1.I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.2.AstherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttooffersomesuggestions.3.Wecanlimitonlinestudytime.4.WeshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning5.OnlineEnglishlearningshouldbecombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.6.Wehavealotofthingstodo,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandpracticingspokenEnglishonceinawhile.57.Let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一