（浙江专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第一篇 教材考点梳理 话题写作（七）课件

话题写作（七）情感表达【话题点睛】该话题主要来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。[2018·衢州模拟]假如你是张凯,以下是你的加拿大笔友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件。请你根据该邮件内容给Tony回复并提出你自己的观点。典例分析FromTonyToZhangKaiSubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentDearZhangKai,Howisitgoing?Iamunhappyrecently.Myproblemismyparents.TheyneverstoptalkingabouthowIshouldkeepmyroomclean,studyharderorwearproperclothes.Theyevenmakemeeatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorning.Noneofmyfriendshassuchterribleparents.WhatshouldIdo?HowshouldIgetonwithmyparents?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,Tony[要求]（1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥;（2）文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;（3）词数:90—110。【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:通过Tony向朋友抱怨父母对自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,从而提出主题“怎样和父母相处?”要注意围绕主题以及真情实感的表达。本文可从以下方面展开:（1）提出观点:肯定父母的做法并非恶意,甚至应感到是幸运的;（2）具体论述:父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因;（3）提出建议:要理解父母,并注意怎样和父母相处;（4）本文涉及提建议,注意should,can,trytodo等词的使用。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句你有如此好的父母。（such）.→升格句我想对你来说有如此好的父母是幸运的。（It'sluckyforsb.to…）.2.基础句你发现你的父母在关心你吗?（careabout）.→升格句难道你没有发现你的父母在很多方面关心你吗?（Don'tyou…?inmanyways）.Youhavesuchgoodparents.Ithinkit'sluckyforyoutohavesuchgoodparents.Doyoufindyourparentsarecaringaboutyou?Don'tyoufindyourparentsarecaringaboutyouinmanyways?3.基础句他们希望你能有好的习惯。（havegoodhabits）.→升格句他们希望你能养成好的习惯。（getintogoodhabits）.4.基础句吃得好很重要。（It's+adj.+to…）.→升格句对于一个需要大量精力的青少年来说,吃得好很重要。（用who引导的定语从句）.Theyhopeyoucanhavegoodhabits.Theyhopeyoucangetintogoodhabits.It'simportanttoeatwell.Forateenagerwhoneedsalotofenergy,it'simportanttoeatwell.【连句成文】FromZhangKaiToTonySubjectHowtogetonwithparentsContentHi,Tony,Ithinkit'sluckyforyoutohavesuchgoodparents.Youshouldunderstandandrespectthem,andtrytodowhattheyaskyouto.Theyhavericherlifeexperienceandwantyoutobebetter.Asyourparents,theysurelyhopeyoubecomeanexcellentperson.Theiradviceishelpfulforyourfuture.（续表）ContentDon'tyoufindyourparentsarecaringaboutyouinmanyways?Theywantyoutokeepyourroomcleanbecausetheyhopeyoucangetintogoodhabitsandlivecomfortably.Theyaskyoutoworkhardersothatyoucangetagoodjobinthefuture.Theymakeyoueatanegganddrinkmilkeverymorninginorderthatyoucankeephealthy.Agoodbodyisgoodforstudy.Asteenagers,weneedalotofenergy,soit'simportanttoeatwell.（续表）ContentWhat'smore,everymembershouldberesponsibleanddosomethingforthefamily.Soyoushoulddowhatyoucando,suchaskeepingyourroomcleanandwearingproperclothes.Anyway,ifyouhaveanyproblems,justtalkwithyourparentsandshareyourideaswiththem.Ihopeyoucangetonwellwithyourparents.Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangKai【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。【亮点句型】学校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.3.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.A[2019·嘉兴]假如你是李华,你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者（volunteer）的广告。请根据广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目,选择其中一个,结合自己的实际情况,给项目负责人写一封电子邮件,表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望,并阐述理由。实战演练[注意]（1）邮件中必须包括招募广告中的信息,可适当发挥;（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;（3）词数:80—100。开头和结尾仅供参考,不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,I‘mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Iwanttobeavolunteer.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Iwanttobeavolunteer.IhopeIcanhelpthelocalstudentsinaprimaryschoolinthenorthofThailand.Ihavealreadymadesomeplansforthisproject.Firstofall,Iwillsetupasmalllibrary,whichcanhelpchildrengetmoreknowledge.ThenIwillgivethemsomeChineselessons.ThepurposeistoletthemknowmoreaboutChineseculture.Inaddition,Iwillplaygameswiththem.Iamgoodatplayingbasketballandfootball.MaybeIcansetupabasketballteamforthem.Ifyougivemethechance,Iwilldomybesttohelpthem.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHuaB[2019·宁波]回顾初中三年,有许多事令人难忘。校英语报“HaveYourSay”栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华,请你选择其中一个话题,并结合具体事例,用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意,参加此次征文活动。[要点如下]Say“thanks”toSay“sorry”to1.benotgoodat…2.encouragemeto…3.makegreatprogress4.…1.arguewith…2.nottalktoeachother3.regretdoing…4.…[注意]（1）短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点,并适当拓展;（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;（3）词数:80—100。书信格式已给出;（4）首句供参考:Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosay…Dear,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosayYours,LiHuaPossibleversion1:DearAlice,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaythankstoyouforhelpingmewithmyEnglish.WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotgoodatEnglish.Ijusthidbehindmytextbookandneversaidanythinginclass.OnceIdidverybadinanEnglishtest,andIlostheart.However,youhadapatienttalkwithmeandencouragedmetobemoreactiveinclass.Sincethen,Ihaveworkedharderandmadegreatprogress.Ifeelluckytobeyourstudent.Thankyouagain.Wishyougoodluck.Yours,LiHuaPossibleversion2:DearAlan,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaysorrytoyouforarguingwithyou.WhenwewereinGrade8,welostthechancetogetthefirstprizeinthefootballmatch.Ineverstoppedcomplainingtoyouthatitwasyouwhomissedthegoal.Butyoushoutedbackthatyouwerenottheonlyreason.Youwalkedoffangrily.Fromthenon,wedidn'ttalktoeac