（山东专用）2020版高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作 第2讲 整齐有致的并列句课件 外研版

第2讲整齐有致的并列句一、魔法导航并列句是由并列连词连接两个分句而组成的句子,其基本结构是:简单句+并列连词+简单句。并列句中的前后两个分句的逻辑关系可分为以下几种:1.并列或递进:常用连词是and,notonly...butalso(不仅……而且……)。典句引领NotonlyishethefirstChinesetogotospace,butalsoheisoneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.他不仅是第一个进入太空的中国人,而且是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。雕词琢句(1)Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch(下面的信息可能让你了解概况).(2018课标全国卷Ⅲ)(2)Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit'smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijing(并且带你在北京四处逛逛是我的荣幸).(3)剪纸是中国的传统之一,而且我相信你会喜欢它的。(2017课标全国卷Ⅱ)Paper-cuttingisoneoftheChinesetraditionsandIamsureyouwilllikeit.2.转折:常用的连词是but和yet。典句引领Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.第二,这种投票并不取决于竞争者的优势,而是取决于他们掌握了多少社交网络资源。(2016江苏卷)雕词琢句(1)Maybethetrainingisabitdifficultforyou,butyoucanimproveyourskillsquickly(但是你可以迅速提高你的技能)throughit.(2)Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreim-portanttobesincere(但是更重要的是真诚).(3)Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain/itisuseless(但是没有用).(2018浙江卷)(4)我想去博物馆,但是我的同班同学绝大部分人想去野餐。Iwouldlovetogotoamuseum,butmostofmyclassmateswantedtogoforapicnic.3.原因:常用的连词是for。典句引领Itmusthaverainedlastnight,forthegroundiswet.昨晚肯定下雨了,因为地面是湿的。雕词琢句他阅读有困难,因为他的视力不好。Hehastroubleinreading,forhissightispoor.(for连接的并列句)4.对比:常用的连词是while。典句引领Atschool,somestudentsareactivewhilesomeareshy.在学校,有些学生积极,而有些学生害羞。雕词琢句(1)Goodhabitscancontributetohighlearningefficiency,whilebadonesleadtotheopposite(而坏习惯结果却恰恰相反).(2)SomepeoplearefondofenjoyingmoviesatthecinemawhilesomeprefertowatchmoviesontheInternet(而有些人更喜欢在网上看电影).二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,将并列句补充完整。NodoubteverySenior3studentwishestobesuccessfulintheNationalCollegeEntranceExamination,(1)butwhatshouldwedo(但是我们应该做什么)inordertoachievesuccess?Herearesomesuggestions.First,it'sveryimportanttohavearightattitude,(2)foranormalstateofmindandself-confidencecanhelpustorelax(因为一种正常的心态和自信心可以帮助我们放松)andenableustoovercomedifficultiesbravely.Meanwhile,weshouldhaveadefinitegoal(3)andweshouldevaluateourselvescorrectly(并且我们应该正确地评价自己).Onlyinthiswaywillwenotbeeasilypleasedordisappointedwithwhatwehaveknownanddone.Besides,we'dbettertalkwithourparents,teachersandclassmates,(4)andtheymayhelpusout(他们可能会帮助我们摆脱困境)whenweareintrouble.Finally,keepingaproperbalancebetweenstudyandrestkeepsusenergetic(5)andahealthydietisusefulaswell(健康的饮食也有用).Withthesedone,Ithinkwecangreatlyimproveourperformance.2.话题写作【本期话题】语言学习【写作微练】根据下面的信息提示,就“如何学好英语”写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.养成听、读英语的习惯;2.经常背诵英语短文以提高英语语感;3.坚持写英语日记,提高写作能力;4.增强自信心,勇于直面困难。注意:至少运用两种并列句。答案Onepossibleversion:InordertohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,wecandovariousthings.Tobeginwith,weshouldmakeitaroutinetolistentoandreadEnglish.Inad-dition,reciteEnglisharticlesfrequently,foritisofbenefittodevelopingourlanguagesense.Moreover,it'sagoodideatokeepEnglishdiariesev-eryday,orwecan'timproveourwritingabilityinashorttime.Lastbutnotleast,notonlyshouldwebuildupourconfidence,butalsoweshouldfacedifficultybravely.三、实战提能假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。◆我会审题文章体裁应用文主要人称第二人称主体时态一般现在时要点分解1.话题引入(告知相关习俗)2.到达时间3.合适的礼物4.餐桌礼仪我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)准时地punctually(2)合适的appropriate(3)注意payattentionto(4)约定时间theappointedtime(5)餐桌礼仪tablemanners(6)与……相似besimilarto(7)玩得高兴havegreatfun/enjoyoneself2.句型搭桥(1)bearinmindthat...(2)beofgreatsignificanceto...(3)It'svitalthat... 我会表达答案Onepossibleversion:DearTerry,Iamdelightedwhenreceivingyourletteraskingwhatcustomsyoushouldpayattentiontowhenvisitingafriend.Herearemytipsforyou.Firstofall,bearinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthantheappointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.Additionally,toberespectful,youmightaswellbringanap-propriategift,likesomefruits.Mostimportantly,it'svitalthatyoushouldmindyourtablemanners.Forinstance,neverspeakwithyourmouthfulloffood,whichmaybesimilartoyourowncustom.Inbrief,doasChinesedowheninChina.Idohopeyouwillhavegreatfunatyourfriend'shome.Yourssincerely,LiHua美句必背1.Ithinkitisveryimportantthatyoumindyourtablemanners.2.Justasthesayinggoes,“DoasRomansdowheninRome.”实战提能