（呼和浩特专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第一篇 教材考点梳理 话题写作（02）快乐成长课件

话题写作（二）快乐成长[话题来源:七下M7,八下M1、M2]【话题点睛】话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。涉及的要点:(1)成长体验及感悟;(2)成长烦恼与困惑;(3)关于更好地成长的方法与建议。【典型例题】[2019·呼和浩特]临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是Rainbow小组的组长ZhangHong,请你为你的组员LiMing进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告。[内容包括]1.他的爱好;2.他的优点(两条);3.他的缺点或存在的问题;4.你对他的建议(两条)。典例分析[要求]1.表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;2.要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥,但不得出现真实班级、姓名等;3.词数:不少于80词(所给内容不计入总词数)。LiMingisamemberofmyteamcalledRainbow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文针对本组成员LiMing的爱好、优缺点进行评价,并为他的成长和改进提出两条合理建议。可以提炼出三个要点:(1)他的爱好及优点;(2)他的缺点或问题;(3)你的建议。2.时态:一般现在时。3.人称:第三人称和第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句他总是乐于助人。(helpotherpeople)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(givesb.ahand;inreturn)HeisalwaysreadytohelpotherpeopleHeisalwaysreadytogiveothersahandwhenevertheyareintroublewithoutaskingforanythinginreturn2.基础句他也能与老师们和同学们相处融洽。(getonwellwithsb.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(formagoodrelationshipwithsb.)3.基础句有时他在学业上不够努力。(enough)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(realizetheimportance;behard-working)HecanalsogetonwellwithteachersandclassmatesHecanalsoformgoodrelationshipswithteachersaswellasclassmatesSometimeshedoesn’tworkhardenoughonhislessonsSometimeshedoesn’trealizetheimportanceofbeinghard-workingonhislessons【连句成文】LiMingisamemberofmyteamcalledRainbow.Generallyspeaking,heisawarm-heartedandoutgoingboy.Heisalwaysreadytogiveothersahandwhenevertheyareintroublewithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.Besides,hecanalsoformgoodrelationshipswithteachersaswellasclassmates.Inhissparetime,helikesreadingbooksonhistory,soheknowsalotofknowledgeabouthistory.Althoughtheadvantagesaboveareimportantfactorsinevaluatinghim,someshortcomingsshouldn’tbeignored.Sometimeshedoesn’trealizetheimportanceofbeinghard-workingonhislessons.Iadvisehimtospendmoretimeonthesubjectsfromnowon.What’smore,it’sbetterforhimtoanswerquestionsinclassactivelysothathecanunderstandtheknowledgewell.I’msurethatifhecantryhardertoimprovehimself,he’llmakesteadyprogresssoonandbetheprideofourwholeteam.【导入主题句】1.Asaproverbgoes,“Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.”2.Someofusmayhaveproblemswithourparentswhojustwanttoconnectwithusbutaredoingitallwrong.3.It’sreallyimportantforustohaveagoodmoodinourdailylife.4.Thereisnothingbetterthanthat.5.IstillrememberthedaywhenIgotalowgradeinmyEnglishexam.拓展积累【文章的发展句】1.Tomyjoy,notonlyhaveourskillsimprovedalot,butallofusaremoreresponsibleforourteam.2.Mostimportantly,youwillhaveanoptimisticeffectonthepeoplearoundyou.3.WheneverImadeprogressinstudies,myparentsboughtmemyfavouritebooks,whichnotonlymotivatedmetolearn,butalsohelpedmegetalongwellwithmystudies.4.Allthatremindsmeofmymother/fatherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershe/hecouldtoletmehavethebest.5.AsIamawayfrommyparents,itisnecessaryformetolearnhowtodealwithproblemsonmyown.【文章的结尾句】1.Weareprettysurethateverythingwillbebetterwithtimepassingby.2.Ilovemymotherwholeadsmetoabrightandrightwayinmylife.3.Fromthenon,wheneverIwasabouttogiveup,hersmilewouldappearinmymindandcheeredmeupatonce.4.Thisisreallyaverygoodactivity,isn’tit?5.Inshort,atnotimecanweforgettothankourparentsbecausetheyarethedearestpeopletous.A[2019·遂宁]在成长过程中,青少年面临越来越多的烦恼,主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。[要点提示]1.导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因:(1)学业;(2)与他人相处。实战演练2.减少压力的措施:(1)积极参加课外活动;(2)多与他人交流沟通。3.简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。(至少一点)[注意]1.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯;3.不可逐词翻译,应有独自的见解并适当发挥;4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Ontheonehand,itmaybecausedbytheirschoolwork.Toomuchhomeworkandlesssparetimemakethemunhappy.Ontheotherhand,theproblemsingettingonwithotherpeoplemayhaveaneffectontheirhighpressure.However,toomuchpressureisnotgoodforteenagers’development.Sohowtodealwiththesepressures?Takingpartinafter-schoolactivitiesisaveryusefulway.Besides,morecommunicationwithothersoftenworks,especiallywhentheyfeelupset.Allinall,weshouldtryourbesttodealwiththestressandkeephealthybothinbodyandmind.B[2019·连云港改编]减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。请你根据提示,以“HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?”