（河北专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第一篇 教材考点梳理 话题写作06 情感表达课件 人教新目标版

话题写作（六）情感表达【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢?请你以“LessPressure,BetterLife”为题,根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。典例分析Stress人们会因困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤,承受着巨大的压力Waystorelax改变你的想法想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是想那些麻烦你还可以这样做听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等,这些都能让你高兴起来寻求帮助,和父母、老师或朋友多沟通Mypoints耐心一点儿。其实困难也许并不可怕,相信我们的生活会更美好[要求]（1）不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;（2）语句通顺、语意连贯;（3）词数:100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]undermuchpressure,dealwith,changeone'smind,thinkabout,insteadof,cheerup,forhelp,justneedtoLessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Thankyouforyourcomingtoday.I'mverygladthatallofyouarefullofhopeforthefuture.That'sall.Thankyou.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是讲面对压力,如何来处理。文章主要有三个要点:（1）压力概述;（2）减压措施;（3）自己的观点。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称:第三人称,第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。）1.我们应该尽力采取一些措施去处理它。（trytodosth.）Weshouldtodealwithit.2.我们可以改变我们的想法。（changeone'smind）Wecan.3.想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是那些麻烦。（insteadof）yourfavouritepeopleorthings.trytotakesomemeasureschangeourmindsThinkaboutinsteadofthosetroubles4.我们可以参加更多的活动,例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。（suchas）Wecantakepartinmoreactivities,andthefootballteam.5.我们可以尽可能多地发现机会去和别人交流。（as…as…）Wecanfindasmanycommunicatewithothers.suchasthemusicclubopportunitiesaspossibletoⅡ.句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。）1.Somestudentsstudyveryhard.Theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.（用though改写句子）2.Othersthinktheyhavemuchhomeworktodo.Andtheyhavenotimetoplay.（用so…that…改写句子）3.Wecantakepartinmoreactivities.Alltheseactivitiescanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.（用定语从句改写句子）Thoughsomestudentsstudyveryhard,theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.Othersthinktheyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavenotimetoplay.Wecantakepartinmoreactivitieswhichcanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.4.Wecanreduceourstressbytakingtheabovesuggestions.（用onlyby位于句首改写句子）Onlybytakingtheabovesuggestionscanwereduceourstress.【连句成文】LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Thankyouforyourcomingtoday.I'mverygladthatallofyouarefullofhopeforthefuture.Whenitcomestopressure,itisaseriousproblemintoday'sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Thoughsomestudentsstudyveryhard,theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.Theyoftenworryabouttheirexams.Othersthinktheyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavenotimetoplay.Weshouldtrytotakesomemeasurestodealwithit.First,wecanchangeourminds.Thinkaboutourfavouritepeopleorthingsinsteadofthosetroubles.Second,wecantakepartinmoreactivities,suchasthemusicclubandthefootballteam,whichcanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.Finally,wecanfindasmanyopportunitiesaspossibletocommunicatewithothers,suchasourparents,teachersandfriends.Asforme,I'malwaysunderpressure,too.However,itdoesn'tmatter.Ithinkonlybytakingtheabovesuggestionscanwereduceourstress.That'sall.Thankyou!【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbours.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。拓展积累【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Amongallmyfriends,LiHuaimpressedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandhelpful.2.MygrandmotheristhepersonwhoIwanttothankmost.Shehashelpedmealot.3.Thefamilyisthegreatest.Nomatteryouarehappy,painfulorlost,itwillgentlyonyourway,quietlywithyourlife.4.Thereissadnessaswellashappinessinourlifesocherishwhatyouhave.文章发展、过渡句1.Heencouragedmetobebrave.Hetoldme,“You'dbetterspeakslowlyandclearly,andinthisway,youcanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily.”2.Assoonasshefoundoutmyproblems,shetalkedwithmeandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.3.Withherencouragement,Ihavemadegreatprogress.4.Heheldmyhandtightly.Inthisway,Iwasnotafraidanymore.5.Heneverscoldsme.ButIalwayslistentohimandfollowhim.文章结尾句1.Ireallywanttosay“Thankyouforhelpingme.Iloveyou!”tomygrandmother.2.Iwillalwaysrememberherkindnessandbegrateful.3.Whathesaidandwhathedidwillinfluencemeallmylife.A[2020·原创]学会感恩,为自己已有的而感恩,感谢生活对你的赠予。请你以“LearntoBeThankful”为题,写一篇英语短文。[提示]（1）Someoneeverhelpedme.（2）Ihelpedsomeone.（3）Ithink…实战演练[要求]（1）短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;（2）文章必须包括所给的提示,可展开思路,适当发挥;（3）文章中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和其他真实信息;（4）词数:80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。[参考词汇]so…that;helpeachother;befullofLearntoBeThankfulIstillrememberOnepossibleversion:LearntoBeThankfulIstillrememberarainydaywhenIwasinGrade7.Onthatday,Ioversleptandhurriedtoschoolbybike.AtastreetcornerIfelldownandhurtmylegssobadlythatIcouldn'tmoveatall.Apasser-bysentmetothehospitalatonce.IwassothankfulthatIdecidedtohelpothersfromthenon.Afewweekslater,onmywaytoschool,Isawablindmanstandingatacrossing.Ihelpedhimcrossthestreetandshowedhimtotheplacehewantedtogoto.It'simportantforustolearntobethankful.Ifwecanhelpeachother,theworldwillbefulloflove.B[2019·石家庄模拟]假如你是你们学校校报JustAsk栏目的编辑Jane,你刚刚收到李华同学的信件,她向你倾诉了心中的烦恼,希望你能为她提供有益的建议。请你根据下面提示,给她回信,提出合理建议。[提示]（1）Whycan'tshemakefriends?（2）Whatshouldshedotosolvetheproblem?[要求]（1）短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;（3）词数:80左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。DearLiHua,You'reasmartstudent,andthat'sgood.JaneOnepossibleversion:DearLiHua,You'reasmartstudent,andthat'sgood.However,canyourememberwhateverybodysaidatschooltoday?Probablynot.Andtheycan't,either.That'sbecauseyou,likemostpeople,don'topenyourhearttoothers.Toovercomeshynessandmakefriends,pleaseope