（包头专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作03 休闲活动课件

话题写作(三)休闲活动【典型例题】[2019·包头]假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alan写一封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行计划,你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。邮件还应包括以下内容:典例分析Yourarrivaltime10:30a.m.,July2Yourtravelplangotoaconcertgocamping…Meansoftransport(交通方式)duringyourvisitbybike,bybus…一、审——圈要点、定时态、定人称假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alan写一封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行计划,你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。邮件还应包括以下内容:Yourarrivaltime10:30a.m.,July2Yourtravelplangotoaconcertgocamping…Meansoftransport(交通方式)duringyourvisitbybike,bybus…二、列——列短语,尽可能为习惯用语·gotoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation·arriveat10:30a.m.,onJuly2·meetmeattheairport·madeatravelplan·gotoaconcert·gocamping·visitingsomeplacesofinterest·goingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit·pleasegivemesomeadvice三、加——定人称(第一人称和第二人称)、定时态(一般将来时)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。DearAlan,Howisitgoing?I'mgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.Iwillarriveat10:30a.m,onJuly2.Canyoumeetmeattheairport?Ihavemadeatravelplan.Iwillgotoaconcert.Iwillgocamping.I'mgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.Idon'tknowifI'mgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.Pleasegivemesomeadvice.四、连——添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯——保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。DearAlan,Howisitgoing?I'mgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.AndIwillarriveat10:30a.m.,onJuly2.Canyoumeetmeattheairport?Atthesametime,Ihavemadeatravelplan.Firstly,Iwillgotoaconcert.ThenIplantogocamping.Also,I'mgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.ButIdon'tknowifI'mgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.Pleasegivemesomeadvice.I'msureIwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.Yours,LiHua五、美——表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。[及时体验]DearAlan,Howisitgoing?基础句I'mgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.升格句I'mthinkingoftakingatriptoyourcitythissummervacation.发展句Becauseit'ssuchabeautifulplacethat,Idreamforalongtime.基础句AndIwillarriveat10:30a.m.,onJuly2.Canyoumeetmeattheairport?升格句Iwonderifyouwillmeetmeattheairportat10:30a.m.,onJuly2sinceit'smyfirsttimetovisitthere.Atthesametime,Ihavemadeatravelplan.基础句Firstly,Iwillgotoaconcert.ThenIplantogocamping.Also,I'mgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.升格句Includingenjoyingmusicataconcert,goingcampingandvisitingsomeplacesofinterest.基础句ButIdon'tknowifI'mgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.基础句Pleasegivemesomeadvice.升格句Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Eithertravelingbybikeorbybuswouldsuitmefine.I'msureIwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.发展句Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingvacation?六、查——典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁——书写定天下!DearAlan,Howisitgoing?I'mthinkingoftakingatriptoyourcitythissummervacation,becauseit'ssuchabeautifulplacethatIdreamforalongtime.Iwonderifyouwillmeetmeattheairportat10:30a.m.,onJuly2sinceit'smyfirsttimetovisitthere.Besides,Ihavemadeatravelplan,includingenjoyingmusicataconcert,goingcampingandvisitingsomeplacesofinterest.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Eithertravelingbybikeorbybuswouldsuitmefine.I'msureIwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingvacation?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua[2019·泰州]为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。[活动内容]1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。[你的感想]1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习,报效祖国;3.……(考生自己发挥)。实战演练[要求]1.词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。[参考词汇]市民广场CivicSquareInordertoenrichJunior3students'after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.___________________________________Onepossibleversion:InordertoenrichJunior3students'after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.Weareallhappytohaveachancetoknowmoreaboutourcity.Everyonehadameaningfulday.Inthemorning,wevisitedPeople'sParkinourcity.Weenjoyedthebeautifulviewthere.Moreover,wehadasonganddanceparty.Mostofustookalotofphotostoremembertheexcitingmoments.Intheafternoon,wewatchedthepictureshow.Manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryandcity.It'samazingforustoknowthesechanges.Iwillfinishmymiddleschoolsoon.Thankteachersandclassmatesforgivingmesomuchhelp.Idecidetostudyhardtoworkforourcountry.Ourcityissobeautifulthatitiswellworthvisiting.Welcometoourcityandenjoyyourselfhere.