2020年高中英语 Unit 4 Wildlife Protection Section Ⅳ Gra

Unit4WildlifeprotectionSectionⅣGrammar&Writing第二板块单元写作建议信美文写作指导[文体感知]建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。其基本结构分为三部分：开头——说明写信的原因；主体——陈述建议的具体内容，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处；结尾——提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。[增分佳句]1．Itisreportedthatmoreandmorespeciesofwildlifearedyingout.2．Thereasonwhythenumberofthewildlifeisdecreasingisthattheirlivingplaceshavebeenbadlydestroyed.3．Inmoderntimes，withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtheimprovementofpeople'slife,moreandmoretreeshavebeencutdown.4．Ithinkstricterlawsmustbemadetopunishpeoplewhohuntfortherareanimals.5．Asaresult，theseendangeredanimalsevendieout.6．So，it'sthetimeforustoprotectourforestsandlivingenvironment.7．Onlyinthiswaycanwesavethemintime.8．Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.经典写作示例[写作要求]假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。但以下几条要点要包括在内：1．野生动植物的现状；2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。注意：1．词数100字左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[审题谋篇]体裁应用文之建议信时态一般现在时主题环境保护人称第三人称结构首段：描述现状中段：分析原因，提出措施尾段：提出希望[遣词造句]1．普通表达(1)开头：描述现状①正如我们所知，许多野生动植物物种正面临灭绝。Asweknow,manyspeciesofwildlife______________________________.areindangerofextinction(2)主体：分析原因，提出措施②这是因为野生动植物的生存环境遭到了极大的破坏。Thisisbecausetheenvironmentthattheyarelivingin__________________________.③随着城市的发展，水和空气被严重污染。_________________________cities,waterandair_____________________________.hasbeendestroyedgreatlyWiththedevelopmentofareseriouslypolluted④它们不仅缺乏食物，而且有时还会被人猎杀。Theyhavelittletoeatandalsocan___________byhumanbeings.⑤这些野生动植物是我们生活的重要部分，我们应该采取更多的措施保护它们免遭伤害。Thesespeciesofwildlifeare__________________________.Moremeasuresshouldbetaken____________________________.bekilledimportantpartofourlifetoprotectthemfrombeinghurt⑥制定更多法律以阻止人们砍伐树木。Morelawsmustbemade_______________________________________.⑦所有工厂在排废水之前必须净化废水。Allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewater__________________________riversorlakes.⑧建立更多的动植物保护区以便它们安全地生活。Morereservesshouldbesetup________________________.tostoppeoplefromcuttingdownbeforeitissothattheycanlivesafelypouredintotrees(3)结尾：提出希望⑨我希望我的建议有帮助。Ihopemysuggestionsare________________.helpful/ofhelp2．高级表达(1)用notonly...butalso...改写句④________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)用恰当的过渡语连接句⑥⑦⑧____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theynotonlyhavelittletoeat,butalsocanbekilledbyhumanbeings.Firstly,morelawsmustbemadetostoppeoplefromcuttingdowntrees.Secondly,allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewaterbeforeitispouredintoriversorlakes.Thirdly/Lastly,morereservesshouldbesetupsothattheycanlivesafely.[妙笔成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:DearSirorMadam,I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.Asweknow,manyspeciesofwildlifeareindangerofextinction.Thisisbecausetheenvironmentthattheyarelivinginhasbeendestroyedgreatly.Withthedevelopmentofcities,waterandairareseriouslypolluted.Theirlivingareasarebecomingsmallerandsmaller.Theynotonlyhavelittletoeat,butalsocanbekilledbyhumanbeings.Thesespeciesofwildlifeareimportantpartofourlife.Personally,moremeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectthemfrombeinghurt.Firstly,morelawsmustbemadetostoppeoplefromcuttingdowntrees.Secondly,allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewaterbeforeitispouredintoriversorlakes.Thirdly,morereservesshouldbesetupsothattheycanlivesafely.Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.Yourssincerely,LiHua