2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 24 Society Period 6 Writing课件

返回目录SocietyUnit24返回目录PeriodSixWriting议论文返回目录写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents返回目录写作技法指导【基本结构】写议论文时，要明确写作的主题和对象，掌握正确的用词和格式。写作时一般遵循以下几个步骤：1．提出论点。首先要仔细审题，在此基础上根据对题目的理解和要求提出论点。论点要简明扼要、旗帜鲜明、通俗易懂、富有理性。返回目录2．给出论据。论据是用来说明论点的，要从各个不同的角度和层次给出论据，层层展开，步步深入。论据要典型，说理性要强，既可以是身边的实例或可靠的报道，也可以是名人名言等。总之，论据要充分，这样才能说明问题。3．得出结论。有了论据，就要围绕论点进行合理的分析，作出恰当的逻辑推理和判断，以此证明论点的正确性，最后推出结论。返回目录【增分佳句】1．Asisknowntoall,itisimportanttobe/do…2．Ithinkthereareatleasttworeasonsfor…3．FromwhatIhavementionedabove,wecanseethatwithout…wecannot…4．Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.5．Somepeoplethinkthat…6．Othersarguethat…返回目录7．Intheiropinion,nobodycan…without…8．Comparedwith…，…hasalotofadvantagesover…9．Thereisnodoubtthat…10．Inshort,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat…11．Peopletake/have/adoptdifferentviewsabout…12．Itisgenerallyconsideredthat…13．There'sawidespreadconcernabout…返回目录佳作构建示例【写作要求】请观察右图，请以“Whereismyhome？”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括：1．简述图画所反映的两个环境问题；2．简析成因；3．发表自己的看法。注意：文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：mask口罩返回目录Whereismyhome?Somefishareforcedtoleavepollutedwaterandareflyinginthesky.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________返回目录第一步审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为_______体报告；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称为第_____人称；3．确定时态：主体部分用________时态。二、构思第一部分：简述图画所反映的两个环境问题。第二部分：简析成因。第三部分：发表自己的看法。议论文三一般现在返回目录第二步核心词汇想周全1．_______________________________大量的2．________________________________________因此3．____________________值得4．________________________多种多样的5．______________________________而且6．__________________________导致7．_____________________________采取措施8．________________________形成abundant/agreatdealof/quantitiesofconsequently/inconsequence/asaresult/thereforedeserve/beworthdiverse/allkindsof/variousmoreover/furthermore/what'smorecontributeto/leadto/resultintakemeasures/takeactioncomeintobeing/form返回目录第三步由词扩句雏形现1．但不幸的是，这儿依然有大量的污染了的空气，因此，它们不得不戴上口罩。(and连接的并列句)2．它们当中的每一个都在呼喊“我的家在哪儿？”。(主谓宾)3．这值得我们思考。(主谓宾)Butunfortunately,thereisstillabundantpollutedair,andconsequently,theyhavetowearmasks.Eachofthemiscrying,“whereismyhome？”Itdeservesourthinking.返回目录4．我们无视环境保护导致了整个自然平衡的破坏。(主谓宾；contributeto)5．我们坚持认为：我们应该采取有效措施保护我们的家园。(主谓宾；insist)Ourignoranceoftheenvironmentprotectioncontributestothewholebalanceofnaturebeingdestroyed.Weinsistthatmanshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourhomeland.返回目录6．我们为防止这种场面的发生而做点事情的时候到了。(It'stimeforsbtodosth)It'stimeforustodosomethingtopreventsuchascenefromhappening.返回目录第四步句式升级造亮点1．用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句2和句32．用It'shightimethat…句型改写句6Eachofthemiscrying,“whereismyhome？”，whichdeservesourthinking.It'shightimethatwedid/shoulddosomethingtopreventsuchascenefromhappening.返回目录第五步过渡衔接联成篇Whereismyhome?Somefishareforcedtoleavepollutedwaterandareflyinginthesky.Butunfortunately,thereisstillabundantpollutedair,andconsequently,theyhavetowearmasks.Eachofthemiscrying,“whereismyhome？”，whichdeservesourthinking.Recently,diversepollutedmaterialshavecomeintobeingeverywhere.Wasteisbeingpouredintoriversandseas.Poisonsthatkillpestsinfarmingandchemicalsgointoriversandseas,too.Moreover,poisonousgasesfromfactoriesalsomaketheairsodirty.Ourignoranceoftheenvironmentprotectioncontributestothewholebalanceofnaturebeingdestroyed.返回目录Weinsistthatmanshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourhomeland.Natureisnotwhatitusedtobe.Whatiffishdiedfromseriouspollution?It'shightimethatwedid/shoulddosomethingtopreventsuchascenefromhappening.返回目录