2019-2020学年高中英语 Module 6 Old and New Section Ⅴ Wri

SectionⅤWriting—描述今昔对比的电子邮件[写作技法指导]描述今昔对比的电子邮件时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类书面表达的一般写作格式为：1．开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化)；2．对过去情况的描述(用过去时态，主要是一般过去时)；3．对现在情况的描述(用现在时态，主要是一般现在时)；4．总结句。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章常用开头语Ibegtotakethisopportunitytoinformyouthat...Ihavethepleasuretotellyouthat...ThankyouforyouremailofMay16th.Ihavereceivedyourmessagetoday.Howareyougettingalongwithyourdailylife?常用话题引入语Ifso,pleaseemailmeinresponse.AsfarasIknow...Asto/foryourquestion...I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.常用结束语Waitingforyourgoodnews.Hopingyouareenjoyinggoodhealth.Enjoyagoodday!Pleasekeepintouchwithme.Withkind/bestregards.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Pleasewritetomesoonandtellmeaboutyour...Hopeyouwill...[三步写作规范][题目要求]假定你是李华，根据下面的提示，给你的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍你祖父母所居住的村子的情况：1．大小：近100户人家，约500人。2．变化：过去很穷，1978年后变化很大；生活水平比以前好多了；现已旧貌换新颜。3．教育：原来的学校很小，现已改建；新建的教学楼有四层，是村里最美的建筑物；村里所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1.要点齐全，前后连贯；2．词数100左右。DearTom,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutthevillagewheremygrandparentslive.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHua第一步搜索词汇1．……人口2．过去常常3．过着……的生活4．呈现新面貌5．在过去6．而且apopulationofusedtolivea...lifetakeonanewlookinthepaswhat'smore第二步由词造句1．这个村庄是个小村庄，近100户人家，约500人。①Thevillageisasmallone．②Thevillageisasmallone．whichhasnearly100familiesandapopulationof500peoplewithnearly100familiesandapopulationof500people2．新建的教学楼有四层，是村里最美的建筑物。①Thenewly­builtteachingbuildingisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.②Thenewly­builtteachingbuildingandthemostbeautifulinthevillage.whichhas4storeyshas4storeysitis第三步连句成篇DearTom,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutthevillagewheremygrandparentslive.Thevillageisasmallonewhichhasnearly100familiesandapopulationof500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peopleherearelivingabetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolwasverysmallandmostchildrencouldn'taffordtogotoschool.Butnowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewly­builtteachingbuildingwhichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool­agechildrencanstudyhere.What'smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHua