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Unit4WildlifeprotectionSectionⅤWriting——建议信写作技法指导[文体指导]建议信的目的是向有关组织或个人提出建议,而且这种建议带有劝说性。此类信通常向对方传达对某事物的关心和针对某事物的不足之处提出改进的建议和措施。一、基本结构1.开头说明写信的原因、理由以及自己的目的、想法。2.主体围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题,用委婉的语气提出自己的建议或看法,并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。3.结尾提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。二、注意事项1.人称和时态的合理使用。2.语言要委婉、中肯,建议要合理,表达要清楚。3.写作要点不能遗漏,表达方式要多样,行文须连贯,过渡要自然。[亮点句式]一、建议信开头常用句式1.Iamsorrytoknowthat...2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto...3.Iknowyouhavetroublein...4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof...5.Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions.二、建议信主体段落常用句式,给出建议1.first,firstly,secondly...then,afterthat,intheend,finally,meanwhile...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...三、建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华,请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封100词左右的建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(Tibetanantelopes)的数量大约为100万只,现在只剩不到30万只,数量急剧减少建议1.加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传(publicize)力度;2.增加保护资金;3.派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊。[审题谋篇]体裁建议信时态以一般现在时为主主题保护藏羚羊人称以第三人称为主结构第一段:说明写信的原因第二段:用委婉的语气提出自己的建议第三段:提出自己的希望[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1.n.重要(性)2.以便3.在危险中4.灭亡;逐渐消失dieoutimportancesothatindanger5.……的数量6.保护……不受……(危害)7.从……减少到……decreasefrom...to...thenumberof...protect...from...Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1.1990年大约有100万只藏羚羊。___________about1,000,000Tibetanantelopesin1990.2.藏羚羊的数量正在迅速减少,现在不到300000。____________theTibetanantelopeslessthan300,000atpresent.isdecreasingrapidlytoTherewereThenumberof3.我们必须立即采取措施保护藏羚羊免于灭绝。Wemusttakeimmediatemeasures_________________________________________.4.首先,保护藏羚羊的重要性应该通过你们的协会加大宣传。First,Tibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.toprotecttheTibetanantelopestheimportanceofprotectingfromdyingout5.其次,你会为处在危险中的藏羚羊提供更多的资金吗?Second,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheTibetanantelopes____________________________6.最后但同样重要的是,我建议派一些志愿者去那里。Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthat_______________.7.他们可以帮助保护藏羚羊。TheycantheTibetanantelopes.somevolunteers(should)be(which/thatare)indanger?helpprotectsentthere(二)句式升级8.用decreasefrom...to...把句子1、2合并为一个简单句_____________________________________________________9.用被动语态改写句子3ThenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan300,000atpresent.ImmediatemeasuresmustbetakentoprotecttheTibetanantelopesfromdyingout.10.用sothat...合并句子6、7Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheresothattheycanhelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】DearPresident,I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan300,000atpresent.ImmediatemeasuresmustbetakentoprotecttheTibetanantelopesfromdyingout.First,theimportanceofprotectingTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.Second,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheTibetanantelopesindanger?Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheresothattheycanhelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua
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