专题21.3 书面表达（咨询建议类）（第01期）（解析版）

2019年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21书面表达考点3咨询建议类（一）【2019•哈尔滨市】假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。写作要点：1.欢迎他们来到新学校。2.介绍学校：(1)课程有趣；(2)有多名外教；(3)活动丰富。3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【写作思路】这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【参考范文】Dearnewfriends,It'smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.Welcometoournewschool.Ourschooliscleanandbeautiful.Theclassroomsarebigandbright.Allthesubjectsareveryinteresting.IamgoodatEnglish.Therearemanyforeignteachersinourschool.Inoursparetime,wecancommunicatewiththemandimproveouroralEnglishskills.Ourafterclassactivitiesarealsorichandcolorful.Therearedifferentclubsinourschool.Youcantakepartinallkindsofactivitiesyoulike.Nowyouaregoingtobemiddleschoolstudents.Howtobeaqualifiedmiddleschoolstudent?Atfirst,youshouldfollowtheschoolrules.It'salsoimportanttohavegoodstudyhabits.Youmustlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Ithinkyoushouldlearntosharethingswithyourclassmatesandhelpeachother.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing（二）【2019•江苏省苏州市】假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。To：[e-mail]：nathan.australia.comSubjects：LearningfrommistakesDearSuHue,I'munhappythatI'vemadesomemistakesrecently.They'retroublingmealotthesedays.Ireallyneedyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseshareyourexperiencewithme?Doyouagreethateveryonemakesmistakes?Canyoutellmeoneofyourmistakes?Howdidyoudealwithyourproblem?Whathaveyoulearnedfromthemistake?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Allthebest,Nathan注意：l.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearNathan,I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyexperiencecanhelpyouout.BestwishesSuHua【写作思路】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。【参考范文】DearNathan,I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays.Youneedn'tworrytoomuch.It'struethateveryonemakesmistakes.Takeme,forexample.Oneday,IspentsomuchtimeplayingfootballwithmyfriendsthatIforgottodomyhomework.Isaidsorrytomyteacherandfinisheditthenextday.Ifounditimportanttoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Itdoesn'tmatterwhetherornotyoumakemistakes.Whatmattersmostistocorrectandlearnfromthem.Inthisway,otherswillunderstandyou.Thenyouwillfeelmuchbetter.Ihopemyexperiencecanhelpyouout.Bestwishes.SuHua【名师点评】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如toomuch，makemistakes，forexample，somuch，spendtimedoing，forgottodo，saysorrysb.，betweenand，whetherornot，learnfrom，inthisway，feelmuchbetter等。而固定句型Ifounditimportanttoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.和It'struethateveryonemakesmistakes./Itdoesn'tmatterwhetherornotyoumakemistakes./Ihopemyexperiencecanhelpyouout.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。（三）【2019•浙江省衢州市】假设你是LiMing，以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。要求：1.考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；2.邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；3.词数：90~100。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本题是书信作文。假设你是LiMing，以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。注意电子邮件格式。时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据Seb的电子邮件，列出提纲。表达要条理清楚，语言规范。要运用合适的连接词或过渡