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1LastupdatedonJanuary12,2006GlobalIELTSSchool(BJ)Allrightsreserved.Alwaysshootforthesky,becauseifyoufail,youwillbeamongthestars.第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter1:TheFourHurdlesinIELTSWritingTest难点一:AcademicWriting学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习)1.Sinceprivatecompaniesdon'tcaremuchaboutthepublicinterests,sothegovernmenthasasignificantroletoplayinscientificresearch.(不能缩写)2.Whythesetravellersdamagetheenvironmentshouldbeanalyzed.(英式美式拼法不能混用)3.Wemustdoourbest(utmost)toprotect(preserve)animals.(词汇用法太嫩)4.Itisclear(manifest)thatpornographicshowsdoharmto(undermine,endanger,jeopard)thelivesoflotsofyoungster(adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5.Nowadays(Inpresent-daysociety),humanbeingsfacebigchallengesinmanyareas.6.Inthesedayandage,manycompanieshavereplacedtelephonewithinternet.7.Weareconfrontedwithmanyenvironmentalproblems.Theyarebecomingmoreandmoreserious.(句式,语法)8.Thetrafficproblemisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertosolveit.(句子结构)9.Soindividuals,communitiesandthegovernmentallmustworkhardtofightcrime!(不应该带感情色彩)10.WemustbefriendlytootherbecausetheBiblesaid,Treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated.(文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二:Nospecifictopicpool.题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:雅思话题不会超出十大类别:文明类:TourismEducationGovernmentWomenandfamiliesLanguageandcultureTechnologyandtheMediaDevelopmentandglobalization野蛮类:CrimeAnimalsEnvironmentalproblem难点三:中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉,考场上思考素材花费时间太长对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法A分类法Somehigh-schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygoto2studyinuniversities.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthispracticetotheirstudies.Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingshouldbedestroyedandreplacedtomakeroomfornewconstructions.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreeB替代法Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.DoyouagreeordisagreeSomepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroad.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreeSomepeoplethinkanimalexperimentationshouldbebannedbecausetheyarecruel.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreeC综合法Somepeoplethinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoevaluatetheteachers'jobperformance.Othersthinkthiswillleadtolossofdisciplineandrespect.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Somepeoplethinkthegovernmentshouldpayforeducationandhealthcare.Othersthinkthisisnottheresponsibilityofthegovernment.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.D裸奔法(无想法时的救命稻草)Peopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytaskssuchasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-to-face.WhateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawholeUnlikemanyothercountries,policeofficersintheUKdonotcarryguns.Somepeoplethinkthisisawisepolicy.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree往以下这些方面考虑论点取第一个字母缩写:TMSTREEC$Technology&EfficiencyEnvironment&HealthMind&SoulEmployment&CompetitionSociety&CrimeCulture&PopulationTime&SpaceMoney&FunRights&ResponsibilitiesTMSTREEC$Tech&EfEnvi&HealMind&soulEmpl&CompSoci&CrimCul&Plp3Times&SpaMo&FunRi&Resp难点四:中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹,但是使用时准确度不够对策:雅思写作语法的七宗罪改错练习1.Employeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployee.(n.可数不可数)2.1Workathomeusingmoderntechnologycangreatlyenhanceourefficiency.(v.原型不可做主语)2.2Childrenwhoareraiseinimpoverishedfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.(被动语态)2.3Theproblemsthatarecreatedbyenvironmentalcontaminationisveryhardtoresolve.(主谓一致)2.4Inpresent-daysociety,cultureswerebecomingverysimilar.(时态)3.Intelligentstudentsshouldnotbetreateddifferentbytheirteachers.副词4.1Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalizationmaycreate.介词4.2TheInternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms.5.Someparentsdonotobeytrafficruleshimself.6.Theseoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyed,newbuildingsmustbeconstructed.逗号7.Theseareagreatmanychildrenthinkthemainpurposeofeducationshouldbetoaffordthempleasureandenjoyment.补充材料IELTS作文复杂句的七种内部关系(SevenpossiblerelationshipsUnderlyingacomplexsentence)Causeandeffect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because,as,since,dueto,owingto(画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),Asaconsequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),Asaresult…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果)so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g.Theecologicalproblemsarebeingaggravated.Hence,itisimperativethatwetakemeasurestocurbthepollutionoftheenvironment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification举例关系标志词…isacaseinpoint.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…forexample.(以…为例)forinstance.(比如…)ToIllustrate…(例如…)Asanillustration…(作为例证…)e.g.TheAsiancountriesaregettingwesternizedatastaggeringrate.TakeChinaforexample,whenyoungstersgotothemovies,itisstandardpracticeforthemtochooseHollywoodblockbusteroverdomesticfilms.亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都4会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影.Comparisonandcontrast对比关系标志词While…,whereas…,whilst…,incontraste.g.Whereas/whilemodernmanissorushedandsostressed,ourancestorscouldoftenperformtheirbusinessinarelaxedmanner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g.Theeducationalandmedicalfacilitiesinbigcitiesaremostlyveryadvanced.Incontrast,theircounterpartsinthecountrytendtobeofinferiorquality.Concession让步关系标志词Despite/inspiteof…(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语),形容词+asitmaybe…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g.1Toughasi