第07讲 读后续写之“成长类“主题（讲义）

1►第07讲成长类（讲义）目录目标1成长类续写概述目标2负面情绪来铺垫目标3成长细节促发展目标4成长蜕变升华来点睛目标5最新模拟目标6真题感悟_____________________________________________________________________描写“改变”和“成长”一直是读后续写中的一个重要主题。写好此类文章时，利用积累的语言素材，从细节上对情绪变化、心理状态进行刻画，对推动情节的发展有着重要的作用。续写的结尾部分需要凸显文章的主题，使得主题进行升华，既不能拖拉，也不能草率，正确运用高级句式和含义深刻的句子置于句尾，如：强调句型、倒装句、感叹句等则对起到首尾呼应、画龙点睛的效果。【写作步骤】一成长前的刻画一负面情绪来铺垫负面的心理描写可以揭示人物在成长前的内心世界，表达人物的性格、特点、感情等，这为后期成长的过程埋下伏笔。blue忧郁的，沮丧的；downhearted垂头丧气的；1.伤心绝望单词悲伤sadness/sorrow哭泣cry心碎的heartbroken沮丧depression抽泣sob受挫的frustrated2挫折frustration哽咽choke绝望的desperate绝望desperation皱眉frown心情低落的low-spirited失望disappointment叹气sigh心烦的upset短语强烈的失落感:astrongsenseofloss垂头丧气：loseone’sspirit情绪低落：belowinspirits陷入绝望：fallintodespair沉浸在悲痛之中：beimmersedinsorrow泪水在眼中流动：tearsswiminsb'seyesone'stongue满眼忧伤：greatsorrowcloudssb'seyes泪流满面：tearsroll/run/stream/flowdownsb'scheeks伤心地低下头：hang/drop/lower/bend/bowone'sheadinsadness某人大失所望：disappointmentfloodedoversb.意志消沉：abrokenspirit1.Jimwasthrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.吉姆被投入黑暗之中，陷入绝望。2.Hegaveuptheattemptindespair.他在绝望中放弃了尝试。3.Sheweptatonce,withsudden,wildabandonment,inhersister’sarms.她突然纵情地在姐姐的怀抱里哭了起来。4.Feelingalumpinhisthroat,hecouldn’thelpcrying.他觉得如鲠在喉，忍不住哭了起来。5.Onhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之情控制，忍不住哭泣。6.Hereturnedatnightwithhollow,paleface.他晚上回来的时候，露出一张空洞、苍白的脸。7.Overcomewithbitterdisappointmentathisfailingtowinaprize,helockedhimselfupinhisroom.他对未能获奖感到极度失望，把自己锁在房间里。8.Thenewsthathedidn’twinprizeimmediatelythrewhimintolowspirits.未能获奖的消息立刻使他精神不振。9.Griefcomesinwaves.3悲伤如潮水一般涌来10.Myheartseemedtobetorn.我的心都要被撕碎了。11.Heisinalowspiritbecausehebelieveshehasbleakprospects.他心情低落，因为他相信自己的前途会很凄凉。12.Shesufferfromastrongsenseoflossandfeeluseless.她忍受强烈的失落感，认为自己无用。13.Hisbadtemperchasedhisfriendsaway.他的坏脾气使朋友们都离他而去。14.Alumpcameintomythroat,andtearsrolleddownmycheekswithoutstruggle.我觉得鼻子一酸，不争气地的眼泪掉了下来。2.焦虑害怕词汇恐惧fright害怕的terrified战栗shake恐惧terror/horror受惊的frightened颤抖tremble惊恐panic不安的uneasy坐立不安的restless担忧concern/worry担忧的concerned害怕的scared焦虑anxiety焦虑的anxious紧张的nervous1.Withapoundingheartandcold,moistpalms,Ifeltfaint.心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。2.Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。3.Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。4.Shefeltastrongsenseoflossafterherdivorce.离婚后她感到很强的失落感。5.Therewasapparenthorrorinhervoice.她的声音中有明显的恐惧。6.Sheturnedherdesperateeyestowardtheboundlessforest.她用绝望的眼神看向一望无垠的丛林。7.Fearfilledhisgutlikeamealhecouldnotdigest.恐惧像一顿无法消化的饭一样充斥着他的肠胃。48.Atthethoughtoftomorrow’sexam,shetossedandturnedinbed,unabletofallasleep.一想到明天的考试，她在床上辗转反侧，无法入睡。3.尴尬羞愧单词尴尬：embarrassment/awkwardness尴尬的：embarrassed羞愧：shame感到羞愧的：ashamed使人尴尬的：awkward令人尴尬/难堪的：embarrassing羞愧的：shamefaced可耻的：shameful短语难为情得脸红：blushwithembarrassment感到越来越尴尬：beincreasinglyembarrassed/awkwardabout...羞愧极了：beoverwhelmed/overcome/seized/burdened/consumed/wildwithshame尴尬地：in/withembarrassment；羞愧地：with/inshame感到脸阵阵发烫：feelbloodrush/rushingtoone’sface掩饰某人的尴尬:hideone’sembarrassment如坐针毡/如热锅上的蚂蚁:feellikesittingonpinsandneedles/actasaratonthehotbrick1.Tomyshame,Ineverdidhelpthem.我感到惭愧的是,我从来没有帮助过他们。2.Shewascoveredwithshameatherfailure.她对自己的失败感到无比惭愧。3.Exposedtothetruth,sofirmlydidembarrassmenttakeholdofhimthathispalmsweresweatingandhiskneesgotweak.暴露在真相面前，他是如此地尴尬以至于手心出汗，膝盖发软。4.Sherememberedherangrywordswithadeepsenseofshame.她想起自己说过的气话,深感羞愧。5.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，都能觉得血液涌上脸颊。6.Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。7.Exposedtothetruth,sofirmlydidembarrassmenttakeholdofhimthathispalmsweresweatingandhiskneesgotweak.暴露在真相面前，他是如此地尴尬以至于手心出汗，膝盖发软。8.Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.5他羞愧地低下了头。9.Shewascoveredwithshameatherfailure.她对自己的失败感到无比惭愧.10.Sheloweredabitofherbody,hesitatedforamoment,wonderinghowtohideherinnerembarrassment.她低下身来，犹豫了一会儿，不知如何掩饰内心的尴尬。11.Withmypalmsweating,myheartseemstohavetensofthousandsofantscrawling.我手心冒出一片冷汗，心头像是有千万只蚂蚁爬过。12.Withherfaceburstingintoflames,shewantedtoblurtoutanapology,butwordsfailedher.她脸上突然冒出火焰，想脱口而出道歉，但她说不出话来。13.Shegroanedatthememory,sufferingalloveragaintheexcruciatingembarrassmentofthosemoments.她在回忆中呻吟，又一次饱尝那时所经历的极度困窘。14.Fartoofrequently,theresultisdisappointment,embarrassment,andfrustration.太多的情况下，结果是失望、窘迫和挫折。15.IfeltterribleanddeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddone.我对我的所作所为感到不安和深深的愧疚。二成长的过程（四个细节来塑造）1.学习知识促成长1.It’snevertoolatetolearn.Eachpersonhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemoreattempts.活到老学到老。每个人都应该并且有权力去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。1.Itisofgreatsignificancetotryandlearnfromexperience.努力从经验中学习是重要的。2.战胜困难促成长1.Undoubtedly,thisisatallorderbutIseethisactastherealchallengeweneedtoconfrontandovercome.毫无疑问，这是个很高的要求，但我认为，它是我们需要面对和战胜的真正挑战。2.Wemustfaceaseaoftroublesandbearit.我们必须面对海量的困难并忍受它。3.Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.Weshouldbebravetofacethem.Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelyrealizeourdreamsfinally.成功的路并不顺利。它充满了挑战和困难。我们应该勇敢地面对他们。只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力去克服一切困难，我们就一定会最终实现我们的梦想。3.战胜消极促成长1.Failurescanhelpuslearnandovercomeourfears.失败可以帮助我们学习并克服恐惧。62.Attit