重点话题突破 06 个人成长感悟类（读后续写高频主题分类）（讲义）（解析版）

资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破06成长、感悟类1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1．（2023·山东临沂·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Palmtreesseemedtospeedbythecarwindow.Eight-year-oldKatrinabegantogetnervous,thewayshealwaysdidinnewsurroundings.Shefeltathinshineofsweataboveherlipinspiteofthecar’scoolair.“Theaquariumwon’tbecrowded,Ibet,andpeoplearegonnanoticeme.Ihatewearingthisprosthesisleg(假肢).”Shefelttearspinprickbehindhereyes.“Notbeingnormalistheworst.”EnteringtheClearwaterMarineAquarium,aroundacomerofatank,shenoticedananimalthatlookedunusual.“Isthatadolphinwithstump(假肢)insteadofatail?”sheaskedanaquariumstaff.Henodded.“Yes,that’sWinter.She’saveryspecialdolphin.”“Whathappenedtoher?”“ThisgirldolphinwasfoundoffthecoastofFlorida,caughtinacrabtrap.Theropesfromthetrapcutoffthebloodcirculationtohertail.Soshelosthertail,”Katrinacaughtherbreath.“She’sjustlikeme.She’sjustlikeme.”“Butshestruggledtosurvive.Nowshewearsaprosthetictailpartofthedaytohelpherswimlikeadolphin’ssupposedtoswim.”thestaffcontinued,“Everyday,Wintershowsusanythingispossibleifwebelieve.”Katrinafeltherheartstringwastouched.ShewavedatWinter.LookingatKatrina,Winterraisedherflipper(鳍),cametoherandliftedherhead.“She’sswimmingrightintomyarms,”Katrinasaidtearfully.Theymadeeyecontact.SheseemedtobespeakingtoKatrina:We’rethesame.Backhome,allKatrinatalkedaboutwasWinter.Fortwoweeks,shecriedandbeggedhermothertotakeherbacktoClearwater.Unfortunately,anotherblowhitKatrina.Shefellonthehardwoodfloorathomeandbrokeherotherleg.Katrinawasinconstantlegnervepain.Afterathroughexamination,thedoctorexplainedbadnewsthatshewouldneedanothersurgeryonherleg.Yearsofalivinghellcamebacktoher.Shestartedfearingsurgeryagainandrefusedtotakeany.注意：资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Katrina’smomdecidedtotakeherbacktoClearwater.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________FinallycamethedaywhenKatrinawasinthehospitalagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】Katrina’smomdecidedtotakeherbacktoClearwater.OnarrivingatClearwater,Katrinacouldn’twaittoseeWinter,thelovelydolphinthatcomfortedherandboostedhermood.AsKatrina’smotherpushedthewheelchairtoWinter,sheraisedherflipper,cametoherandliftedherhead.Katrinacouldn’tholdbackherexcitement.Lookingatthegirl,Winterseemedtosay“Goandtakethesurgery.”Katrinaabsolutelyknewwhatthatcaringeyeswereconveying,soshedecidedtokeepamoreoptimisticstateofmind.FinallycamethedaywhenKatrinawasinthehospitalagain.Thoughfeelingnervousandafraidofthepainthesurgerymightbring,Katrinawouldfaceitbravely.Theoperationwasasuccess.HermothertookhertoClearwaterthedayshewasdischargedfromhospital.InspiredbyWinter’sswimminglikeanormaldolphin,Katrinapracticedhardtowalk.Herconfidencehasbeenimprovedasshegraduallyrecovered.Katrinahasnoideawhatthefutureholdsbutshewilldoanythingtohaveabetterlookatthiswonderfulworld.【情节分析】文章以故事情节发展为线索展开，讲述了一只腿装了假肢的女孩Katrina因为害怕别人异样的目光而容易感到紧张和自卑。有一次去了Clearwater海洋水族馆，发现了一只尾巴也是假肢的海豚。工作人员告诉她，这只海豚叫Winter，它被捕蟹器捕获，陷阱上的绳子切断了它尾巴的血液循环，所以她失去了尾巴。但是她仍然努力地像其他有尾巴的海豚一样游泳。Winter每天努力向人们证明“只要相信，任何事都有可能”。Winter来到Katrina身边，抬起头，乎在对是对她说：“我们是一样的。”回家后的Katrina心里一直想着Winter，央求妈妈再带她去一次Clearwater海洋水族馆，但不幸的是，她再次摔倒，不得不在另一只腿上做手术。可是Katrina拒绝再一次手术。【写作步骤】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“Katrina的妈妈决定带她回Clearwater海洋水族馆。”可知，第一段描写Katrina的妈妈想要为了鼓励女儿，带她去海洋馆看看Winter。并且Katrina受到了鼓舞，决定接受手术。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】②由第二段首句内容“终于有一天Katrina又住进了医院。”可知，第二段描写Katrina勇敢的进了手术室。在手术成功后，Katrina在家人的鼓励和Winter的启发下，勇敢自信的面对生活，发现世界变得更加美好了。2.续写线索妈妈带女儿去水族馆——Winter的亲切和眼神交流鼓舞了Katrina——Katrina决定去医院接受手术——出院后的Katrina开始积极面对生活——Katrina发现世界很美好【高分词汇】行为类①表达：convey/express②控制：hodback/resist/contain情绪类①勇敢面对：faceitbravely/faceitcourageously②乐观的：optimistic/positive/upbeat【高分句型1】OnarrivingatClearwater,Katrinacan’twaittoseeWinter,thelovelydolphinthatcomfortedherandboostedhermood.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Katrinahasnoideawhatthefutureholdsbutshewilldoanythingtohaveabetterlookatthiswonderfulworld.（运用了what引导的同位语从句）2.（2023·重庆·西南大学附中校考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasaverycoldmorningasithadbeenrainingveryheavilythepreviousnight.Asmymotherwasfeelingalittleuncomfortable,mysistervolunteeredtodrivemetoschool.Ioversleptandasaresult,wasabitlateforschool.Wegotintothecarhurriedly.Theroadswerealreadyjammedwithtraffic.Itappearedthateveryonewaslateaswell.M