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写作规范练(一)Ⅰ.应用文写作——求助信假定你是李华，临近高考，心理压力特别大，于是向学校心理老师Tom写一封信，求助如何缓解压力，在高考中取得优异成绩。要点如下：1．自我介绍；2．压力大的原因；3．希望得到老师的帮助。注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom，IamLiHua，aSenior3student.Yourssincerely，LiHua参考范文DearTom，IamLiHua，aSenior3student.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching，Ifeelgreatpsychologicalpressure.SoI’mwritingtoyou，askingforhelponhowtorelievethepressureandgetexcellentresultsinthecollegeentranceexamination.I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First，IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetodosports.Moreover，thehighexpectationsfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakemeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon’twanttoletthemdown.Whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Facedwiththeaboveproblems，I’manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Yourssincerely，LiHuaⅡ.读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mymothereyedmewithsuspicion(怀疑)．Idarednotlookather.KnowingthatIwaslateforschoolfivedayscontinuously，Icouldnotofferanacceptableexplanation.IknewshedidnotbelievethatIhadextraclasseseverydayandarrivedhomeafter5pm.However，realizingshehadlittlechoicebuttobelieveinme，shetoldmethatdinnerwasintherefrigerator.Shehadtorushforhernightshiftatthelocalclinic.Eversincewelostourdadinanaccident，mymotherbecamethebreadwinner.Iwastheeldestamongthefoursiblings(兄弟姐妹)anditfelluponmyshouldertoensurethattheycouldbecomeresponsibleadults.Besideshelpingmotherwiththehousework，Iregularlycoachedthemintheirstudies.Thankfully，neveroncedidIhavetoraisemyvoiceorforcethemtocompletetheirhomework.Butallofusmisseddadverymuch.Hewasamodelfatherandhusband.Lifewascruellytakenawayfromhimataveryyoungageof42.However，mymothermanagedtopullthroughandfoundajobattheclinic.Itwasverytoughonsomeonelikeherwhohadneverworkedbeforeinherlife.Butmoneywasscarceandtherewerefivemouthstofeed.Daddidnotleavemuchbehind.Heneversuspectedhewoulddiesoyoung.Westoppeddiningoutandhadourmealsmostlyathome.Webasicallylivedfromhandtomouth.That’swhenitdawnedonmethatIhadtodomypartforthefamily.IknewmotherwouldnotagreebutIthrewcautionoutofthewindowandmanagedtogetapart-timejobatafast-foodrestaurant.IworkedthreehoursadayandmanagedtobringhomemoneysothatmysiblingsandIcouldgooutforoccasionalmoviesormeals.Iwassurethatmothersuspectedsomething.Butshecouldnotquitepointthefingertothesourceofhersuspicion.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Oneday，whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers，Iwasshockedtoseemotherstandingoppositethecounter.Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying，soweremysiblings.参考范文Oneday，whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers，Iwasshockedtoseemotherstandingoppositethecounter.SosurprisedwasIthatIdarednotlookintohereyes.SheappearedshockedwhenIclumsilytookherordersandsawherstaggeringtoatableoccupiedbymysiblings!Mysupervisorsawmyworriedexpressionand，knowingaboutmyfamilysituation，quicklyvolunteeredtotakeovermyduties.Slowly，Iremovedmyapronandjoinedmyfamily.Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying，soweremysiblings.Shecoveredmyhandswithhersandtoldmethatshewasgratefulformyhelp.Icouldnotholdbackmytearsandhuggedher.Howguilt-riddenIwas!ItoldmymotherthatcontributingfinanciallytothefamilywastheleastIcoulddotorelieveherburden.Tomygreatrelief，mybelovedmotherunderstoodmysituationandreassuredmeeverythingwouldbealright.ItwasthenthatIcametorealizethatIshouldnothavehiddensuchabigsecretfromher.