写作规范练(十八) (150)

写作规范练(十八)Ⅰ.应用文写作——投诉信假设你是李华，你参加了某旅行社组织的一次旅游，你对其中的某些服务不满意。所以，你想就此事给该旅行社写一封投诉信。内容包括：1．写信目的；2．不满之处；3．表达期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMadamorSir，MynameisLiHua，whoisthecustomerofyourtravelagency.Yourssincerely，LiHua参考范文DearMadamorSir，MynameisLiHua，whoisthecustomerofyourtravelagency.HereI’msorrytoexpressmydissatisfactionwiththeserviceofthetravelagency.Firstofall，duringthetrip，thetourguidenotonlyintroducedtoomanyactivitiesatourownexpensebutalsotookustosomanydifferentplacestodoshopping，whichoccupiedmuchtime.Besides，Idonotthinktheguideiscompetentenoughbecausehehadnogoodknowledgeofthescenicspotsandwasrudetous.What’sworse，thefoodservedwasofpoorqualityandtheaccommodationswereawful.Hopefullyyoucantakealloftheaboveintocarefulconsiderationandalsotakesomemeasurestoimproveyourservice.Yourssincerely，LiHuaⅡ.读后续写(2023·湖北腾云联盟联考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Andrewwasanewstudentinmyclass，whohademotionalmanagementproblems.Sincehehadbeensuspendedfromclassmanytimesinpreviousyears，Iassuredtheworstwhenhecametomyclass.Andrewsatatthebackoftheclassroom.EverytimeItalkedinfrontoftheclass，hewouldchatwiththestudentsaroundandevenlaughloudly.EverytimeIcalledonhimtoansweraquestion，hewouldrespondwithacasual“Idon’tknow”．IfIgavehimaslightcriticism，hewouldbecomereallyangry.Asanexperiencedteacher，Icanalwaysgetstudentsinvolvedinclassdiscussionoratleastmotivatethemtositquietlyandlistenattentively.ButforAndrew，Iwasreallypowerless.Hewasjustnoisyandrude.Oneday，AndrewwastalkingloudlyintheclasswhenIwasteaching.Isaidintheusualtoneofvoice，“Andrew，whydon’tyoujoininourdiscussionsbuthaveoneofyourown？”Hearingthat，hegotupfromhischair，pushedthebooksoverandshoutedsomething.Icouldn’thearclearlywhathesaidotherthanseveralrudewords.Aftertheclass，Andrewwassenttomyoffice，whereIgavehimadisciplinereferral—aweek’sout-of-schoolsuspension.Deepinmymind，though，Ididn’texpectreferralstobeeffectivesincestudentswouldreturnbehavingevenworsethanbefore.ButwhatelsecouldIdowithsuchatrouble-maker?Ihadtoadmitthiswasoneofmymostawfulteachingexperiences.Andrew’sangerwasalmostunexpectedandoutofcontrol.TheweekwithoutAndrew’spresencewasawonderfultime，andtheclasswentonsmoothlyandefficiently.However，withhissuspensionweekdrawingtoaclosesoon，Ifeltrestlessanduneasy.Wouldhedisturbtheclassasalways?Wouldhetakerevenge(报复)onme?注意：续写词数应为150左右。OnthedaywhenAndrewwassupposedtoreturn，Iwaitedforhimatthedoor.Aflashofsurprisespreadoverhisface.参考范文OnthedaywhenAndrewwassupposedtoreturn，Iwaitedforhimatthedoor.Eventually，thefamiliarfigureappeared，walkingwithhishandsinhispockets.Ashecameclose，Iwasabouttogreethimwhenheignoredmedeliberately.“Sorry，Andrew.Ishouldhavehadatalkwithyoutofindawayoutbeforegivingyouasuspension，”apologizedI．Withhisheadlowered，hedidn’tutterasingleword.“Maybenexttimeyoucan’tcontrolyourselfinclass，youcanstepoutofthedoorforawhiletocollectyourself，”addedI，tryingtobreaktheice.Aflashofsurprisespreadoverhisface.Thenaughtyboyfrozethere，staringatmewithwideeyes.“ItisIwhoshouldsaysorry，”murmuredhe，hisfaceburningwithshame.Withasmileofrelief，Ipattedhimonhisshoulder，signalingtohimtogobacktohisseat.Inthedaysthatfollowed，Andrewdidn’tmisbehaveinclassanymoreandtookanactivepartinclassdiscussions.Neverbeforediditoccurtomethat“apologies”couldmakesuchahugedifference—itturnedoneofmyworstexperiencesintoperhapsthebestone!