2017届高考总复习限时规范训练(人教新课标)-第三部分-写作技能步步高-要诀4-3-满分作文登场

第三部分要诀四(2014课标Ⅰ)假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：住宿：accommodationDearSir/Madem，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHua考场作文DearSir/Madam，Iamastudent①liveinChina.IwanttogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.(1)I'veseenyouradvertisementandI'dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyour3weekEnglishcourse.First,(2)Iwanttoknowthestartdateofthecourse,classhoursperweekandthetypeofaccommodation.Inaddition,IwanttoknowhowmuchIhaveto②paythecourse.Canyoutellmewhethertheaccommodationisincludedinthefee?Iamlookingforwardto③hearfromyou.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua1．错误聚焦：(1)①live处于非谓语动词的位置，它与student构成主动关系，故将live改为____________。(2)表示“为……支付”时，pay是不及物动词，故在②pay后加介词_____________。(3)lookforwardto中的to为介词，故将③hear改为______________。【答案】(1)living(2)for(3)hearing2．高分靓句：(1)将画线(1)改为含有非谓语动词的句子：_________________________,_I'dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyour3­weekEnglishcourse.(2)将画线(2)改为含有notonly的倒装句：___________________________________,_butalsoclasshoursperweekandthetypeofaccommodation.【答案】(1)Havingseenyouradvertisement(2)NotonlydoIwanttoknowthestartdateofthecourse参考范文：DearSir/Madam，IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I'veseenyourad,andI'dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix­weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I'dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua(2015河北正定中学高三第一次考试)仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居住的Mrs.Brown参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。参考词汇：聚会：haveagatheringpartyDearMrs.Brown，Wearesogladthatyou'recomingtojoinusonSaturday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion：DearMrs.Brown，Wearesogladthatyou'recomingtojoinusonSaturday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.We'llhaveourgatheringpartyintheCentralPark.Maybeyou'vebeenthere,haven'tyou?Gostraightonwhenyougetoutoftheschoolgateandcometothestreet.Thenturnrightatthesecondcrossingandyou'llfindahospital.JustoppositeitisaNo.177busstop.Takeabusandgetoffatthefourthstop.CentralParkisjustinfrontofit.We'llhaveourgatheringpartyinaboatonthelake.Whatafunnything!Docomeontime.We'llwaitforyouattheparkgate.Yours，LiHua