九年级第四单元写作课课件

WritingAboutChangesXieLuHowhaveBob'sfriendschangedinthelast4years?MarioAmyTinashort/wear…tallshorthaircurly,redhairstraight,blondehairlonghairHowhasBillychangedsincehisprimaryschoolclassmateslastsawhim?shy,quiet,(face)turnred...thin,wearglasses,popularbig,strongagoodstudent，read…HowhasCandychangedsinceshebecameapopstar?shy,notpopular,gettonsofattentionnothaveprivatetimebecarefulabout...hangoutwithfriendsHowhasLiWenchangedsincehetalkedwithhisparents?lonely,unhappyhappiershy,makesomefriendsbecomelessinterestedin…studyharderAPerson'sChangesAppearancePersonalityHobbieslife/studyOthersJungDa-Yeon（郑多燕）Nov.27,1966aftergivingbirthto2childrenShehaschangedalot!JungDa-Yeon'sChangesAppearancePersonalityHobbieslifeOthersJungDa-Yeon'sChangesAppearancefatthin&beautifulJungDa-Yeon'sChangesPersonalityfatself-abased(自卑)thin&beautifulconfidentJungDa-Yeon'sChangesHobbiesfatself-abased(自卑)diet(饮食）exercisethin&beautifulconfidentJungDa-Yeon'sChangeslifefatself-abased(自卑)diet(饮食）exerciselaughatthin&beautifulconfidentJungDa-Yeon'sChangesOthersfatself-abased(自卑)diet(饮食）exerciselaughatfamousthin&beautifulconfidentHowShehasChanged!AppearanceIfyouareafanofsports,youmustknowJungDo-Yean.AppearanceSheusedtobeveryfatafterPersonalityHobbyLifePersonalitygivingbirthtotwochildren.Shewasveryself-abasedaboutherself.HobbyShedidn'tusetobeverycarefulaboutherdietandshedidn'tlikeexercise.LifeHerhusbandoftenlaughedatherpastHerchangesA.Thenoneday,shedecidedtodealwithherterriblebody.B.Atlast,shehaschangedalot.C.Atfirst,shebegantochange.HowShehasChanged!AppearanceIfyouareafanofsports,youmustknowJungDo-Yean.SheusedtobeveryfatafterPersonalityHobbyLifegivingbirthtotwochildren.Shewasveryself-abasedaboutherself.Shedidn'tusetobeverycarefulaboutherdietandshedidn'tlikeexercise.HerhusbandoftenlaughedatherThenoneday,shedecidedtodealwithherherterriblebody.Now,shekeepsahealthydietandtakesexerciseeveryday.Shebecomesthinandlooksbeautiful.Sheisveryconfident.Herhusbandneverlaughsatheranymore.A.Shewroteabookaboutherstory.B.She’sverygladthatshe’schangedalotandshe’sbecomeveryfamous.C.Peoplesurechange.HowShehasChanged!AppearanceIfyouareafanofsports,youmustknowJungDo-Yean.SheusedtobeveryfatafterPersonalityHobbyLifegivingbirthtotwochildren.Shewasveryself-abasedaboutherself.Shedidn'tusetobeverycarefulaboutherdietandshedidn'tlikeexercise.HerhusbandoftenlaughedatherThenoneday,shedecidedtodealwithherherterriblebody.Now,shekeepsahealthydietandtakesexerciseeveryday.Shebecomesthinandlooksbeautiful.Sheisveryconfident.Herhusbandneverlaughsatheranymore.She’sverygladthatshe’schangedalotandshe’sbecomeveryfamous.pastpresent_______________________________________________Thewaytowriteaboutcomparison(比较）____________________________________________________________WritingTaskMindmapMyChangesAppearance__________Personality__________Hobbies________life/study___________OthersWritingusedtoComparison(比较）HowI'vechangedHowtimeflies!NowIamastudentinGradeNine.Everythinghaschanged.SohaveI.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PeerChecklist同伴评价表Afterreadingmypartner'sarticle,Iknow1.what'schangedinhis/herappearanceYES/NO2.what'schangedinhis/herpersonalityYES/NO3.what'schangedinhis/herhobbyYES/NO4.what'schangedinhis/herlife/studyYES/NOInmypartner'sarticle,Icanfindthefollowingfeatures:5.ComparisonYES/NO6.“usedto”YES/NOTotal:________（满分20分）22222287.spelling,sentences,conjunctions(连接词）…Homework1.Revisethewriting:Aperson'schanges2.Thinkabouthowtowriteabout:Aplace'schanges.Thankyou!