SCI论文写作技巧与注意事项

1SCI论文写作技巧与注意事项发表文章的重要性•Publishorperish（发表或者灭亡）—科研成果：如果没有发表，就等于不曾存在；—科研人员：没有论著发表，职业生涯将难以为继•文章不是万能的，但没有文章是万万不能的2稿件处理流程3如何了解本领域TOP期刊4网址：=2E72bgnkB1bKK5nlkMi食品领域Top20期刊5建立个人文献库6•放在文献库里的文章必须自己看过，挑选过的。•优先采用欧美作者文章•把暂时不知道分类的文章放在inbox文件夹，定期整理分类。用光速搜索快速搜索文献名7使用PDF阅读器进行文献内部检索89避免重复10ReportAssert,argue,believe,committotheidea,show,conclude,discover,learn,state,note,observed,drawnattentiontothefact,AsXpointsout,that“a,an,the”的用法11•上文提到过的人或事：Heboughtahouse.I'vebeentothehouse.•用在序数词（first，second）和形容词最高级，及形容词only，very，same等前面•用在某些由普通名词构成的国家名称、机关团体、阶级、等专有名词前：thePeople'sRepublicofChina中华人民共和国theUnitedStates美国“a,an,the”的快速检查方法12避免使用长句子•一般一个句子超过60个单词就可定义为长句子•简短的句子更能强调句子的含义,句子越长读者越难判断句中哪部分最重要。13ThetrendthatthepHvaluesdecreasedsignificantly(P0.05)initiallyandthenincreasedwasobservedforbothrawandsaltedtreatmentsduringthe72hstorageat3℃,withtheinitialvalueof7.15±0.05and7.20±0.03respectively,whichweresimilartosalmonwhoseinitialpHvaluewas7.1-7.2reportedbyBjørlykkeetal.(2011),buthigherthanchannelcatfish6.6(Silvaetal.,1993),andseabream6.12(Goulasetal.,2004).避免冗长和累赘•Rheumaticfeverisanautoimmunedisease.•Itisgenerallyacceptedinthefieldofmedicinethatrheumaticfeverisanautoimmunedisease.•找出最重要的信息，然后省略掉不重要的。14避免冗长和累赘•多余的词和短语是对其他的词和短语的过度修饰。•例：HighpHvalueshavebeenobservedtooccurinareasthathavebeendeterminedtohavefewpinetrees.•修改：HighpHvaluesoccurinareaswithfewpinetrees.15避免冗长和累赘•下列单词在文中毫无意义，可以并应该予以省略：actually,basically,essentially,fairly,much,really,practically,quite,rather,several,very,virtually•下列括号中的词均属多余，应予省略:(already)existing,at(the)present(time),(basic)fundamentals,blue(incolor),cold(temperature),(completely)eliminate,(currently)underway,each(individual),eachandevery[二选其一],(end)result,estimated(roughly)at,(final)outcome,first(andforemost),(future)plans,(main)essentials,never(before),period(oftime),reasonis(because),(still)persists,(true)facts16•Correct：NanoZnOwasmoretoxicthanothernanomaterials,regardlessofthenanoparticlesize.•Incorrect：Regardlessofthenanoparticlesize,nanoZnOwasmoretoxicthanothernanomaterials.Bringthemainideatothebeginningofthesentencestatinganylocations,reasons,time,etc.,afterwards.重要的内容放在句首Owingto,accordingto,basedon,when……重要的内容放在句首•Incorrect：BasedonthetriangulationstructurebuiltfromunorganizedpointsoraCADmodel,theextendedSTLformatisdescribedinthissection.4•Correct：TheextendedSTLformatisdescribedinthissectionbasedonthetriangulationstructurebuiltfromunorganizedpointsoraCADmodel.•Incorrect：WhenUistakenasthecontrolparameter,theBDsareshowninFig.8.•Correct：Figure8showstheBDswhenUistakenasthecontrolparameter.18‘Inthispaper’,‘inthisstudy’勿滥用在以下两种情况下使用：•在引言和结论部分，强调文章的内容•在文章其他部分参照作者未完成的工作，如在其他杂志文章或标准里。19阿拉伯数字的使用1.句首不要用阿拉伯数字2.描述一般量的信息不要用阿拉伯数字•Incorrect：12parameterswereselectedfortheexperiment.•Correct：Twelveparameterswereselectedfortheexperiment.•Incorrect：All3studiesconcludedthatthemeantemperatureshouldbe30°C.•Correct：Allthreestudiesconcludedthatthemeantemperatureshouldbe30°C.20‘Figure’and‘Table’的使用•Incorrect：Figure.6,Figure6,Fig.6,Tbl10•Correct：Figure6,Fig.6,Table10,Tbl.1021This，these的用法22“this，these”必须紧接着一个名词一起使用。避免指代不明改前：Ifaspecimenisfrozeninabathcontainingdryiceandacetone,thewaterofthecellcanberemovedbysublimationtopreventdamagetothecell.Thisiscommonlyusedforpreservationofcultures.改后：Ifaspecimenisfrozeninabathcontainingdryiceandacetone,thewaterofthecellcanberemovedbysublimationtopreventdamagetothecell.Thistechniqueiscommonlyusedforpreservationofcultures.避免名词堆砌当名词一个紧接一个出现时，让人很难判断它们彼此间的关系，以及这一组词到底表达什么意思。例：culturedrattrachealendothelialcells（小鼠气管内皮培养细胞）正确表达：culturesofendothelialcellsfromthetracheasofrats23优先使用动词•动词会使文章充满活力与力量，相反，如果以名词表述动作，动词就会被埋没、削弱，句子则显得晦涩、冗长。•例1：Theirsuggestionforuswasadifferentanalysisofthedata.•修改：Theysuggestedthatweanalyzethedatadifferently.•例2：Anincreaseintemperatureoccurred.•修改：Temperatureincreased.24读者/编辑对英文句子的期望•Readersexpectfamiliarinformationatthebeginningofasentence•传递信息要先旧后新•每次开始写一句话的时候先问自己你所陈述的概念前文是否有解释。•修改前：Samplesfor2-dimensionalprojectionofkinetictrajectoriesareshowninFigure7.Thecoilstatesarelooselygatheredwhilethenativestatescanformablackclusterwithextremehighdensityin2-dimensionalprojectionplane.•修改后：KinetictrajectoriesareprojectedontoxxandyyvariablesinFigure7.Thisfigureshowstwopopulatedstates.Oneorrespondstothelooselygatheredcoilstateswhiletheotheristhenativestatewithahighdensity.25读者/编辑对英文句子的期望•Maculardegenerationisaffectedbydiet.OneofthedietcomponentsthatinfluencestheprogressionofmaculardegenerationisvitaminB6.AlthoughvitaminB6seemstoreducetheriskofmaculardegeneration,itmayhavesomesideeffects.26读者/编辑对英文句子的期望•Readersexpecttheactionverb（行为动词）immediatelyafterthesubject（主语）•主语之后立马接行为动词，避免句子头重脚轻，理想的英文句子结构：短主语+紧接行为动词+长宾语。•改前：Afreshnessindexcalledtheglobalstablityindex(GSI)applicabletofollowthevariationofmulti-