初三英语写作--省级公开课

BetterYourWritingEyesCanSpeak•Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeakers,inorderto________________•Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inorderto________________•When…EyesCanSpeak•人们常说眼睛会说话。•在生活中，我们经常借助眼睛来表达情感。•有时，当别人看我们时，我们会觉得不舒服。Peopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluncomfortablewhensomeonelooksatus.EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?英语写作时常用的过渡语:•表并列：and,_____________________…•表转折：but,_____________________…•表因果关系：because,_____________________…•表先后顺序：First,_____________________…•表时间关系：when,_____________________…•表列举说明：forexample,_____________________…•发表观点：inmyopinion,_____________________…•表总结陈词：ingeneral,_____________________…英语写作时常用的过渡语:•表并列：and,besides,inaddition,what’smore,…•表转折：but,yet,however,onthecontrary,…•表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…•表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…•表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,…•表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…•发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…•表总结陈词：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.文章结构1.Heading点题，概括性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结，呼应主题EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.eyescanhelpusexpressourfeelings.Stepbystep•1.审•2.构•3.列•4.连•5.美文体_____时态_____人称_____连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节列出要点HaveaTry!网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“TheInternetinOurLife”为题，用英语写一篇短文.•1.好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（请再举一个例子）•2.坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业•3.你的观点（考生自拟，至少一点）注意：1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3．短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。TheInternetinOurLifeInternetplaysaveryimportantroleinourlife.————————————————————————Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tips:•1.卷面工整。•2.规范写作过程。•3.多背诵美文，积累素材。