初中英语中考作文复习资料得分讲解和写作技巧提升

中考英语作文复习怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？一、写作要点•“一审”即审题。•“二写”即列纲。•“三连”即连句成文。•“四改”即修改润色全文。审题：做到三审•体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么•时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。列纲：做到三思•词汇—短语—句式列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。连句成文•根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。文章分3段：•综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题•正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话•结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华修改润色全文做到三查•要点、拼写、语法是否连贯•看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。连词：连贯句子•1)表层次first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,whatismore,last,also,andthen,next,besidesAtfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…inaddtionfinallyOnonehand....ontheotherhand，each/onecoinhastwosides，连词：连贯句子•2)表转折；but,however,though,although,afterall,inspiteof，fortunately，unfortunately，atthesametime…•3)表递近：inaddition,besides,moreover,what’smore•4)因果because,so,becauseof,thanksto,dueto,for,since,owingto,asaresult(of),hence,thus•5)例证forexample,forinstance,suchas连词：连贯句子•6)表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;•7)总结AsIsee,Asforme，Asweallknow,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,Ithink...,infact,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,insummary,tosumup,二、各类作文常用框架•1、话题作文，演讲总-分-总It’sadjforusto…..Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…What’smore,…Inaword,/Inshort,….•2、讨论报告，列举不同观点总-A方-B方-我方-总Recently,wehaveadiscussionabout….Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Athinks….Bthinksdifferently.….Asforme,/Inmyopinion,….AllroadsleadtoRome,wecanchoosethewayweliketo….•3、写信，建议总-分-总I’madjtohearthatyou…Hereissomeadviceforyou.Firstly,….Secondly,….Finally,….Inaword,…Ifyou…,youwill…习作点评Chooseoneofyourhobbiesandwriteanarticlefortheschoolmagazineaboutit.Tellthemagazinereaders.•Whatexactlyyourhobbyis;•Whenandhowyoubecameinterestedinthishobby;•Whyyouenjoyyourhobby;•Aboutyourhopesandplansforthefuture.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.•[学生习作A]•Myhobbyisreadbooks.WhenIwassevenyearsold.Ibecameinterestedinreadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooksbecausetherearealotofusefulthingsinbooks.Icanlearnalotofknowledgefrombooks.Booksalsocanteachmehowtobeagoodperson.Booksevencansolvemanyproblemsforme.Iwillreadmoregoodbookstoimprovemyself.①改为readingbooks，动词作表语时应该用动名词。②also的位置应放在can之后。12•[点评]：档次12-14分。•①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。•②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。•③有少量错误。•[学生习作B]•Myhobbyisreading.Readingbooksisveryenjoyable.WhenIwasyoung,mymotherusedtotellmeastorybefore.Iwenttobedeverynight.ThestoriesweresointerestingthatIalwaysfelttheyweren’tenough.SoIbegantoreadbooksbymyself.LittlebylittleIbecameinterestedinreading.Icanlearnmuchknowledgeandmanyinterestingthingsallovertheworld.WhenIreadbooks,Icanenjoythebeautifulsentences.AtthesametimeIcanimprovemywriting.Iwanttobeawriterinthefuture,soImuststudyhardandreadmorebookssothatmydreamcancometrue.•①开门见山、点题。•②真情流露，理由充分。•③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、•④巧妙使用句型以表决心。[点评]：档次17-19分。•①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。•②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。•③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。高分突破•①文体：记叙文。•②要点：what→when→how→why→hopeandplanforthefuture.•③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。三、提高写作的方法•1、造句Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves.使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语•学习•Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Agoodbookisagoodfriend.好书如挚友。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事总是由难而易。•AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。•Anhourinthemorningisworthtwointheevening.一日之计在于晨。•Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。。•Doingisbetterthansaying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日毕。•Everyminutecounts.分秒必争。Easiersaidthandone.说得容易，做得难。•Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。•Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。•Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。•Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。•Neversaydie.永不言败。•Nopains,nogains.没有付出就没有收获。•Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。•Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。•健康Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜过财富。•Healthishappiness.健康就是幸福。•议论文Everycoinhastwosides.事物有两面性•DoastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。•Moneyisn'teverything.钱不是万能的。Manyheadsarebetterthanone.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。Youcannoteatyourcakeandhaveit.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。•Unityisstrength.团结就是力量。•Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。•句型转换，句式多样性Tomisastudent.Heis16yearsold.HelikesrunningTom,a16-year-oldstudent,likesrunning.•多使用短语Igotupquickly.Igotupasquicklyaspossible.HestudiesEnglishwell.HeisgoodatEnglish.HedoeswellinEnglish.•Thegirllikesreading.•Theprettygirllikesreadingnovels.•Theprettygirllikesreadingnovelscarefully.•TheprettygirlwhoItalkedtojustnowlikesreadingnovelscarefully.扩写句子的衔接词并列关系：and，or，either...or，both...and，no