公开课——如何写建议信

writingDearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomeadvice.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue建议信EndingexpressyourhopeBeginningstateyourpurposeBodygiveadvice&reasons1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…3.Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.A.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradvice1.It’shelpful/importantto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…C.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…表达愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。Theuseofsentencepatterns表明意图：1.你给Jane回信就如何减肥提建议。提出建议：2、健康饮食3、多锻炼4、喝足够多的水Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食2、多锻炼3、喝足够多的水Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inaddition,itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Besides,italsohelpsifyoutakemoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Inaddition,itshouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater,becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。引出话题，表明写作意图1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。提出建议：总结，表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)评分标准1、是否覆盖所有内容要点2、是否恰当使用语法结构3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4、是否使用连接词5、全文结构是否完整合理DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua1.memorizethesentencepatterns2.polishyourwriting常见连接词——罗列观点•Firstly,•Firstofall,•Aboveall,•Tobeginwith,•Inthefirstplace,•Foronething,•Secondly,•Besides,•Moreover,•Inaddition,•What’smore,•Furthermore,•Worsestill,•Tomakemattersworse,•Foranotherthing,•Finally,•Atlast,•Intheend,•Lastbutnotleast,