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EnjoywritinginEnglish!写作基础训练张香玲Step1.Sentence-makingWatchthemovieandtrytokeepthemainideainyourmind.pickup/return/loser/earpayback/foolish/donatemoney/house/studyhard/workhard/makemoneyTask1Sentence-makingTask2Toanalysetheelementsofsentences(分析句子成分)•Thelittlepig’sfatherdidn’tstudyhard.•Thelittlepigpickeduptenyuan.•Thehouseofthepigsissmall.•Theteacherofthelittlepigaskedhisstudentstodonatesomemoney.•Thelittlepigreturnedthemoneytotheloser.五个基本句型•1)主语+谓语动词•2)主语+谓语动词+表语•3)主语+谓语动词+宾语•4)主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾补•5)主语+谓语动词+间宾+直宾请观察:(1)_____+____是英语句子必不可少的两要素;(2)_______在前,_______在后(3)______有人称,数,时态和语态的变化。主语谓语主语谓语谓语Step2Joinupsentences方法一连接词(First,second,then...finally,what’smore,however...)方法二连词(when,since,because,although...)Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.__________,wecantakearestincafes.Practice1请在下列句子中(间)填上恰当的连词或连接词。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelfreelyinthecity.3.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whensothatAssoonas5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.4.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.5.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.AsaresultWhat’sworse(1)*Thegirlismyclassmate.*Thegirlwonthefirstprize.Step2JoinupsentencesThegirlwhowonthefirstprizeismyclassmate.Practice2(2)*Istayedathomethisweekend.*Ididn’tgoshoppingwithmyfriends.Step2JoinupsentencesIstayedathomeinsteadofgoingshoppingthisweekend.(3)*Todayismybirthday.*Myfriendsgavemealotofpresents.*IreceivedtheUniversityadmissiontoady*HowhappyIamtoday!Step2JoinupsentencesTodayismybirthdayandmyfriendsgavemealotofpresents.What'smore,IreceivedtheUniversityadmissiontoady.HowhappyIam!Englishisimportantintoday'sworld.Therearemanyreasonsforit.First,Englishiswidelyusedintheworld.Secondly,wecangetveryimportantinformationinEnglish.Thirdly,Englishisalsousedatinternationalmeetings.Inaword,wecannotlivewellwithoutEnglishtoday.Step3Listenandretell.Step4Passagestructure主题主题“总——分——总”式展开①我经常在课后时间去参观博物馆和微机室,或到画室画画。②自从学生减负以来,我的生活变得有趣多了。③晚上,我也有时间看电视和读报了。④总的说来,我对现在的生活非常满意。⑤再也不用熬夜了,我经常10点左右就去睡了。Step5Organization(组句成篇)Correctorder:②①③⑤④Sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.Step6综合仿写请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件,谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因:1、家庭贫穷,供不起儿童上学,他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用,不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣,不愿上学。看法:1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育,他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。评分原则Clearidea5Correctgrammar5Completepassage5Beautifullanguage5Beautifulhandwriting5Step7MarkforyourdeskmateNowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcan’taffordtheireducation.Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedn’tgotoschool.Theydon’tletthemgotoschool.Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldn’tliketogotoschool.Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.Thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit.They’llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry.•Howtodoagoodwriting?1.准备充足的相关词汇。2.把内容要点用简单的句子翻译出来。3.按照一定的逻辑顺序整理各句内容,常用的文章结构多为“总分式”。4.运用连词联句成篇。5.最后,用漂亮的书法把文章写出来!Step8SummaryTHANKYOU!Goodbye!onawintermorning,becoveredwith,makeasnowman,throwsnowballsTask6:LookatthepictureandwriteastoryWhatwillhappenlater?LiMing,falldown,bebadlyhurt,can’tstandup,takehimtohospitalTask2:WriteatelephonemessageTELEPHONEMESSAGEFrom:_______________To:______________Date:_______________Time:_____________Message:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HuWeiTask3:WriteaNoteofAskingforLeaveANoteofAskingforLeaveDecember15th,2004DearMiss____,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LingMingAnoteaskingforsickleaveDearMissLiu,I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mnotfeelingwelltoday.Ihaveabadcold,andthedoctortoldmetostayinbedfortwodays,soIcan’tgotoschooltoday,IhopeIwillbebettertomorrowandbebacktoschoolsoonThankyou.Yours_______1111DearMissLiu,I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mnotfeelingwelltoday.Ihaveabadcold,andthedoctortoldmetostayinbedfortwodays,soIcan’tgotoschooltoday,IhopeIwillbebettertomorrowandbebacktoschoolsoonThankyou.Yours_______AnoteaskingforsickleaveJune25DearMrWu,I’msorrythatIcan’tgotoschooltoday.IhadanaccidentyesterdaywhileIwasplayingvolleyball.Ifelldownandbrokemyrightleg.Mycousintookmetohospital.ThedoctorsaidthatIhadtorestmylegforafewdays.NowI’mwritingtoyoutoaskforsickleave.RoseLeeTask4:Writealetter15RenmingRoadJinhua,321000Dcecmber22th,2004DearWangLin,Thankyouforyourletter.Imissallofyouverymuch.HowIwishtoseeyouallsoon!But……———————————————————————————————Yours,LiMingTask5:WriteadiaryFriday,December28th,2004SunnyI’msogladtoseemyteachersandfriendagain.。……_____________________________________________________________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