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概括方法对于故事类记叙文,我们应首先找出故事的主角,然后找出该主角(何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的)做了何事,再弄清结果如何,以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。其中“某人做了某事”是最主要的。在写作过程中还注意以下几点:(1)时态应与原文时态一致。(2)一般以第三人称的形式来表述。如I要变成Thewriter,he/she等。(3)可选用以下句式开头。Thepassage/storyisabout...Theauthortellsusastoryabouta...Thepassageisastoryabout...注:由于字数限制为大约30个词,我们也不一定要使用Thestorytellsus之类的开头语。超级模板(不一定都适合,仅作参考)(1)Inorderto...sb.didsth./sth.happened.Asaresult/Therefore,...(2)sb.didsth./sthhappened./whichshows...dueto/thanksto/because(of)...whichshows...主题:诚实才是上策1.Theauthortellsastoryabout(某人)aChinesestudentwithanexcellentacademicachievementwho(做某事)couldn’tfindajobinGermany(原因)becauseofhisstealingridesatthesubway,(启示)whichshowshonestyisthebestpolicy.(2011广州一模)参考范文2.(某人做了某事)Theauthorhappenedtopickanumbrellaonabusandtriedtofinditsowner.(结果)Shewaspleasedtofindtheownerandalsogotajobofferedbytheowneroftheumbrella.(1)Someyearsago,leavingthefarmtoworkinthecity,threebrotherswereemployedbythesamecompanyandonthesamepay.Butthreeyearslater,theyreceiveddifferentwages.Sotheirfatherwasconfusedanddecidedtopayavisittotheboss,whotoldhimthathewouldlethissonsexplainforthemselves.超级仿写概要写作Thethreebrotherswereaskedbythesupervisortogototheairporttogetacargoinventoryatdifferenttimes.Jim,whoreceived500dollarsamonth,gottheinformationonthephoneinsteadofgoingtotheairporthimself.Frank,the1000dollarsamonthbrotherwithalistofmorecargoes.George,the1500dollarsamonthbrothercamebackwithdetailedinformationandalsodidsomethingextrawithoutbeingtold.参考答案:(某人做了某事)Threebrothers,whoworkedforthesamecompany,receiveddifferentwages(原因)duetotheirdifferentattitudestowardstheirwork,(意义)whichshowsarightattitudeisofgreathelptoone’slife.(2)Ihiredacarpentertohelpmerepairanoldfarmhouse.Afterhejustfinishedatiringdayonthejob,aflattiremadehimloseanhourofwork.Worsestill,hisancienttruckrefusedtostart.WhenIdrovehimhome,hesatinstonysilence.Onarriving,heinvitedmeintomeethisfamily.Aswewalkedtowardthefrontdoor,hestoppedforashorttimeatasmalltree,touchingthebrancheswithbothhands.Whenopeningthedoor,hisbrownfacewascoveredwithsmilesandhehuggedhistwosmallchildrenandgavehiswifeakiss.Aftersupper,hewalkedmetothecar.Whenwepassedthetreeandmycuriositydrovemetoaskhim,“Beforewewentin,whydidyoustopbythetree?”“Oh,that’smytroubletree,”hereplied,“IknowIcan’thelphavingtroublesonthejobandinmylife,butthosetroublesdon’tbelonginthehousewithmywifeandchildren.IcanhangthemuponthetreeeverynightbeforeIcomehome.Butitturnedoutthatthenextmorningthereweren’tasmanytroublesasIrememberedthenightbefore.Putdownourworriesforamomentandwewillberelievedforever.”参考答案:Inordernottoworryhisfamily,(某人做了某事)hedidn’tbringhistroublehome,andtohissurprise,heforgotthetroublethenextday.(启示)Therefore,weareadvisedtoputdownourworriesandrelieveourpressure.2.读写任务(某人做某事)Aboy,whousedtothinkhouseworkwasanadult’sjob,wasaskedtowashdishes.Thoughsurprisedandunwillingtodosoatfirst,(结果)hefinallyrealizedhe,too,shouldtakeonresponsibilityinthehousehold.Nowadays,quitealotofchildrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsdoallthechoresathome.Theyareeitherbusyplayinggamesordoingtheirschoolworkbutseldomwashdishesordothecleaning.Itis,ofcourse,notrightforchildrennottotakeonanyresponsibilityinthehousehold.Asafamilymember,achildshouldhelpwiththehouseworksothattheirparentscanrelaxthemselvesafteralongday’swork.Ifachildtakeshisroleinthehousework,hewillbecomesympatheticandconsiderateandwouldliketohelpothers.Iusedtoberatherlazy,notparticipatinginanyhouseworkanddidnotunderstandmyparents’hardshipuntilonedayIhelpedcleanthehouse.Fromthenon,IfinditapleasuretohelpothersandIamproudtosayIhavegrowntobeapersonwhocantakeonresponsibilitiesbothathomeandatschool.
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