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主要作文分析Stylesofpassagenarration1argumentation2exposition3……..4Howtosummarizeanarration:Skill:要素串联法WhatWhoWhenWherewhyhowHowtosummarizeanargumentation论点—观点主题句论据—(事例)结论Skill:议论三步法应用文•以书信、通知等为主•作文出现的问题1、汉语式思维Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、谓语缺失Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.4、谓语动词用法出错Hedressedinanewcoat.5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.6、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.7、分数与百分数作主语Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容词、副词混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.检查1.单词拼写2.时态\语态3.句子的衔接,过渡4.主谓一致5.动词的过去式,过去分词6.句子是否完整•如何写好词汇,句型,语法多样化1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章?1.句式要有变化①复合句(主语\宾语\表语\同谓语\定语\状语从句)②倒装句(1)否定词置于句首(2)only+状语置于句首(3)虚拟语气中if省略③强调句型Itis……that(who)…④固定句子结构•too…to…so…that…not…until…•notonly…butalso…neither…nor…Thegirlbegantolearntoplaythepianowhenshewasachild.Hermotherwasafamouspianist.Thegirlwhosemotherwasafamouspianistbegantolearntoplaythepianowhenshewasachild.YoucanseepandaonlyinChina.OnlyinChinacanyouseepanda.ItisonlyinChinathatyoucanseepanda.Tomlikesapple,andJacklikesittoo.NotonlyTombutalsoJacklikestheapple.2.要使用高级词汇及短语①使用高等级词汇Heisagoodstudent.excellent\extraordinary②使用短语Ilikemusic.befondof\beinterestedin③使用谚语Asthesayinggoes,“”Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.(适用于自编名言)•并列•选择•原因•结果•比较•转折•递进•举例3.使用连接词,过渡自然,连贯通顺,and;aswellas;also;too,or;either—or;because(of);owingto;dueto;thankstoso;therefore;thus;asaresultonthecontrary;bycontrast\comparisoncomparedto…,but;yet;however;nevertheless,besides;moreover;inadditionfurthermoreforexample/instance;suchas;thatis;namely;take…forexample1.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________(所以)we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforeSoasaresult/consequencethus结果3.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理,另外,位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外(递进)4.Theyoungmandidn’tenjoyhisoldjob._________(相反)hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.Onthecontrary,However,转折But/yet/while5.__________(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.IngeneralInaword/allinall总结Inshort/briefGenerallyspeaking6.______________(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.weshouldspendtimeandmoneyonothermoreimportantthings.AsfarasI’mconcernedInmyopinion/it’smyopinionthat个人观点Ithink/believe高中英语写作-----Howtowriteanargumentation(议论文)评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式1.提出要评论的事物或观点.2.分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)3.归纳得出作者的结论.a.有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)b.争议较大的或尚无定论的,可不明确表态,提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.典型模板书面表达(满分30分)1.暑假即将来临,你班同学讨论了假期计划,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷)优点缺点待在家中花费少,舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识,开阔眼界(horizon/view)花费多,旅途不便注意:1.词数100-1202.短文必须包括表中所列要点。3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.1.convenientandcomfortablecostless/savemoneylosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld2.increaseone’sknowledgeandwidenone’shorizons/views1.(待在家中)花费少,舒适方便不能亲身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增长知识,开阔眼界花费多,旅途不便spendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroubleonthewaybeginning1.havedifferentviewsonsth/2.reacttosthindifferentways.3.differintheirattitudestowardssth.conclusionmyopinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.someothersThesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Studentsreacttothisproblemindifferentways.Someareinfavorofstayingathome.Theysayit’sbothconvenientandcomfortable.What’smore,theycansetasidemoneyforotherpurposes.ButTheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogoouttravelingasitcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroublewhiletraveling.Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.Whenstayingathome,IgettodowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework.Inaword,tostayathomeisbetterthantotravel.书面表达(满分30分)当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里,有人喜欢住在公寓里,请你以“Liveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartment”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.住在传统的房子里:可以在院子里种花,树,可以养宠物,可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里:干净,安全,离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意:词数100-120,文章题目和开头已给出(不计词数)LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.Butpeopledifferintheiropinionsonthematter.Somepeopleprefertoliveinatraditionalhouse.Theremightbeseveralreasons,Ithink.Inthefirstplace,youcangrowflowersandtreesintheyardifyouliveinatraditionalhouse.Be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