应用文写作复习笔记(1)

英语应用文写作复习笔记第一部分basicwriting(30%)张金慧•Section1:revision.(10*1.5分)•Section2:writing,根据汉语提纲写一篇120词的作文。（15分）Section1:revision.(10*1.5分)•（1）Ihaveseveralreasonsthatphonewillnotkillletterwriting.•Revised:Ihaveseveralreasonstoprovethatphonewillnotkillletterwriting.•（2）BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.•Revised:HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe70shebecameafamousmusician.•（3）Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.•Revised:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.•Revised:Amanisjudgednotonlybyhissaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.•（4）Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andaverycapableyoungwoman.•Revised:Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andverycapable.•（5）Theflowerisredincolor.•（6）HereturnedintheearlypartofthemonthofAugust.•（7）Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourplanisfeasible.•（8）ProfessorSmithisalearnedandkindprofessor.•(9)SmithCollege,whichwasfoundedin1871,isthepremierall-women’scollegeintheUnitedStates.•Revised:Foundedin1871,SmithCollegeisthepremierall-women’scollegeintheUnitedStates.•(10)Citizenswhoknewwhatwasgoingonvotedhimoutoftheoffice.•Revised:Knowledgeablecitizensvotedhimoutoftheoffice.•(11)Therearetwenty-fivestudentswhohavealreadyexpressedadesiretoattendtheprogramnextsummer.Itistheyandtheirparentswhostandtogainthemostbythegovernmentgrant.•Revised:Twenty-fivestudentshavealreadyexpressedadesiretoattendtheprogramnextsummer.Theyandtheirparentswhostandtogainthemostbythegovernmentgrant.•(12)Asamatteroffact,therearemorewoodlandsinchinanowthantherewerein1998.•Revised:Therearemorewoodlandsinchinanowthantherewerein1998.•(13)Inmyopinion,thiswastefulpolicyoughttoberevoked.Revised:Thiswastefulpolicyoughttoberevoked.•(14)ThemoviewasmuchlongerthanKaraanticipated.Shefellasleeptwice.•Revised:ThemoviewasmuchlongerthanKaraanticipated,andshefellasleeptwice.•(15)①Andapplicationtakesjudgment.②Thejudgmentinvolvessomethingofasixthsenseinahighperformanceofmind.•Revised:Andapplicationtakesjudgment,whichinvolvessomethingofasixthsenseinahighperformanceofmind.•(16)①Iconsideredtheonwardandupwardcourseshehadsetforme.②Ishouldhaveknownbetter.•Revised:Consideringtheonwardandupwardcourseshehadsetforme,Ishouldhaveknownbetter.•(17)Theexamwaspostponed,theclasswascancelledaswell.•Revised:①Theexamwaspostponed.theclasswascancelledaswell.②Theexamwaspostponed,andtheclasswascancelledaswell.③Theexamwaspostponed;theclasswascancelledaswell.(18)AfterIarrivedinChicagobybus,Icheckedintoaroom.•(19)Ispentalldayintheemploymentoffice.tryingtofindajobthatsuitedme.•Revised:Ispentalldayintheemploymentoffice,tryingtofindajobthatsuitedme.•(20)Erictookanasideseatonthebus,hisreasonbeingthathehadmorelegroom.•Revised:①Erictookanasideseatonthebus.hisreasonbeingthathehadmorelegroom.②Erictookanasideseatonthebus,hisreasonwasthathehadmorelegroom.•(21)Awomantoberespectedandevenfeared.•Revised:Sheisawomantoberespectedandevenfeared.•(22)Toremindpeopleoftheirselfishness.Otisleavesnotesoncarsthattakeuptwoparkingspaces.•revised:Toremindpeopleoftheirselfishness,Otisleavesnotesoncarsthattakeuptwoparkingspaces.•(23)Iamalwaysshortofpocketmoney.especiallyforeverydayitemslikemagazinesandsoda.•Revised:Iamalwaysshortofpocketmoney,especiallyforeverydayitemslikemagazinesandsoda.•(24)Treesareimportantonbuildingsite.Breakthewind.•Revised:Treesareimportantonbuildingsite.Theybreakthewind.•(25)Theboyistroublewithhismother,withhisteacher,andwithhisclassmates.•(26)Healwayshasandalwayscompeteforthehighesthonor.•Revised:Healwayscompetedandwillalwayscompeteforthehighesthonor.•(27)Thestudentsattendingourschoolsaremoreintelligentthanyourschool.•Revised:Thestudentsattendingourschoolsaremoreintelligentthanthoseattendingyourschool.•(28)Billyelledatthedoginhisunderwear.•Revised:Bill,inhisunderwear,yelledatthedog.•(29)Joandecidedtolivewithherparentswhensheattendedcollegetosavemoney.•Revised:Tosavemoney,Joandecidedtolivewithherparentswhensheattendedthecollege.•(30)Havingfinishedtheassignment,theTVwasturnedon.•Revised:Havingfinishedtheassignment,heturnedontheTV.•(31)Afterthreehoursofpractice,abottleofcokewaswhatIwanted.•Revised:Afterthreehoursofpractice,Iwantedabottleofcoke.•(32)Watchingtheparade,mywalletwasstolen.•Revised:Watchingtheparade,Ifoundmywalletwasstolen.•(33)Whenonthetopfloorofthetallbuilding,thecarslookedliketinyfishinthestream.•Revised:Whenonthetopfloorofthetallbuilding,wefoundthecarslookedliketinyfishinthestream.Section2:writing,根据汉语提纲写一篇120词的作文。（15分）•Anexample•Wehadawonderfulvocation!(1)Wevisitedmygrandparents’homefortheholiday.(2)Therewemetallmycousins,aunts,anduncles.(3)Weategoodfoodandplayedalot.(4)Wewentshoppingandsightseeing.(5)Ididn’tfeellikecomingback!(6)表示顺序：•首先：Firstofall,initially,ontheonehand,foronething,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,forastart•其次：additionally,subsequently,furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,afterwards,simultaneously表示原因：•Becauseof,dueto,owingto,asaresult/consequenceof,resultfrom,inresponseto+n.(短语)•Seeingthat…,consideringthat…,giventhat…,nowthat…,inthat…,forthereasonthat+句子…表示结果•Therefore，