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这是剑7TEST3Asmostpeoplespendamajorpartoftheiradultlifeatwork,jobsatisfactionisanimportantelementofindividualwellbeing.Whatfactorscontributetojobsatisfaction?Howrealisticistheexpectationofjobsatisfactionforallworkers?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Nowadaysmanyadultshavefull-timejobsandtheproportionoftheirlivesspentdoingsuchjobsisveryhigh.Sofeelingsaboutone’sjobmustreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlifeasawhole,andbecauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportantforthewellbeingofthatperson.Employeesgetjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.Firstly,apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingvaluedandvaluablework,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorisveryimportantinhisrespect.Asenseoffulfillmentisalsoencouragedifaworkerfeelsthejobisworthdoingbecauseitcontributestothesocietyortheeconomyasawhole.Secondly,whensomeonefeelstheyareimprovingordevelopingtheirskillsthroughtrainingopportunities,forexample,thenthereisasenseofprogressandpurposethatrewardsaworker.Thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfactionbecausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.Satisfactionisalsoincreasedbyasenseofresponsibilityfortheloyaltoateam.Ofcoursenoteveryoneenjoystheirwork.Hardeconomicrealitiesmeanthatmanypeoplehavelittlechoiceinthekindofjobtheycanget.Insomecasesanemployeeisworkinginajobthatsuitsneithertheirskillsnortheirpersonality.Somejobsarerepetitiveandboring,andlabourrelationsmaybepoorandleadtoresentmentandinsecurityratherthantojobsatisfaction.However,eventhoughitisunlikelythatallworkersdofeelhappyintheirwork,Ithinkitisnotunrealistictopromotemorejobsatisfactioninanyjob.Ifthefactorsidentifiedaboveimplemented,thenanyjobcanbeimprovedandmoreworkerscanfeelgreaterdegreesofjobsatisfaction试题Asmostpeoplespendamajorpartoftheiradultlifeatwork,jobsatisfactionisanimportantelementofindividualwellbeing.Whatfactorscontributetojobsatisfaction?Howrealisticistheexpectationofjobsatisfactionforallworkers?看到这个题目就知道考试想让我们分析一种现象，谈谈看法，不是通常意义上的对有争议性问题的讨论。最后一句“对所有工人而言，工作满意度的期望具有多大实际意义？”，howold,howoften,howlong中的how做adv，表示“多大程度”，后面接adj,adv。第一段Nowadaysmanyadultshavefull-timejobsandtheproportionoftheirlivesspentdoingsuchjobsisveryhigh.中规中矩的开头，介绍背景theirlivesspentdoingsuchjobs,spent过去分词修饰lives,正常语序为spendtheirlivesdoingsuchjobs.众所周知，动名词的词性为名词，而过去分词或现在分词词性为形容词，切记Theproportionoftime/moneyspentdoingathingishigh/small.可以常用来表示时间、金钱或精力在某事上的消耗程度，如TheproportionofoursparetimespentsurfingontheInternetisveryhigh。Sofeelingsaboutone’sjobmustreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlifeasawhole,一句表达因果关系中的结果，so+结果，其中so为conj,adv，此处为adv,若为conj,so前面则为逗号。Must表示“必定”，表推断，很多情态动词都有这种用法，can可能，cannot不可能，must必定Hisorherlife指代前面anindividual用了hisorher，这是表示两性平等，是一种政治正确（politicalcorrectness）的表现，同样的还有heorsheandbecauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportantforthewellbeingofthatperson.Becauseofthis指代因果关系中的原因，this指代前面那句话Wellbing/well-being[u]表示幸福，健康的一种状态，这个词经常用到，类似的还有welfare[u],也是表示幸福，健康的一种状态第二段Employeesgetjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.典型的主旨句，inanumberofways提示下面将详细描述。Firstly,apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingvaluedandvaluablework,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorsisveryimportantinhisrespect.firstly引导时间顺序或逻辑顺序的副词，根本就不存在同学们所说的“模板词”so+结果，这里so是副词Superior[c]上级subordinate[c]下级employer[c]老板employee[c]员工inhisrespect,inrespectofsth表某个方面，其中respect[c]方面；类似的还有intermsofsthAsenseoffulfillmentisalsoencouragedifaworkerfeelsthejobisworthdoingbecauseitcontributestothesocietyortheeconomyasawhole.还是因果关系，because[conj],引导原因状语从句Asenseoffulfillment成就感，类似的有asenseofhumour幽默感asenseofjustice正义感asenseofdirection方向感好好品味一下作者用词造句多样化的能力Needtofeel,feel感到，谓语动词；asenseoffulfillment,sense感觉，名词作主语Valuedandvaluablework;thejobisworthdoingSecondly,whensomeonefeelstheyareimprovingordevelopingtheirskillsthroughtrainingopportunities,forexample,thenthereisasenseofprogressandpurposethatrewardsaworker.Secondly,接第二个方面的理由When[conj],此处明表时间，实际表原因，asenseofprogress进步感asenseofpurpose目的性Theyareimprovingordevelopingtheirskills作者运用现在进行时态增加了时态多样性，说明一点，很多情况下，一个句子可以从用多种时态都没有错，只是表意上有略微差别，如此处改为theyimproveordeveloptheirskills也对Therebe表存在一种物体或现象，英语中应用广泛Thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfactionbecausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.Satisfactionisalsoincreasedbyasenseofresponsibilityforandtheloyaltoateam.用两个also,also来说明了第三，四条道理，thesenseofbelonging归属感，asenseofresponsibility责任感体会句型多样性SthcontributestojobsatisfactionSatisfactionisincreasedbysth第三段Ofcoursenoteveryoneenjoystheirwork.主旨句，“并非每个人都喜欢他么的工作”Ofcourse这种成分称为句子附加状语，也有人叫做评注性状语，表明作者的评价和态度，这种成分很重要，如常见的personally,certainly,perhaps,fortunately等等，范文出现很多此类成分，我会一一点明，这个肯定用得到，而且一学就会，特别提醒Noteveryone,部分否定，语法题必考内容，Allisnotgoldthatglitters,闪光的并非都是金子，莎士比亚的这句名言是部分否定的经典示例，又如网络名言“有翅膀的并非都是天使，也可能是鸟人”，也可作为部分否定的范例Hardeconomicrealitiesmeanthatmanypeoplehavelittlechoiceinthekindofjobtheycanget.Mean意味着，其实可视为表达结果，如改为“Hardeconomicrealitiesleadtothefactthat”hardeconomicrealities,economicdowntown(crisis,tsunami)在现在的全球经济状况下，这些词想必大家不会陌生，虽然CCTV天天唱“风景这边独好”也改变不了现实的残酷。Insomecasesanemployeeisworkinginajobthatsuitsneitherthei