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!Thetrumpetofprophecy!Owind!IfWintercomes,canSpringbefarbehind?PercyByssheShelley第一部分:困境:一.评分标准:语言第一位;结构第二位;内容第三位;二.滔滔不绝意识流:1)自由分段不可取;(compact)2)语言杂乱不可取;(concise)3)一段文章不可取;(concrete)三.无话可说真难受:1)立论法:广告效应,(P114)电脑时代,技术改变生活,大学学费上涨,学习和成功的关系,(P154:朋友和家庭,电视上瘾,劣质产品,城乡差距),环境保护的重要性驳论法:是否应该购买外国货,是否应该禁放烟花爆竹四.思维跳跃断层多:启:first,atpresent,firstofall,aboveall,atthefirstplace,ontheonehand,foronething,tobeginwith,为第一观点。承:second,ontheotherhand,inaddition,additionally,moreover,whatismore,furthermore,third,lastbutnotleast,为第二观点转:But,however,nevertheless,onthecontrary,unlike,otherwise,conversely,unfortunately,whereas,unfortunately,surprisingly,ironically合:Accordingly,therefore,asaresult,consequently,inconclusion,tosumup,ingeneral,onthewhole,byandlarge,inbrief,brieflyspeaking因果:dueto/owingto/thanksto/asaresultof+名词___inorderto+动词Alongwith/Coupledwith+名词As/since/because+句子CoupledwithAisBthatcontributesto(isresponsiblefor)C引用:Asthesayinggoes,assomebodyputit,句型首尾:Givenalltheabovefactors,itissafetoreachtheconclusionthatTakingintoaccountalltheabovefactors,itisreasonabletoreachtheconclusion五、低级错误常出现:三一致:主谓一致;时态一致;人称一致;两不能:不能串句,不能断句第二部分:写作流程和模版Issue1)起始段写法方法(1),先复述原题,表明立场’spositionisnotwhollyinsupportable,farmorecompellingargumentscanbemadefor_______.2)复述原题,指出其复杂性,说明自己的立场Theissuethat_______isacomplexone,sinceitinvolvesaconflictbetween_____and_______.Inmyview,thefinaljudgmentshoulddependonacase-by-caseanalysisoftwokeyfactors.3)复述两种立场,表明立场Sincethe1960s,therehasbeensomeheateddiscussiononthe________.Somepeoplemaintainthat__________,whileotherpeoplearguethat_______.Bycomparison,Itendtofavorlatterpointofview.2)中间段写法方法(1)有让步的同意Tobeginwith,comparedwiththepast,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthe________.Asaresult,________.Withthetimegoesby,itisnaturalthat________.What’smore,(原因2)thepatternof______asawholealsoundergoescertaindramatictransformation.So_________.(原因3)Finally,thecountryhas,forthepastdecades,witnessedanupsurgeof______.Sonowadays,avarietyofmoderntechnicaldevicesareavailable.Byandby,theyoungpeoplefinditmoreconvenienttocontacttheirparentsthroughtelephoneorE-mailsinsteadofstayingwiththeirparents.Thosewhoadvocate_________mightpointoutthat______.Evenso,thesituationisnotabsolute,norisitthemostcriticalelement.Asamatteroffact,______.方法(2)有让步的不同意Admittedly,thosewhopreachabouttheso-calledadvantagesof_____docontainsomeelementoftruth.Forinstance,__________.Nevertheless,thesearguerstendtoneglectthreeotheressentialfactors,themostimportantofwhich,Ipropose,isthat________.Additionally,numerousstudieshaveshownthat_________.Finally,suppose______who______.Surelyenough,____________.方法(3)拒绝选择立场Sincethe1960s,theworldhaswitnessedsomedramaticchangesinthe_______.Undersuchconditions,itisnotuncommonthat______________.Forexample,________.Insomeotherinstances,however,theabove-mentionedsituationisnotalwaysadequate.Forinstance,suppose_________who_______.Surelyenough,_________.Anotherexceptiontothisapproachisthecaseof_______.Admittedly,theseareexceptionalcases,yettheydoexist.3)结论段方法(1)重申立场Inconclusion,__________.方法(2)重申立场,提一些建议措施Giventheconsiderationsabove,itissafetoconcludethat______hasexertedimpactsonthesustainabledevelopmentof_____,butwhatmeasuresshouldbetakentoarrestandreversethissituation?______areexpectedtolaunchcomprehensiveprojectsthatattachdueimportanceto______.Foranotherthing,peopleinurbanareas,______inparticular,areexpectedtoenhancetheirawarenessthat_______.Manyoptionsstillexist,andhumanbeingscanstillhaveabrightfutureunderaharmoniousfamilyatmosphere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“______.”ISSUE写作“五不能”1)观点不能缺乏角度2)观点绝对不能化3)专业术语不能过多4)例证陈腐不能陈腐5)不能过度依赖个人经历Argumentation1)起始段方法(1)Sincethe1960s,therehasbeensomeheateddiscussiononthe______.Somepeoplemaintainthat_________.Whattheypreachaboutdoescontainsomeelementsoftruth,however,throughdecadesofobservationandpractice,itturnsoutthattheirstatementhasmanyrestrictions.方法(2)Theauthorofthisargumentclaimsthat_________.Tosupportthisclaimtheauthorcitescertainevidenceinvolvinghisownexperienceandobservationwiththeissue.However,closescrutinyofthisevidencerevealsthatitlendslittlecreditfortheauthor’sassertion.方法(3)Thestatementendorsedinthisremarkisthat_______.However,thisargumentinvolvesthesortofgrossoversimplificationandemotionalappealtypicalofeloquenceandrhetoric.Forthisreason,itisratherconvincing.2)拓展段:首先承认前者观点的合理之处,然后找到至少两点坏处方法(1)Admittedly,thosewhopreachabouttheso-calledadvantagesof_____docontainsomeelementoftruth.Forinstance,__________.Nevertheless,thesearguerstendtoneglectthreeotheressentialfactors.First,______.Second,_______.Thirdandlast,_______.Tosumup,thenotionheldbytheauthorisnotjustified.方法(2)’tfollowthat__________.方法(3)Admittedly,theideaheldbythosewho__________doescontainanelementoftruth.Forexample,accordingtothesurvey,_
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