【名师指津】2012高考英语写作基础技能步步高12句子润色用高级结构让句子靓起来课件

利用以下各招可给句子润色,让句子靓起来。1.使用强调句。用do,does,did强调一般时态的谓语动词;用itis...that...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizedher.直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。2.使用倒装句。OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。3.使用with的复合结构。如：Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn’tgoonstudying.由于那噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。4.使用非谓语动词。Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofourschool,thebotanicalgardenhasanareaof1000squaremetres.校园西南角/面积1000平方米。5.恰当使用被动句。Aboveall,somethingmustbedonetostoppolluting.最重要的是,必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。6.使用各类从句,如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。There’remanykindsofteainChina,ofwhichLongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.中国的茶叶有很多种,其中龙井茶是世界著名的。7.“数词+名词”改用“asmanyas+数词+名词”。Agreatnumberofbuildingsweredestroyed,leavingasmanyas10,000,000peoplehomeless.请多房屋被摧毁,使多达千万的人失去家园。8.使用what引导的主语从句。Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofindshewassuchafineswimmer.使我大为吃惊的是,我发现她竟是一位优秀的游泳选手。9.适当使用插入语。如Iguess,Ithink，Ibelieve,however,inmyopinion,inotherwords,thatistosay,generallyspeaking,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest,asweknow,what’sworse等。即时练习使用上述润色技巧,合并或改写下列句子。1.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(强调句)1.ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.2.Wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans.(倒装)2.Onlybythismeanscanweliveahappylife.3.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with结构)3.Hefellasleepwiththelightson.4.WhenIheardthat,Iwasmuchmoved.(非谓语动词)4.Hearingthat,Iwasmuchmoved.5.Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students.(被动语态)5.Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students.6.Theywerefacedwithmanyproblems.Theydidn’tloseheart.(非谓语动词)6.Facedwithmanyproblems,theydidn’tloseheart．7.Itwasgettingdark.Anditbegantorain.(插入语)7.Itwasgettingdark.Whatwasworse,itbegantorain.8.Heworkedveryhard.Hemadegreatprogressinhisstudy.(改为复合句)8.Heworkedsohardthathemadegreatprogressinhisstudy.9.HeofferedmeapieceofadvicethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.(what引导的主语从句)9.WhatheofferedmewasapieceofadvicethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.10.Igotonabus.Therewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.(定语从句)10.Igotonabusonwhichtherewerealreadytoomanypeople.11.50%ofthestudentssurveyedchoosesuperstarsastheiridols.(强调数字)11.Asmanyas50%ofthestudentssurveyedchoosesuperstarsastheiridols.