雅思图表写作：表格

雅思英语●写作篇PPT编写：胡宇斌CMATrainingCentre图表题写作WSkillsRITING温故知新图表5种类型表格Table线图(直线/曲线)Linegraph柱状图(条形图)Barchart饼图Piechart流程图ProcessdiagramLearnthenewwhilereviewingtheold表格写作WSkillsRITING第二讲表格主体段写作要点纵横比较,分类描写;抓住特点,着眼区别;量化对比,减除运算。→P224例题11注意:①除法—数字较大且悬殊，以倍数关系说明差别（twice/triple/three-fold/fourtimes）；②减法—数字较小且相差不大，以差值说明差别。表格主体段①第一句开头由此可见的表达法：Accordingtothe(图表名称),Asshowninthe…,Ascanbeseenfromthe…，（Wecanseefromthe…that…）Itcanbeseenfromthe…that…Itismanifest/apparent/clearfromthe…that…②第二句具体说来的表达法：Tobemoreexact,…=moreexactlyTobemoreprecise,…=morepreciselyTobemorespecific,…=morespecifically表格主体段写作实战表格出现时间怎么办？例见P223例10第一个表格想想怎么写？HowcanIwriteit?写作解析注意：①既有不同的时间（1994-1998），也有不同的对象（四种原因）。②试写三段。第一段（开头段）改写题目文字说明。第二段（主体段）分别描写各个对象在这段时间的变化。第三段（结尾段）对各对象进行比较。表示趋势的短语-动词（复习）：数字趋势动词1.上升趋势:rise,goup,2.下降趋势:fall,sink,drop,dip,reduce,godown3.保持不变:remainsteady,showno/littlechange4.波动:fluctuate趋势动词替换1.上升趋势:increase,grow,climb,ascend(jump,surge,soar,shootup)2.下降趋势:decrease,decline,descend(plunge,slump)3.保持不变:leveloff/outat,hoverat,stabilizeat,reachaplateauat表示趋势的短语-形容词（复习）：1.速度快:dramatic,drastic,rapid,2.速度慢:gradual,slow,steady3.幅度大:significant,substantial,marked4.幅度小:slight,modest,moderate注意:①以上加ly均为副词。②表示分别的副词是respectively。表示趋势的短语-其它（复习）：1.最高点:peakat,reachthehighestpointat,2.最低点:bottomoutat,reachthebottomat,thelowestpointat3.达到多少（量）:amountto,reach,hit,standat4.占多少（比例）:accountfor,makeup,occupy,represent写作示范（P223例10）第一段（开头段）改写题目文字说明。The(first)tablecomparesthefourreasonswhy100,000UKpeopletravelabroadforfiveyearsto1998(whilethesecondtableoutlinesthedestinationofvisitsabroadbyUKresidentsduringthisperiod.)第二段（主体段）分别描写各个对象在这段时间的变化段落结构：首句Itismanifestfromthe(first)tablethatthepurposeofvisitsabroadbyUKresidentswasmadeupofholiday,business,visitstofriendsandrelatives,andotherreasons.Specifically,…具体描写各对象在这段时间的变化….Specifically,therewasaslightdecreaseinthenumberofUKtravelersforholidayfrom1994to1995.Afterthat,thenumberincreasedsharplyuntil1998,peakingat20,700.（度假，2句）The5yearswitnessedagradualriseinthenumberforbusinessfrom3155to3957.（生意，1句）Incomparison,thenumberforvisitstofriendsandrelativesremainedstablefrom1994to1995.However,therewasadramaticgrowthinthefollowingtwoyears.（访亲，2句）Theperiodfrom1994to1998experiencedafluctuationinthenumberforotherreasons.（其他，1句）第三段（结尾段）对各对象进行比较。Wecanclearlyseefromthetablethatfrom1994to1998,holidayhadthehighestnumberofUKtravelersamongthefourreasons.(最大值）Thenumberforbusinesswashigherthanthatforvisitstofriendsandrelatives.(第二最大值）Otherreasonshadthesmallestnumberinthefourreasons.(最小值）表格主体段写作实战表格出现时间怎么办？例见P224例10第二个表格想想怎么写？HowcanIwriteit?Table主体段模版Thetablesgivesdataabout___________.Accordingtothefirsttable,….Specifically,….Infigure2,itcanbeseenthat….Moreprecisely….Consequently,itcanbeconcludedthatthereisasignificanttrendtowards__________.表格主体段写作巩固作业例见P218例题520分钟。写作解析分析说明：①如果没有不同的时间，只有不同的对象，主体段按描述对象分段，如果描述对象多于三个，把相似的对象合为一段来写。②通过分析与表发现:美国一枝独秀，中间三个国家相似，第一个国家（孟加拉）最差，所以写三段。(按教材写成5段或4段也行，清晰，但缺少分析与变化。）参考答案：Thetableillustratesfouraspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountriesin1982.（注意改写手段：横的四项，竖的五项，加上时间。）USAhadthehighestquality(最高值)oflifeinthefivecountries.IthadthehighestGNperheadanddailycalorieintake（热量摄取）,thelongestlifeexpectancyandthelowestinfantmortalityrate.In1982,itsGNperheadwas13160USdollars,(最高值).butitsinfantmortalityratewasonly12per1000livebirths(最低值).Egypt,IndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilar(相同值可以合写，妙招。)inthefourindicators(指标).Asawhole,Egypthadthehighest(次分类中的最高值)qualityoflifeamongthethreecountries.Ithadthehighestnumberinthreeindicators:GNperhead,dailycaloriesupplyperheadandlifeexpectancy.In1982,itsGNperheadwas690USdollars,whereas(时刻记住对比)thoseofIndonesiaandBoliviawere580and570USdollarsrespectively.（下面转折写另一个明显特征）However,Indonesia’sinfantmortalityratewas87per1000,whichwasslightlylower(较低值)thanthatofEgypt(97)andthatofBolivia(124).Bangladeshhadthelowestqualityoflifeinthefivecountries.(总的趋势：最低值)ItsGNPwas100timessmallerthantheUSA’s.(最低值和最高值比较：除法-多少倍)ThefiguresintermsofthedailycaloriesupplyperheadandlifeexpectancyatbirthinBangladeshwereonlythehalfofthose(除法)inUSA.(高低比较：约一半)Anditsinfantmortalityratewas11timesgreater.(高低比较：除法-多少倍)回顾使用过的句型开头段Thetableillustratesfouraspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountriesin1982.两个对象之间的比较However,Indonesia’sinfantmortalityratewas87per1000,whichwasslightlylowerthanthatofEgypt(97)andthatofBolivia(124).(较低值)用括号描述具体数据，是加分点。三个以上对象的比较USAhadthehighestquality(最高值)oflifeinthefivecountries.IthadthehighestGNperheadanddailycalorieintake,thelongestlifeexpectancyandthelowestinfantmortalityrate.Asawhole,Egypthadthehighest(次分类中最高值)qualityoflifeamongthethreecountries.Ithadthehighestnumberinthreeindicators:GNperhead,dailycaloriesupplyperheadandlifeexpectancy.Bangladeshhadthelowestqualityoflifeinthefivecountries.描述倍数ItsGNPwas100timessmallerthantheUSA’s.ThefiguresintermsofthedailycaloriesupplyperheadandlifeexpectancyatbirthinBangladeshwereonlythehalfofthoseinUSA.Anditsinfantmortalityratewas11timesgreater.(高低比较：多少倍)表格题常要进行量化对比,减除运算。①比较时，如数字较大且悬殊，用除法以倍数关系说明差别（twice/triple/three-fold/fourtimes）；②数字较小且相差不大，用减法以差值说明差别。表格主体段写作实践超模板写作例见P222例题9参考答案-2