学位英语写作专题讲解

学位英语写作专题讲解与练习孙韵雪主讲广州医学院护理学院2009.9.1学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪22020/1/12概述学位英语考试的短文写作要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇120字左右的文章，作文满分为15分。作文的形式主要分为提纲作文、图表作文和应用文等。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪32020/1/12*老师打分的原则“印象”—就作文的总体印象给出分数，而不是按照语言点的错误数目扣分策略：卷面整洁卷面布局（文章结构）开头、结尾、每段主题句句型丰富、词汇量大最大限度消灭“扎眼”的语言错误学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪42020/1/12时间安排（30分钟）审题（3-5分钟）写作（20分钟）检查语言错误（3-5分钟）提纲作文学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪62020/1/12例题Topic1:SavingMoney1.人们对于省钱看法不同2.省钱的好处。3.结论学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪72020/1/12Whenitcomestosavingmoney,people’sopinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplethinksavingmoneyisagoodhabitwhileotherpeoplebelieveusingtomorrow’smoneyisbetter.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪82020/1/12第一段点评段落的第一句是开篇句，同学们可以留意划线部分，Whenitcomesto这个句型用于引起话题。第二句导出作者的个人观点。学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪92020/1/12Savingmoneyisbetterthanusingtomorrow’smoneyforthefollowingtworeasons.Ontheonehand,savingmoneycanenableyoutoformagoodwayofspendingmoney.Youcanputaside,forexample,30%ofyoursalaryonyourpayday.Evenifyouspendalltherestofyoursalary,youstillhaveanamountofmoneyincaseofanyurgentneed.Ontheotherhand,itisriskytousetomorrow’smoney.Ifyouloseyourjobandrepaythemoneytothebank,youwillgetintoagreattrouble.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪102020/1/12第二段点评该段采用了常见的“原因分析”模版，但并非常见的三点原因陈述，而是采用了ontheonehand/ontheotherhand两点原因陈述的模式，引出两个截然不同的原因，这种模式重点凸显出两个原因的差异性及其同等重要性，建议同学们可以参考这样的模版。学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪112020/1/12Inshort,savingmoneyisawiseandsafewayoflife.Onlyifwecanspendmoneysensiblycanweliveourlifehappily.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪122020/1/12Topic2:HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy1.心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因2.分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因（可从失业、压力过重、缺少支持、缺乏人际关系等方面加以分析）3.你认为人们如何保持心理健康例题2学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪132020/1/12Whenitcomestohealth,alargenumberofpeoplemaymerelypayattentiontophysicalwell-beingandneglectpsychologicalhealth.However,withthedevelopmentofsociety,psychologicalhealthseemstoariseasoneofthecausesleadingtoallkindsofdiseases.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪142020/1/12Psychologicalproblemscanstemfromvariousreasonsandthefollowingaresometypicalones.Aboveall,pressurefromworkandlifemaybringagreatburdenonpeopleandenablespeopletodwellonnegativesocialissues.Anotherpossiblereasonisthatifonelackssomenecessarysocializing,lonelinessmayhoveraboutandaffectone’ssensibility.Lastly,thesocietyisinabsenceofaharmoniousatmosphereorsomekindofmutualtrust.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪152020/1/12Tokeeppsychologicalhealth,onehasto,ononehand,paysmoreheedtopositiveissuesanddevoteyourlifetimetosomeworthwhilemissions,and,ontheotherhand,takeasensibleviewofthenegativeissuesandtrytoadjustone’smoodproperly.Onlyinthiswaycaneveryoneenjoyalifewithmoresunshine.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪162020/1/12TheInternetSecurity1.目前网络日益普及同时安全问题令人担忧2网络的安全问题带来哪些后果3.你的看法练习1学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪172020/1/12RaisingPets1.当代社会养宠物已成为时尚；2.分析其原因；3.你的看法练习2段落组织学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪192020/1/12列举、因果、分类（过渡性词语）First,second,third,lastFirstly,secondly,thirdly,thelastbutnotleastOntheonehand,ontheotherhandOnereasonis…,anotherreasonis…Forexample,foranotherexample,besides/inaddition/what’smore/moreover/furthermoreForonething,foranother常用句型学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪212020/1/12不用说……Itgoeswithoutsayingthat……Needlesstosaythat……Itisobviousthat……学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪222020/1/12在…社会/年代，…扮演重要角色Inthisageofinformation,…playsanimportantrole.Intoday’sindustrialsociety,…isindispensabletolife.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪232020/1/12…很容易证明Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat……学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪242020/1/12人人知晓/我们有理由相信Thereisnodoubtthat……Wehavereasonstobelievethat……学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪252020/1/12开头Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat……Itisgenerallyacceptedthat……Asisvividlydepictedinthegraphics,thedemandofhousingsurged……Theabovegraphrevealsdramaticdeclineintheproductionof……学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪262020/1/12结尾Onlyinthiswaycanlaid-offworkerscompletelyshrugoffpovertyandregaintheirdignityinlife.（倒装）Inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconductivetoyourgraspingalargevocabulary.（强调句）应用文学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪282020/1/12应用文写作主要涉及“书信”1、投诉信/建议信2、道歉信3、邀请信4、申请信5、感谢信学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪292020/1/12感谢信1、告诉对方自己已经出院及目前情况；2、住院期间的想法和收获；3、表达感谢，邀请一起吃饭。例题1学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪302020/1/12DearPeterandJane,I’vejustbeenoutofhospitalforacoupleofdays.RightnowIamreallyfine,butwithoutyoursupportIwouldn’thavegotbettersosoon.Youknow,mytrafficaccidenthappenedbecauseIwastoostressed,preparingformyexams.Ilayinbedinhospitalfornearlyonemonth,andImissedtheexamseventually.WhatIwasthinkingwas,ifIhadstudiedhardearlier,notjustbeforetheexams,Iwouldn’thavehadthisterribleexperience.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪312020/1/12Anyway,Ilearnedalotfromit.BecauseIwasidleduringthedaysinhospital,Ihadtimetothinkaboutmylife.I’dneverrealizedhowimportantyourfriendshipwastome.Ican’tsayanymoretoshowmygratitudefortakingturnskeepingmecompany,andgettingmethroughthatbluetime.学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪322020/1/12NextFriday,mymotherwouldliketogivearecoverypartytothankmyfriends.Ireallywanttoseeyouthere.So,7o’clockatmyplace,Ok.Yours,LiMing学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪332020/1/12咨询信Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoMr.Nelson,theadmissionofficerofanAmericanUniversity.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1、介绍自己的教育和工作背景；2、咨询适合自己的硕士课程；3、咨询一些关于申请过程的具体问题（如学费、语言要求、住宿等）例题2学位英语写作专题讲解孙韵雪342020/1/12DearMr.NelsonI’mwritingt