2017年MBA作文(小作文讲解)

PracticalWriting大纲要求•小作文–应用文–100字（标点符号不计算在内）–信函、备忘录、通知和报告等–10分评分标准•9-10分•很好得完成了试题的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果–包含所有的内容–使用丰富的语法结构和词汇–语言自然流畅，语法错误极少–有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰–格式与语域恰当贴切英语（二）小作文年份考查形式主题2010感谢信（+邀请）感谢美国同事的款待+欢迎造访中国2011祝贺信（+建议）祝贺表弟/表妹考上大学+给予建议2012投诉信（+请求）对网店所购的电子词典给予投诉2013邀请信（+介绍）邀请同学参加义卖会+介绍活动细节2014请求信（+介绍）请求舍友给予生活建议+自我习惯介绍2015通知（+介绍）暑期下令营志愿者招募Structure1.称呼Salutation2.正文BodyofLetter(目的+内容+礼貌性收尾语)3.客套结束语ComplimentaryClosing4.署名SignatureFormat(缩进式）Dearxx,(salutation)Iamwritingto…(body)…Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,XX(signature)Format(齐头式）Dearxx,(salutation)Iamwritingto…(body)…Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,XX(signature)正文•Para.1目的•Para.2内容•Para.3礼貌结束语正文•Para.1:写作目的写作目的•1.建议信•Iamwritingto(expressmydeepestconcernabout)_________(负面现象，e.g.:Ourlibrary’sservice.）•Iamwritingto(provideyouwithsomesuggestionsabout)_______(中性现象e.g.howtogetpreparedfortheuncominguniversitylife.）写作目的•2.求职信•Iamwritingto(expressmystronginterestinthepositionof)________（职位e.g.H.R.Manager)advertisedinthelocalnewspaper.•3.辞职信•Iamwritingto(informyouofmydecisiontoresignfrommycurrentposition).写作目的•4.投诉信•Iamwritingto(makeacomplainttoyouabout)________（投诉对象e.g.thecomputerIboughtfromyourstore.)•5.道歉信•Iamwritingto(makemysincereapologytoyouformymistake).写作目的•6.祝贺信•Iamwritingto(expressmywarmestcongratulationstoyouuponyour)________（成就e.g.theadmissiontothepostgraduateschool.)•7.感谢信•Iamwritingto(expressmyhearfeltgratitudetoyouforyour____具体帮助e.g.warmreceptionduringmystayinAmerica).写作目的•8.邀请信•Iamwritingto(cordiallyinviteyouto)________（活动e.g.OurAnnualConference)•9.推荐信•Iamwritingto(recommendtoyou____推荐对象e.g.amovie“SleeplessSeattle”).写作目的•10.请求信•Iamwritingto(askyouforsomehelpwith)________（帮助的事情e.g.MyEnglishStudy)写作目的•Iamwritingthisletter/Emailto…•Thisletterismeantto…•ThisEmailisintendedto…•IamwritingthisletteronbehalfofthePostgraduates’Associationto…正文•Para.2具体内容•总分式：–1句是总述句–2，3，4是一个意群，对1进行分述。•1.Myqualificationsforthepositionareasfollows.2.Tobeginwith,Ihaveprovedtobeastraight-Astudentinthepastfouracademicyears,awardedasuccessionofscholarship.3.Inaddition,myrichexperienceasapart-timeteacherhaslaidasolidfoundationfortheworkhere.4.Finally,Ihavenotonlyacheerfulpersonalitybutgoodteamworkaswell.•1.TheproblemsIhavefoundareasfollows.2.Tobeginwith,itoftenbreaksdownfornoreason,whichgivesmuchinconvenienceandtroubletome.3.Inaddition,itsscreeniscoveredwithafewscratches.4.Finally,someofthekeysonthekeyboardfailtoworkwell.正文•Para.3礼貌结束语写作目的•1.Thanksalotforyourattentiontotheletter.•2.Ishallappreciateitalotifyoucould___(givemeanopportunitytotakeaninterview).•3.Wishyouallthebest!•4.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.通知•本质：信函•上级对下级，组织对成员，公司对员工•公开信•省略信函礼貌性称呼语和结束语通知•格式–标题：主题词或Notice–正文：三段式结构–落款：右下角（根据指令撰写）–时间：右上角（若试题没有提供，可忽略）通知•Directions:youaresupposedtowriteforthePostgraduates’Associationanoticetorecruitvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization.Thenoticeshouldincludethebasicqualificationsforapplicantsandotherinformationwhichyouthinkisrelevant.•Youshouldwriteabout100wordsontheANSWERSHEET.•Donotsignyourownnameattheendofthenotice.Use“Postgraduates’Association”instead.通知•Para.1介绍通知的缘由和主题•Para.2志愿者应具备诸多条件–具体条件1（教育背景）–具体条件2（职业精神、性情和年龄）–具体条件3（有经验者优先）•Para.3–报名时间和地点–欢迎报名参加•VolunteersWanted•Toimprovethestudents’abilityandenrichthecampuslife,thePostgraduates’Associationisrecruitingvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization.•Thebasicqualificationsforapplicantsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,applicants’educationalbackgroundshouldbeinlinewiththisoccasion.Inaddition,theymusthaveastrongprofessionalspiritandcheerfulpersonalityandbeagedunder35.Lastly,thestudentswithrelevantworkingexperienceshallbepreferred.•Thosewhoarekeenonthisactivitymaysignupwiththeirmonitorsbeforethenextweekend.Everybodyiswelcometojoinit.•Postgraduates’Association•2020/1/1330Memo•Memorandum---atthetopcenterofthepaper(canbeomitted)•TO:KellyAnderson,PersonnelManager(receiver)•From:Obama,ManagerAssistant(sender)•Date:December20,2015(bettertowritethefullnameofthemonth)•Subject:Reasonsofdecreasingsales(briefandclear)BodyUseconversationaltone:ordinarywords,first-personpronounsBebriefHavesingletopic2020/1/1331MemoTo:Tom,clerkFrom:Alice,theHumanResourcesManagerDate:December20,2015Subject:PlansfortheTeamBuildingEventInordertoimprovetherelationshipswiththeTeam-plus,weareplanningtoarrangeateambuildingeventwiththem,whichwilllast3days.Therearetensales-staffintheTeam-plus.Therefore,weshouldprepareitwellbeforetheteambuildingeventstarts.Pleasecontactwiththeprovider,Jimwhoisthesalesmanagerofthecompanyassoonaspossible.Ifitispossible,youcanmaketheteambuildingeventatthenextweekendsoritcanbearrangedatthenextweekendsiftheweatherisnotwell.Sample•Directions:•Supposeyouhavefoundsomethingwrongwiththeelectronicdictionarythatyouboughtfromanonlinestoretheotherday,Writeanemailtothecustomerservicecenterto•1)makeacomplaintand•2)demandapromptsolution.•Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSERESHEET2•Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.UseZhangWeiinstead.•Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)•DearMr.Manager,•Ia